ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14 - Page 7

Posted: 10 years ago
heyt guyzz wassup ?? 😉
im so so so happy by the responce thnk u so much for ur support 👍🏼
so here i am with chapter 6 😃


precap -uv taking a step forwad towards her ..she was taking a step back 
step forward by him a step back by her 
this continue until she touched the wall 
uv - tv nhi lekin hone wali biwi toh ho na ..nd winks 
she tries to go she turns left but he put his left hand on wall she turns right but he again put his hand on wall 
now she was struck between the wall and mr great halkat veda 
m- hato udayveer lemme go 
uv - kyu kya hua ??? dar hain ki mere pass aaogi toh mere charm ko resist nhi kar paogi 
m - oh hello mr udayveer ...charm aur voh bhi tumhara ??? rehne do hun ...
uv- acha toh mere taraf kyu nhi dekh rhi 
manyata was looking all around except udayveer and he was nowhere except manyata 
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now situation was such that manyata was caught between the wall and udayveer 
m closes her eyes and opens nd look at uv with anger 
m - tumhe lagta hain shadi ek mazak hain huh ??? tum kyu nhi samaj rhe shadi ke bad hume ek sath rehna hoga EK SATH EK ROOM MEIN 😳 ( she says last 5 words with force ) aur tum yaha mazak kar rhe ho ???
uv with a smirk - ohoo miss han nhi toh ...tum tension mat lo ek room share karne ki naubat ( situation ) nhi hogi ...
m- huh ?? kyu ??? wait a min tum shadi ke liye no karne wale ho haina ???  she says with excitement 
uv - yahi toh bat hain kash mein na keh pata lekin mere dad ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta huh aur rahi bat ROOM SHARE ( he says in dramatic was with smirk ) ki toh usske liye toh tum zinda hi nhi hogi 
m - acha kyu ?? main kyu zinda nhi hogi ??? 😒
uv - kyuki aaj subha se tumne kuch nhi khaya aur 1 din kuch aur nhi khaogi toh tum mar hi jaogi na ...HAN NHI TOH 😉
m - acha bachu yeh toh tum samajna mat ki main tumhe shanti se zindagi jeene dungi kyuki kya hain na tumne mujhe bohot pareshan kiya hain ..ab meri bari hain ...jis tarah tumhari vajah se mujhe nimonia ( disease ) hua tha ussi tarah tumse shadi karke tumhe pareshan kar dungi han nhi toh 

they both looked at each other and FLASHBACK 

DIRECTOR - UV AND M ITS THE LAST AND THE FINAL SHOT UV U HAVE TO CARRY M IN UR ARMS TILL THAT LAKE IS THAT OK ?? 
uv - perfect with a smirk 😉
he picked m in his arms both were looking at each other with anger and frustation 
they reached the lake 
director - and cut 
but uv was not leaving her m widens her eyes and says - choro mujhe ...arey ek bar samaj nhi ata i said leave me choro mujhe she was strugling to get off him but he was not leaving her and suddenly  BAM 
she was looking at him with anger ...she was burning with anger everyone there ( crew members ) ran towards her 
uv - kya tumne hi toh kaha tha LEAVE ME LEAVE ME ( in dramatic way ) 
director - arey uskey kehna ka yeh matlab nhi tha ki usse lake mein faik ( throw ) do ...aur upar se water ka temprature bhi negative mein hain ...take her to her vanity ( actors have theri personal vanity van where they get ready) and make sure she is alright 
after 2 hours 
director came near uv and say - uv hume shooting 2-3 days ke liye cancel karni hogi 
uv - kyu 
director - kyuki m ko bohot tez fever ho gaya hain ...and im afraid ki usse viral na ho jaye ... 
uv - ok watever 
after a week .,,,
director - uv i think ki m ko 1 month full rest chahiye so shooting 1 month ke bad continue hogi 
uv - sir kab tak yeh sab chalta rahega 
director - jab tak tum yeh sab nhi rok dete ...tumhari vajah se hi bechari ko nimonia ho gaya hain ...i don't know tum dono ko kya problem hain ek dusrey se ?? jab dekho ladte rehte ho ...abhinav aur manyata ko dekho they are like besties ...infact look at u and abhi ( abhinav's nick name ) u both are also very good frnds lekin tum aur m ko pta nhi kya hua ??? ek bat samaj lo bunny agar iss industry mein success chahiye toh kabhi bhi controversies mein mat padna ...aur jitne zada frnds banaoge utna acha hoga ...
and he leaves ********************************** FLASHBACK ENDS 

m - isiliye dekhna tumhe kitna pareshan karungi han nhi toh ...ab hato mere rastey se 
uv with a smirk leaves her path and she storms out of the room 
uv was happy that he was succeded in his plan to feed manyata her food 
manyata goes to hall and say - maa mujhe khana do jaldi bohot bhukh lagi hain ...jaldi do she says jumping 
k - chalo ...
they both were sitting on dining table when uv came there - aunty hume bhi bhookh lagi hain hume bhi khana mil sakta hain ??? 
k - are uv beta ismein puchna wali konsi bat hain ... 
she serves him food too 
and she wishpers thank you 
uv replied in low tone  -  ismein thnk you bolne ki koi zaroorat nhi hain ..m ab humari bhi zimedari hain ...he didn't know why he said the last line 
komal was happy to see uv caring for m 

suddenly  
HEY GUYZZ WASUP '????? 
everyone turned around to see who was that 
m was so happy she shouted and ran towards her - JAY !!!!!!!
she hugged her with all her mighty 
omg jay thnk god ur back ...u know i missed u so much !!!she said in one go 
i missed u too di !!! jay answered 
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JAYNANDANI CHOPRA (jay ) --- COUSIN OF MANYATA...HER PARENTS ARE NO MORE SO SHE LIVES WITH BRIJ AND KOMAL SHE CALLS THEM CHACHU AND CHACHI ...SHE IS A SUCCESSFUL DOCTOR 
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ACHANAK SE BRIJ CAME THERE 
arey jay aap ?? kab ayi aur kaisi hain aap 
jay goes near him and says - im good app kaise hain 
brij - kaise lag rhe hain ??? 
jay - ekdum handsome 
they both laughed and brij gave her a side hug 
arey hum toh bholl hi gaye the ki hum yaha kyu aye hain brij said 
m - kyu ?? 
brij - kal sham maine aur giri ne party organise ki hain for vijay and unnati's engagement announcement 
jay - wat the hell vijay bhai ki shadi tey ho gayi aur kissi ne hume batana zaroori bhi nhi samjha 
m - jay long story bad mein bataungi but party ...i need to go shopping 
jay - me too 
meanwhile uday also came and stand beside m jay notices him and say 
OMG OMG OMG UDAYVEER KAPOOR ...IM UR BIGGEST FAN EVER ...CAN I GET A AUTOGRAPH 
UV LOOKED AT HER FROM BOTTOM TO TOP AS IF HE IS SCANNING HER 
m - jay stop behaving like a kid ...teri behen itni badi star hain fir bhi isse dekhkar itna childish behaviour ?? 
jay - offo di ...apki bat alag hain 
m - had hain ??? 
uv - so ur ?? 
jay - jaynandani ...u can call me jay 
uv - okay so jay thnk u so much ...im delighted to have a fan like u ...and autograph ki koi zaroorat nhi hain ...ab toh hum milte rahenge 
jay - matlab ??? 
uv - matlab apke vijay bhai ki shadi humari badi behen unnati se tey hui hain 
jay - omg ...wow its great ...anyways di lets go for shopping 
m - sure ...
brij - arey beta aap dono apne sath uv ...un ...aur vijay ko bhi le jayiye 
m - kyu dad ??? she said in irritating tone 
brij - kyu matlab kya ...app dono ko bhi company mil jayegi aur sab ek sath thoda time bhi spend kar loge ??? wat say jay ?? 
jay lookes at uv and say - definately 
m - ok watever 
brij  told driver to arrange car for all of them 
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all were sitting in hall 
suddenly m's phone rang but it was kept beside uv 
he saw her phone nd saw the name flashing abi ...for a sec he thought to tell m but the next sec he cut the phone 
again abhi call again he cuts the phone ...one more time the same thing happened 
when phone rang for 4th time m saw it and quickly picked up the phone and excuses her from there and goes in the corner of the hall 
uv was looking at her continously 
m was talking to abhi freely ...she was laughing so hardly ...uv again saw the happy child like m 
and unknowingly a smile came to his face but the very next minute it was brushed off 
thinking that m was talking to abhi like this ...but he brushed away all the thoughts and lookes at manyata who was looking so happy talking to abhinav ...uv was happy atleast she is back the old manyata is back ...just then m came and say - dad abhi is in the town so if u allow can we take abhi along with us ??? 
brij - sure m ...and also invite him for dinner tonight 
m - cool ...

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all were leaving 
uv opened the front gate and say - jay if u don't mind u can sit with me in the front ??? and he proceds his hand towards jay 
jay happily agrees and sit in front with uv 
and m was sitting at the back all alone 
vb and un will directly meet them in mall 
m - uv we have to take abhi also with us he will be in hotel sea side 
uv - ok 

they reached hotel sea side m comes out of the car and hugs abhi tightly 
uv was looking at them but was not happy don't know why but he was not happy 
m broke the hug and abi an m sat together at the back 
after sitting inside abhi - yo uv bro how were u ?? 
uv - im cool and how r u 
abhi - as usual rocking !!!...oh hey jay long time huh ?? 
jay - seriously ...happy to see u again !!!! 
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to be continued 
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PRECAP - SHOPPING ...MASTI ...

LOVE ANU 😉
  
Edited by anu1299 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
oh my kahise toh jalne ki booh aarahi hai!!
oh wait doesn't it smell like bunny???
hehehhehhehe awesome Anu!!
update soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by MAHI1198


oh my kahise toh jalne ki booh aarahi hai!!
oh wait doesn't it smell like bunny???
hehehhehhehe awesome Anu!!
update soon
mujhe bhi jalne wali booh aa rhi hain ...lol
shayad bunny hi hain ?? btw thnk u soo much ...ya i'll update soon
Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear
thanks for the pm
do continue more often
as i like this ss a lot
awn the man handeler prince
loved the flashback scene
aha jealous uday is super cute uday
i want more of jealous uday hahha
hugzz
Edited by annabh - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Hey... Anu...
The update was awesome...
I am really happy...
That you made such a long update...
Ahh... Uday is jealous...
And I so like it...
Aww.. J is such a big fan of Uday...
Uday was trying to make Manyata jealous...
But khud hi jal gaya...
I am waiting for the next update...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...
Posted: 10 years ago
Hey! anu  i'm new hear,
 read  all 6 updates
 its really awesome loved it to the core😃
 loved the character of uday & manyata
& thanks  for the pm
 update soon,  eagerly waiting to read further



Edited by Rashmi_pari - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
wooww,udayy is sucesfull in feeding manayta,manveer dat clse scnes were so rmnticc!!!!!!!😊😊
Posted: 10 years ago
love it and j as doctor 
update soon
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome loved it so much that little scene of manveer and the flashback scene was lovely and wow j a doctor interesting please update soon and thanks for the pm and really sorry for the late reply... now coming to the pm about u stopping the ff please dont stop please continue for those readers who r still interested please 
Posted: 10 years ago
hey guyzz im so so sorry ...i said that i will be stoping the ff 😭
but now its final that i will not stop it and will continue it ...😕
thanxx to preya_radev , ayesha.behroz , huma12 and fireroad99 
thnk u so much guyzz for motivating me to continue this ff ...ur really nice and love u all 🤗❤️
well here is chapter 7 of 

RECAP - they reached hotel sea side m comes out of the car and hugs abhi tightly 
uv was looking at them but was not happy don't know why but he was not happy 
m broke the hug and abi an m sat together at the back 
after sitting inside abhi - yo uv bro how were u ?? 
uv - im cool and how r u 
abhi - as usual rocking !!!...oh hey jay long time huh ?? 
jay - seriously ...happy to see u again !!!! 
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uv - so u both know each other ?? 
jay - ya ...abhi is a good frnd...
uv - but how come u know each other ?? 
jay - arey abhi use to visit home often ...he is best frnd of di 
abhi gave a small cute smile 
while uv thought ( he use to visit home often ??? and best frnd of manyata ?? uday kya soch rha hain yrr ?? toh kya hua agar yeh m ka best frnd hain toh ...ek ladka aur ek ladki best frnds ho sakte hain ) 
he was driving while his ears was behind on m and abhi's conversation 
they both were talking so freely sometimes abhi use to pull m's cheeks 
sometimes m use to punch abhi's arm ...but uv was not at all comfertable with all that so uv started talking to jay about her work and all 
uv - so jay...single or any bf ??
at this time m stoped talking and started listening their talk 
jay - no im very much single and says flirtingly ...but im ready to mingle 
m 's pov ( had hain ?? meri behen hote hue uv se flirt kar rhi hain ??par isse thodi na pta hain ki uv is my fianc ...nd agar flirt kar bhi rahi hain toh kar do ...mujhe konsa fark pad rha hain ??? han nhi toh ) end of pov 
soon they reached mall 
they all were going inside when media surrounded them 
reporter 1 - manyata aur udayveer ek sath ?? iska yeh matlab hain ki aap dono ki sari problems khatam ho gayi hain 
reporter 2 - ya fir ...manyata apne rumored boyfrnd abhinav ke sath ayi hain ...aur udayveer jaynandani ke sath ???
reporter 3 - jaynandani ...aapne last interview jab aapka hospital ka enogration hua tha tab kaha tha u want to be single and want to work hard par kya uv ke charm ko aap resist nhi kar payi ???
all 4 were trying to go in 
uv shouts - guards guards 
all the guards come and surround them and they all go inside 
m - uff this media people ek bar mein inhe samaj nhi ata kya that im not dating abhi ???
abhi - let  it be ...come lets go 
m - uv vijay bhai and unnati ??? 
uv - di will just be here in a short while and vijay bhai will also be joining very soon 
m - k 
just then uv gets a call and he excuses him from there 
jay - wow that dress is so beautiful ...
she goes from there to that shop and abhi follows her while m was alone there she was looking around when she spotted someone 
she was none other than unnati 
manyata goes near her and say - hi unnati how r u ??
un - hey manyata im good what about u ?? 
m - im fine too 
un - where is everyone ?? 
m - umm ...uv got a call so he is recieving that call and jay and abhi has left for shoping leaving me all alone asap ...
un - don't worry im there na lets go together 
m - sure 
they were going when m said - so excited ?? for tomorrow 
un - actually nervous ...
m - no need to be nervous ..everything will be fine ...waise what should i call u ??? unnati bhabhi ?? 
un - u can call me that for whole life but till my marriage call me di 
m - sure...well we don't know each other very well tomorrow u'll be engaged to my brother ...so lets discover about each other's likes and dislikes ...and all that stuff 
they both were busy talking and slecting dresses for each other 
they became really good frnds ( i need to show this because un will be cupid for manveer so i need to show chemestry between un and m ) 
they were coming out of the shop when m say vijay bhai 
m - di ...vijay bhai has arrived ...
un - kaha hain ??? she started looking everwhere 
m teasingly - seems someone is being desprate for meeting someone ?? 
un smiling shyly - its nothing like that 
then they both goes where vb was standing 
m - finally vb aapko time mil hi gaya ...itne bhi kya busy they ki apni engagement ki shoping ka time nhi nikal paye han ?? 
vb - shant m bhai shant ...ab mein aa gaya hun na ...
m - age gaye toh kya ??? vb aap na bohot change ho gaye ho jabse apne dad ka buisness sambhala hain ...yad hain pehle hum dono bhai milke kitna maza karte they ...kya din they voh ..
at the time uv ...jay and abhi also joined them 
vb didn't noticed un 
vb - don't worry m bhai ...ab aapka v bhai aa gaya hain ..ab hum dekhte hain humara bhai kaise bore hota hain aur aapko toh pta hain ki hum entertainment hain ...i tell you 
uv - mujhe laga tha ki m ladki hain par yaha toh kuch aur hi lag rha hain do bhaiyo ka milan ??? 
m - toh tumhe kya problem hain han ??? yeh mere bhai hain yeh mujhe jo chahe bula sakte hain 
jay realising that there will be a fight very soon as m is very serious about vb and her relation so she thought to change the topic 
jay - hey vijay bhai ...how were u ?? 
vb didn't listened as he was busy staring at un and un busy staring at vjiay
jay and m looked each other with naughty smile
jay shaked vb - han ...kya hua ...are jay bhai ...kaise ho aap 
jay - mast ...
m - agar batey ho gayi toh lets continue shopping ?? 
jay - ya sure 
now every one together were shoping 
vb - hi un 
un - hey vijay 
vb - how ...r u 
un- good ...acha tell me which lehenga is nice red one or pink one 
vb - i think pink one will be nice 
there m was confused that what to buy 
just then abhi came next to her and say - try this one ??
he gave her a white lenhenga with blue working on it 
she took it and went to try it 
uv witnessed the whole thing and was not comfortable with it that abhi was slecting dress for m 
m came out wearing the lehenga 
abhi - wow m ur looking like a princess in white colour ...
uv - no i think m should try this one ...he was having a lehenga of black colour in his hands ...
abhi - par uv dekh na m white pehengi toh pari lagegi ...
uv - but look at her she is already so fair ...no i think wit her skin and complection black will be good 
m - guyzz stop fighting ...its my choice i'll slect it 
uv left the dress there in anger and went near jay to help her maybe to jealous manyata 
all of a sudden uv saw m handing over the lehenga to the staff but it was the one which abhi slected he didn't felt good that she chose abhi over him ..
he came out from that shop 
just after 5 minutes everyone else also came out 
jay - now its time for a movie 
m - ya sure issaq tera has just released so lets go and watch that
vb- m bhai we r not going for your movie and niether for uv's movie lets go a watch an action movie
jay - yuck !!!! no action movie but ya lets go and watch a thriller movie ..
m - no we r not going for any scary movie 
jay - aww i just forgot that di is afraid for ghosts like small kids henna ?? 
vb - jay bhai hum bhi koi thriller movie dekhne nhi ja rhe 
jay - we r going and thats final 
un - yeah 
m - di aap bhi ??? 
un - i don't know anything and waise bhi majority wins so now we all r going for a thriller movie 
all of them forcefully took m and vijay with them 
m was sitting in between of vb and abhi 
un was sitting beside vb and uv was sitting beside abhi and jay beside uv 
vb - hey bhagwan mujhe bacha lena in bhotoh se ( ghosts) m bhai darna mat aapka vijay bhai aapke sath hain !!! ...he said in hesitating tone
m - vijay bhai plzz pareshan mat kijiye ek toh pehle se hi dare hue hain aur upar se aap humare side mein baithe hue hain ...
un - don't worry vijay ...don't be afraid 
vb - unnati plzz humare side mein hi rehna ...
and then the movie started ...
vb and m was watching the movie as if ghosts were all around them 
when all of a sudden a very scary part came and m burried her head in abhi's chest only then uv saw that...
again after 10 mins very scary part was shown and agin m burried her head but after one minute she was getting goosebumps all over her body 
she whispered uday ?? 
uv smiled a bit - yes ...manyata ?? 
m looked above and was shocked to see uv in place of abhi 
m - uday tum yaha abhi kaha hain ?? 
uv - abhi said that he wants to enjoy the movie but because of u he is not able to concentrate so i swaped the seats ...
m - don't u want to concentrate on movie 
uv - but im fine like this ...just then he thought why did he said this ...
manyata and uv were having eyecontact ..but this time it was a beautiful and sweet eyelock ...
 m - uday kya main aise hi reh sakti hun ?? 
uv - sure 
m again burried her face in his chest 
but uv was geting distracted because of m ...her breath was caressing his neck very softly 
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jay - m di...manyata dii ??? udayveer ??? wake up now plzzz movie is over ...wake up 
vijay shook m and uv 
m - kya hua ...still sleepy 
jay - utho di kab se soo rhi ho 
m rubbing her eyes looked around in confusion ...and then she remembered she buried her face in uday's chest and soon she fall asleep ...in his embarace 
just then uv also woke up slowly as he opened his eyes he saw m ...unknowingly a smile came to his face ...
jay - u guyzz slept in between of the movie han ?? 
uv remembered how he was being distracted by manyata...but soon he also fall asleep...
m - voh...voh jay 
uv - kuch nhi jay ...m was getting scared so she slept and i was really tired because of work so i also slept ...
while un and vb was having naughty smile of their faces
abhi was hell confused that why were they sleeping embaracing each other ?? 
vb - come on lets go dad is calling for last 1 hour ...
m - ok lets go she gets up but again she falls on uday 
they both looked each other with confusion
they both looked down nd saw m's chain was interwined with uday's button she tried to open the lock but it was not opening 
uday also tried but all went in vain 
suddenly uday pulled the chain so hard that it broked off 
m was so shocked - uday ...tumne meri favourite chain tod di ?? 
uv - sorry woh alag hi nhi ho rhi thi ...
m gets up and in ager she left 
all came out of the multiplex but m was not there 
vb called m - m bhai kaha hain aap 
m still in angry tone - ghar jaa rhe hain 
vb - par akele kaise ??
m- jaise jate hain vaise ...
vb- acha theek hain gussa mat kijiye 
m - watever and hunged up the phone 
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morning 8pm 
manyata woke up 
gets fresh and go out there were decoraters all over the house was being decorated for unnati and vijay's engagement 
manyata goes to vijay's room and without knocking went inside 
but he was not there ...she heard voice of shower from washroom 
so she thought of waiting for him untill he comes out 
suddenly m's gaze fell on vb's mobile and she remembered how yesterday vb was secretly clicking un's pic when she was trying up the dresses 
she picked up his phone and started looking at the pics with naughty smile ...
vb was out till then - yeh humare phone ke sath kya kar rhi hain aap ???
m showed him his phone whoch were flashing un's pic - ab bolo kya bol rhe the vijay bhai ...socho agar meine yeh pics unnati ko dikha di toh ??? kya sochegi voh ??? 
vb - give me back my phone now warna...warna 
m - warna kya han vijay bhai 
vb - varna hum dad aur giri uncle ko aapki aur uv ki video footage dikha denge jo humne kal rat record ki jab aap dono ek dusri ki bahon mein so rhe the aur socho yeh dekh kar giri uncle kya sochenge ...
m - sochenge toh tab na jab dekhenge ...vijay bhai ur such a dhakkan...
and she starts running all over his room 
and vb was running behind m ...
m goes out of room and was running in whole house 
brij - subha hui nhi ki dono ki ladai shuru ho gayi 
komal - aree koi bat nhi dekhiye na kitne dino bad dono itne khush hain ...brij - manyata ..vijay taiyar ho jayiye giri un aur uv ate hi honge ...
m while running only says - kyu ...engagement toh sham mein hain na 
brij - han lekin voh log sham tak yahi rahenge aur yaha hi taiyar honge function ke liye ...
m - ane toh do uss halkat vede yede ko kal rat mera favourite chain tod di thi na aaj usse hi todd dungi han nhi toh ...
and then she rans out in garden ...and vb after her 
vb- m bhai ruko ...
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to be continued ...
precap - engagement party nd fun ...
plzz do like and cmmnt if u liked it and a request to all silent readers plzz if u like atleast hit a like button  and sorry for any spelling mistake 

love anu 
Edited by anu1299 - 10 years ago

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