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Awesome part.

Could savour Abhigyan after so many days.

Eagerly waiting for update 4.


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Originally posted by determination


Awesome part.

Could savour Abhigyan after so many days.

Eagerly waiting for update 4.



Thanks!
Looks like you like my writings very much!
Update 4 coming very soon. But it will be posted by my friend.

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Good going Zari. Can't wait for the next update!

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Wah,nice update

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Next day(17 June, 2013)
12:27pm
Roshni's house

After completing the household chores and teaching students, she is standing near the railings of terrace, looking at the village. She remembers the moments with Mayank in this village- how they met, how Mayank cared for her, how Mayank saved her, how they started liking each-other, with a smile she is remembering all this. Roshni's thinking breaks with the ringtone of her cellphone.
Mayank: Mujhe yaad kar rahi thi na?
Roshni: Tumhe kaise pata chala?
Mayank: Bas pata chal gaya...
Roshni: Tumne mujhe call kaise kia?
Mayank: Kyun? Mai tumhe call nehi kar sakta kya? Ya phir kisi aur ka call anewala tha...
Roshni: Tumne hi to kal kaha tha tumhe shabdo ke bhasha mei baat karna achcha lagta hai.
Mayank: Par iss waqt tumhari awaaz sunne ka mann kia...
Roshni: Tumhare mom-dad agaye?
Mayank: Nehi abhitak nehi. Tumhare guests chalegaye?
Roshni: Nope. Ek-do din mei chale jayenge.
Mayank: Uff! Tumhare guests jaye kyun nehi?! Unke wajah se mai tumse mil nehi pa raha hu. I just hope tumhare guests jaldi apne ghar chale jaye aur tum Mumbai asakho.
Roshni: Don't worry. Mai jald se jald ane ki koshish karungi.
Sonarika comes from behind.
Sonarika: Roshni beta, tum mujhe batao lunch ke liye kya banana hai.
Roshni turns to Sonarika. Sonarika sees Roshni talking with someone over phone.
Sonarika: I'm sorry. Mujhe pata nehi tha tum phone pe baat kar rahi ho. Mai baad mei ati hu.
Roshni to Sonarika: No aunty it's okay. Aur aapko khana banane ki zarurat nehi hai. Mai khud banalungi.
Sonarika: Achcha thik hai tum hi banana. At least, mai tumhari madat to kar sakti hu na?
Roshni: But aunty...
Sonarika: Mai tumhari baat nehi sunungi. Tumne humari itni sevah ki to kya mai tumhari itni si madat nehi kar sakti?
Roshni: Okay aunty.
Sonarika: Good girl. Tum baat khatam karke ao, mai chalti hu.
Roshni: Okay aunty.
Sonarika leaves. Mayank heard Sonarika's voice and gets suspicious.
Mayank: (thinking)Ye to mom ki awaaz lag rahi thi... Iss ka matlab mom-dad-bua Roshni ke ghar pe... Nehi nehi. Aisa kaise ho sakta hai. Mujhe galatfehmi hua hoga.
Roshni to Mayank: Tumne suna na mujhe jana hoga.
Mayank: Ufff... Humesha koi-na-koi bich mei ajata hai. Sab ke sab pyaar ke dushman hai.
Roshni: (laughs)Baad mei baat karenge. Bye.
Mayank: Bye.

Roshni hangs up.


9:00pm
Mumbai
Mayank's house

Today, Mayank has invited Kavi, Bulbul, Kashish, Ranveer, Aditya, Varun, Meghna, Vikas, Aastha, Aabha and Anurag to his home. Abhigyan didn't come. ACP Diler and Anjali couldn't attend as Akangsha and Druv are coming back.
All are enjoying, gossiping.

Bulbul: Kavi, tujhe nehi lagta ab humare shaadi mei aue bhi zyaada mazaa ayega.
Kavi: Aisa kyun? Mereko kuch samajh nehi araha...
Kashish: Bulbul kya kehna chahti hai mai samajh gayi.
Mayank: Kashish ma'am hume bhi to bata dijiye ki Bulbu lka matlab kya hai.
Kashish: Bulbul ka matlab hai ki ab shaadi ke shopping mei aur bhi mazaa ayega. Right Bulbul?
Bulbul: Kashish yaar! Tu to meri harr baat samajh jati hai! Ise kehte hai dosti! Wah!!
Aabha: Shopping mei mazaa ayega??
Kashish: Haan. Because larkiyan pehle se zyaada hai. Pehle sirf Bulbul, mai, Aabha aur Anjali ma'am thi. Par ab Roshni, Akangsha, Meghna aur Aastha bhi hai. More girls means more fun!!
Bulbul: Yaar tune to meri muh ki baat chin li! Ise kehte hai sachcha dost! Love you Kashish yaar!!(in excitement hugs Kashish)
Kashish: (breaking the hug)Are bas bas. Bohot hogaya. Bas bhi kar 'Chulbul Bulbul!
All laughs.
Vikas: Ek minute ek minute. Baki sab to thik hai par ye Roshni kaun hai?
Aastha: Exactly! Ye Roshni hai kaun?
Ranveer: Good question!
Varun: Isska jawaab to Mayank sir se behtaar aur koi de hi nehi sakta. Kyun sir?
Kavi: Mayank, de de jawaab! Akhir Vikas aur Aastha ko bhi pata chale ki tere zindagi mei chal kya raha hai...
This actions of them makes Mayank shy. Vikas and Aastha understood the matter.
Vikas: (teasing Mayank)Samajh gaya. Aastha lagta hai humare absence mei bohot kuch badal gaya hai.
Aastha: Haan Vikas. Lagta hai humne bohot kuch miss kardia.
Meghna: Thora bohot hi miss kia hai. Ab bhi bohot kuch baki hai.
Aditya: Mai to kahunga. Aastha aur Vikas ekdam correct time pe wapas aye hai.
Anurag: Love-story abhi abhi shuru hui hai...puri picture to abhi baki hai!
All laughs again.
Bulbul: Mayank, Roshni Mumbai kab arahi hai? Kuch bataya ussne?
Mayank: Roshni ne kaha hai ek-do din baad vo Mumbai ane ke liye try karegi. Bulbul tumhe kuch kaam tha?
Bulbul: Vo shaadi ke shopping karni thi. Usse kehna jaldi ane ko.
Mayank: Don't worry. I'll inform her.
Aastha: Mayank, tumhe hume bataya nehi tumhare zindagi ka naya chapter kab aut kaise shuru hua. Hmmm?
Mayank: Kahani bohto lambi hai. Dinner karne chalte hai, dinner karte karte batata hu.
Aastha: Okay...
All walks to the dinner table.


Precap:
Begins after the end of Smoke Man case...


Edited by Tarza - 05 July 2013 at 12:57am

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Wrong post



Edited by Tarza - 05 July 2013 at 12:26am

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Nice update Smile

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