VirMan SS: The BOSS# CHAPTER 4 pg 28 - Page 12

Originally posted by: daydreamer9

this is something creative.how can criticism improve your writing?it's either bang on or go back to pavilion.😛this was bang on.what else do you wanna hear??write it down n pm me...n i'll repeat it like a parrot.😛😛😛


p.s. i love potato!!!😉

Originally posted by: .aliyah.

ALLAH! Dishu! You're impossible! 

I thought it was terrible ... I think you're lying -.- 

Repeat what?

i know😉
i don't lie.😡i can't lie even if i want.
some manufacturing fault i have.😛


repeat what u want to hear from me which will be scrapped or pmed to me by you.😛😆

arrrehhh...you have awesome writing skill.so nothing to say on that matter...
the storyline...ummm...i don't care what the storyline is.as long as it can have a grip on me i'll read.i read if the writing style is good enough.
the update was bang on.hv said it earlier na...
gloomy manvi...bechara virat...what else to say?it's going slow?but this is what u want na?u'll shape up the story exactly as u want it to be.hw can criticism make it better?i can only say what i've liked or disliked.i liked virat not stammering n hated him sneaking into manvi's phone.i've said it earlier.now can i plzzz get to read 2ii?

Originally posted by: daydreamer9

arrrehhh...you have awesome writing skill.so nothing to say on that matter...
the storyline...ummm...i don't care what the storyline is.as long as it can have a grip on me i'll read.i read if the writing style is good enough.
the update was bang on.hv said it earlier na...
gloomy manvi...bechara virat...what else to say?it's going slow?but this is what u want na?u'll shape up the story exactly as u want it to be.hw can criticism make it better?i can only say what i've liked or disliked.i liked virat not stammering n hated him sneaking into manvi's phone.i've said it earlier.now can i plzzz get to read 2ii?

Originally posted by: .aliyah.

THANKS DISHU! THAT HELPED SOOO MUCH!! ❤️🤗

The story is slow? Its probably because i'm not updating regularly. 😕No tension .. i'll fix that. 😉

I haven't finished 2ii but pakka you'll be the first to read it tomorrow. I have to edit 2i as well because there's so many mistakes.

You'll have to re-read to 2i as well. 

Thaaanks sooo much!! 👍🏼🤗⭐️

Now go sleep. It's late there. 🥱

Love you ❤️

na na...i'm not sleeping until i read 2ii.u promised double update!!! it's already tomorrow here.post whatever u've written.edit it later.plzzz plzzz plzzz

Originally posted by: daydreamer9

na na...i'm not sleeping until i read 2ii.u promised double update!!! it's already tomorrow here.post whatever u've written.edit it later.plzzz plzzz plzzz

yeh update kabb hoga? 🤓

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u can kill urself. no... i'll kill u myself.what hv u written??😛
n then the footnote...🤣

Edited by daydreamer9 - 10 years ago

Unres

Edited by Syed695 - 10 years ago