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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM.

Your writing is truly one of a kind.

Keep mesmerizing us with your writing style.

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by determination

Thanks for the PM.

Your writing is truly one of a kind.

Keep mesmerizing us with your writing style.

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
nice update Clap

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Originally posted by Nandiniraizaada

nice updateClap

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superb  update

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 1:30am | IP Logged
             
Next day(22 June, 2013)
1:30pm
RK Shopping Centre

Roshni and Mayank are in a shop. Roshni is looking at some vermillion-boxes. She likes one and takes it in her hand. Mayank comes to her.
Mayank: Kya dekh rahi ho?
Roshni: Mayank dekho ye kitna sundar hai.
Mayank: Ye?? Roshni tum ye kya dekh rahi ho! Chalo yaha se. Lunch time ho raha hai.
Roshni: Mayank mujhe ye lena hai...
Mayank: Roshni chalo to yaha se.
Mayank takes Roshni out of the shop, rushes out of the shopping centre, keeps the shopping bags on the back seat, makes Roshni sit in the front seat, himself sits on the driving seat and starts driving. Roshni is angry with Mayank for not letting her buy that thing.
While driving...
Mayank: (noticing her anger)Tumhe kya hua?
Roshni: Tumhe dikhta nehi mai gussa hu.
Mayank: Oh. Achcha baba i'm sorry.
Roshni: Mai tumse baat nehi karne wali.
Mayank: Roshni. Roshni i am sorry. I am really very sorry. Please maaf kardo. Aur waise bhi tum use kharid ke kya karti? Tumhari to shaadi bhi nehi hui.
Roshni: Nehi hui. Par kabhi na kabhi to hogi na!
Mayank: Jab hogi tak kharid lena. Ab usse karti kya?
Roshni: Meri jo marzi mai karti. Tumhe kya?!!
Mayank: Achcha thik hai. I am sorry maine vo kharid ne nehi dia...i am really sorry. Ab gussa thuk do. Agar tum aise naraz rahogi to mai kaam pe dhyan nehi de paunga.
Roshni: I don't care!
Mayank stops the car on a road-side.
Mayank: Please forgive me. Please. Smile kardo. Smile, smile, smile.(starts tickling)
Roshni starts laughing because of tickling.
Mayank: (tickling)Smile, smile.
Roshni: (laughing)Mayank choro mujhe. Mujhe choro.
Mayank: (tickling)Jabtak tum maaf mehi karogi mai aise hi gudgudi karta rahunga.
Roshni: (laughing)Achcha thik hai. Thik hai. Maaf kardia.
Mayank: (stops tickling)That's like a good girl.
Mayank continues driving.
Roshni: Aaj tumhe duty pe nehi jana?
Mayank: Nope. Aaj maine chutti lia hai. Saradin tumhare saath rahunga aur tumhe Mumbai ghumaunga.
Roshni: Nice... Ab hum kaha ja rahe hai?
Mayank: Paradise Foods. I'm sure tumhe waha ka khana zarur pasand ayega. That's my favorite place!
Roshni: Jab tumhe vo jagah pasand hai to mujhe bhi pasand ayeg...
Mayank: Right.
Mayank's cellphone rings, Manjusha is calling. Mayank turns on the bluetooth.
Mayank: Haan bua boliye.
Manjusha: Mayank bete tum kaha ho?
Mayank: Kaha hu? Matlab?
Manjusha: Aaj tumhari chutti hai na. To ghar kyun nehi aye?
Mayank: Ne...nehi to. Aaj meri chutti nehi hai.
Manjusha: To ab tum kaha ho?
Mayank: Ek crime scene pe ja raha hu. Aap ko kuch kaam tha?
Manjusha: Nehi bas aise hi. Mujeh laga tumhari chutti hai. Ab mai rakhti hu.
Mayank turns off the bluetooth.
Roshni: Tumne jhut kyun kaha?
Mayank: Ye jo meri bua hai na, vo bohot...choro inn baaton ko. Iss waqt mai iss bare mei baat bhi nehi karna chahta.
Roshni: Jaisi tumhari marzi.

Mayank's house
After talking with Mayank...
Manjusha: Mayank ne mujhse jhut bola. Agar vo kaam pe hota to aapni car kyun leke jata? Agar kaam pe hota to police jeep leke jata na. Kuch to garbar hai. Aur garbar kya hai janne ke liye mujhe...
Saying this she enters Mayank's room and starts looking here and there for some clue. Finally she sees an album.
Manjusha: Ye album? Pehle to nehi thi. Naya lag raha hai.
Saying this she takes out the album and started looking at the pictures. The album has all the photos of Roshni's birthday. She is stunned to see Roshni with Mayank.
Manjusha: Ye larki to...Roshni hai jisse hum Sonagara gaon mei mile the. Mayank ise jante hai?!!
She again looks at the photos and stops at a picture of Mayank and Roshni, where both were dancing. Seeing this photo Manjusha understands the whole matter.
Manjusha: Achcha to ye baat hai! Mayank aur Roshni pehle se ek dusre ko jante hai...aur shayad pyaar bhi karte hai. Chalo achchi baat hai. Par kya unnka pyaar aapne anjamtak pohoch payega? (smiles wickedly)Mere hote hua ye shayad possible nehi... Dekhte haikya hota hai! (smiles wickedly)
Manjusha keeps the album back into its place and leaves the room.


Precap:
At night, Roshni goes back to her village.


Edited by Tarza - 08 July 2013 at 1:30am

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
Great update.

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