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Posted: 10 years ago

Some where some one Part 1

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Pt4:pg20
Dev;the bride groom sat near the panditji who recited mantras.

Geet was brought to the mandap.
Panditji handed over the garlands to them.
Geet stood before Dev to let him marry her.She was blushing.
Her innocent smile pricked his heart.

Flash back'

Dev was surprised to meet his best friend Meera after a long time.

M:Dev'why are you not looking happy?

D:Nothing like that Meera.

M:No Dev.I can understand each and every change in you.

D:You are my friend and you understand everything in me.But why my wife Naintara is not able to see the change in me?

Meera was silent.

D:Meera'you are right.My guilt is killing me.Then how can I be happy?

M:Dev'?

D:I and Naintara led a luxurious life and now we are in debt.Naintara found out a solution to get rid of the financial crisis.To marry a rich innocent village girl and get her wealth.Then ditch her cruelly.

Meera was shocked.

D:My marriage is fixed with an innocent eighteen year old girl named Geet.

Meera was shocked.Suddenly her fingers fell on his cheek harshly.Dev was shocked.

M:How dare you Dev?How could you change like this?You are brute.How can you be so cruel to an eighteen year old girl?

Dev was upset.

Meera burst out.

"Do you know Dev?I used to love you,but I hid my love when you fell for Naintara.I cried silently for losing you.

Dev was shocked.

D:What?You'you love me?

M:Yes Dev,I used to love you.But now I hate you.Because you cheated a poor girl.Now I am happy that I did'nt marry you.

D:Meera'.I'I'.I regret'I repent'

M:You can't be happy because no one can be happy after cheating a girl.If you really regret,go and correct your mistake.Stop the wedding.Don't marry her.But now you may be scared of how that girl's family members will react.Right?You coward!You can't change.I am ashamed to have a friend like you.I hate myself for loving you.

Dev was very upset.

M:I am leaving.I regret visiting you.

Meera left.Dev was too guilty to stop Meera.

Dev thought:But I am happy that you visited me.Your visit opened my eyes.Now I will correct my mistake.I will not spoil that innocent girl's life.


Present'

Dev:Sorry,I can't marry Geet.

Geet and her family members were shattered.

Naintara,Dev's mother Pammy and sister Kamya were shocked.

Naintara thought:What is this Dev upto?He spoiled our plan.

Geet's Daarji:How could you do this to our daughter?

Geet was crying.

D:I am sorry.If marry Geet the whole life she will cry.If I refuse to marry her,her tears will be temporary.

They were confused.

D:I am a married man.

He pulled Naintara towards him:She is not my sister in law,she is my wife.

They were shocked again.

D:Marrying Geet was only to get money.But I realized my mistake.I can't do such a big sin.That's why I refused to marry her.

Brij roared:Heyyy'

He began to attack Dev.

Daarji:Stop it.

B:How can I?This fellow fooled us.

Mohindar cried:Tell me,who will marry my daughter whose wedding got cancelled?

Geet was weeping along with Rano.

Suddenly they heard a voice from behind:I will marry Geet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice story I hope it Mann please update soon
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nice start

dev stopped the marriage
may be its maan
continue soon

 

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nice start
so dev didn't marry geet but whose that person hope it will be maan
continue soon
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simply brilliant.loved it;
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start hope maan is the one



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Beautiful starting dear
dev realized his mistake and now came our hero 😊
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loved the story
nice part
i hope maan ho
waiting for next
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superb start, liked dev he didnt marry geet and told the truth that he is a married man. And nt's plan floped. Love meera, because of her dev changed his mind to tell the truth. Hope now he understands meera's love and he will get his true love. And who is that man at the end, is it maan?? Continue soon Buddy 
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hi congrats on teh new SS! Fab intense update! Well written! update soon n do pm!