Posted: 21 May 2005 at 6:48am | IP Logged
inspired by some talented writers, i decided to try to write my own fan
fiction....its my first time writing so pls comment... i m bad at
writing hindi dialogues as i never really learnt hindi....i cannot
write romance very well either...so sorry guys
Aniway here it goes:
Angad tells Kripa not to mention the fact that she is in love with him [ not he's in love with her] to anyone just yet
Kripa is confused, she questions his intentions
Angad says that if his mother is already very annoyed that Kripa's and
Prithvi's engagement does not take place and if she finds out about
this she is going to become hysterical as she doesn't have a very high
regard for Kripa. And giving people one shock after the other may not
be very nice…
Kripa agrees reluctantly. She hugs Angad once more before returning to
the Khanna's house... Damini, Prithvi and Mishti are leaving just as
Kripa enters. Prithvi smiles at Kripa but Mishti behaves as if Kripa is
invisible… Kripa is hurt by this but does not show her feelings.
Kripa is greeted with very unfriendly response as she enters the house.
Kripa's mother [is her name gayathrie or what?] asks kripa where she
was but kripa does not wish to answer. Dadi says it ok ' agar tum humko
abhi kuch batana nehi chati to teek hai. Jab tum humse bat karna chati
ho, tab hum sunainge… Tab tak koi tumse saval nehi poochega'. Kripa
feels better and thanks Dadi. Although Kripa's parents are not very
happy about this they agree to this as they respect Dadi and her
Naina is evidently very upset about this and shows her feelings very
obviously although she doesn't say anything blatantly as Dadi is there.
The next day, Kripa and Angad have recording. Angad picks Kripa up and
they go together. During the recording, they both look at each very
romantically as they sing a romantic song [ I suck at writing romance,
anyone who wants to write romance for me is kindly welcomed].
After their recording, Angad brings Kripa for a cup of coffee at a
popular coffee joint nearby. Angad and Kripa are holding hands as they
enter and Kripa's head resting against Angad's arm. They buy their
coffee and are drinking while talking happily ang laughing. Mishti who
is at the same coffee joint with her friend for some work sees this and
is extremely shocked.
' In dono ki dosti kab se hui? Kripa mere Angad ke saat itni close kyon
behave kar rahi hai?' Mishti's mind is clouded with thoughts and she
comes to a decision that zaroor koi gadbad hai.
pls comment....changes to the story and continuation by other people is
kindly welcome and wanted cause i am sure u guys will be able to do a