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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
hi guys,... m going 2 write an ff on radev, giving a prologue... if u like it i will continue... otherwise not... plz give comments...


              Ek bahut bada college tha jisme bahut saare bache padhte the. Wahan ek ladki padhti thi RADHIKA. Thodi si chulbuli par sabki bahut achi saheli thi. Uske kai dost the jaise- KHUSHI,ANANYA,ROLI,ARCHANA aur PURVI. Humare saath ek ladka padhta tha-DEV. Wo Radhika ko bahut pasand tha. Wo tha to hamare liye joking lekin Radhika ke liye handsome aur dashing. Waise to Dev k saath saath aur b kai saare ladke us par lattu the par Radhika Dev par marti thi. Dev-Radhika k affair k baare me janne k baad saare ladkon ne uska picha chod diya par VIKRAM, wo chup rehne wallon mese nahi tha. Usne than li thi k Radhika ko hasil kar k rahega. School khatam hua, hum sab college me aaye. College me Vikram hamesha Radhika k piche piche ghumta rehta tha.
   Ek din Library mein:
Radhika:Tu chahata kya hai Vikram? 
Vikram:Tujhe.
    :Tu achi tarah janta hai k main Dev se pyar karti hoon phir b tu mujhe pana chahta hai?
    :Haan tune Dev k pyar ki toh kadar ki lekin mere pyar ki nahi.Tu kuch b bol Radhika sirf Vikram ki hai.
Piche se Dev:Radhika Sirf Dev ki hai.[pass aa kar]maine tujhe kitni bar samjaya hai Vikram k Radhika ka picha chod de.
Vikram:Tu mere mamaji ka bete hai Dev warna...
Dev:Warna kya?Waise b kaun sa bhaichara nibhaya hai tune?Yeh jante hue b me Radhika se pyar karta hoon or wo b mujhe chahti hai,tu use pana chahta hai?
   :Maine nahi nibhaya kyunki tune aaj tak bhai hone ka farz nahi nibhaya.Mere liye tu apne pyar ki kurbani tak nahi de sakta?
   :Main Radhika ko paane ki kosis kabhi nahi karta, na hi usse apne pyar ka izhaar karta Agar tu sahi insaan hota toh.
Radhika:Hume alag karna itna assaan nahi.
Dev:Lekin agar tujhe lagta hai tu aisa kar sakti hai to carry on.
Dono:All the best.


this much... if somebody want translation then plz telll...
hope u like it...

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RadhikaMishra13

hi guys,... m going 2 write an ff on radev, giving a prologue... if u like it i will continue... otherwise not... plz give comments...


              Ek bahut bada college tha jisme bahut saare bache padhte the. Wahan ek ladki padhti thi RADHIKA. Thodi si chulbuli par sabki bahut achi saheli thi. Uske kai dost the jaise- KHUSHI,ANANYA,ROLI,ARCHANA aur PURVI. Humare saath ek ladka padhta tha-DEV. Wo Radhika ko bahut pasand tha. Wo tha to hamare liye joking lekin Radhika ke liye handsome aur dashing. Waise to Dev k saath saath aur b kai saare ladke us par lattu the par Radhika Dev par marti thi. Dev-Radhika k affair k baare me janne k baad saare ladkon ne uska picha chod diya par VIKRAM, wo chup rehne wallon mese nahi tha. Usne than li thi k Radhika ko hasil kar k rahega. School khatam hua, hum sab college me aaye. College me Vikram hamesha Radhika k piche piche ghumta rehta tha.
   Ek din Library mein:
Radhika:Tu chahata kya hai Vikram? 
Vikram:Tujhe.
    :Tu achi tarah janta hai k main Dev se pyar karti hoon phir b tu mujhe pana chahta hai?
    :Haan tune Dev k pyar ki toh kadar ki lekin mere pyar ki nahi.Tu kuch b bol Radhika sirf Vikram ki hai.
Piche se Dev:Radhika Sirf Dev ki hai.[pass aa kar]maine tujhe kitni bar samjaya hai Vikram k Radhika ka picha chod de.
Vikram:Tu mere mamaji ka bete hai Dev warna...
Dev:Warna kya?Waise b kaun sa bhaichara nibhaya hai tune?Yeh jante hue b me Radhika se pyar karta hoon or wo b mujhe chahti hai,tu use pana chahta hai?
   :Maine nahi nibhaya kyunki tune aaj tak bhai hone ka farz nahi nibhaya.Mere liye tu apne pyar ki kurbani tak nahi de sakta?
   :Main Radhika ko paane ki kosis kabhi nahi karta, na hi usse apne pyar ka izhaar karta Agar tu sahi insaan hota toh.
Radhika:Hume alag karna itna assaan nahi.
Dev:Lekin agar tujhe lagta hai tu aisa kar sakti hai to carry on.
Dono:All the best.


this much... if somebody want translation then plz telll...
hope u like it...
uhmm the ff is quite interesting please continue
its good to have love story of dev and radehika in college

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Love the start.So,here Vikram is behind Radhika. Waiting to see what happens next.Please continue.

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
thanx will try 2 b best... 

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 9:01am | IP Logged
thanks for the pm dear and feel gud to read it 

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Great start!

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 9:41am | IP Logged
it sounds interesting...plzzz do continue

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Thanks keep it going Thumbs Up

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