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Lovely update Zari.
Can't wait for the next update.

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Next day(16 June, 2013)
8:30am
Roshni's house
Kitchen

Roshni is making breakfast. Her cellphone rings. With right hand she is making breakfast and with left hand she picks up her call.
Roshni: Good morning, inspector sahab!
Mayank: Good morning. Kya kar rahi ho?
Roshni: Breakfast bana rahi hu. Aur tum kya kar rahe ho?
Mayank: Taiyar ho raha hu. Aur...age ka kya socha hai?
Roshni: Age ka? Matlab?
Mayank: Matlab Mumbai kab aogi?
Roshni: Dekhte hai...
Mayank: Tumse milne ka bohot mann kar raha hai. Please ajao na!
Roshni: Mai koshish karungi. Okay?
Mayank: Okay...
Roshni: Ab aap apne kaam pe bhi thora dhyan dijiye aur mujhe bhi kuch karne dijiye. Baad mei baat karenge.
Mayank: Thik hai. Bye.
Roshni: Bye.
Mayank hangs up. Roshni keeps her cellphone back on the kitchen-counter and pours tea into three cups, places the cups in a tray and takes them upstairs for Divakar, Manjusha and Sonarika.

Upstairs
Divakar, Sonarika and Manjusha are sitting together in a room. Roshni comes with a tray.
Roshni: May i come in?
Divakar: Ya sure. Come in.
Roshni enters and keeps the tray in front of them, and serves them.
Roshni: Aaplog chay pijiye, mai nashte ki taiyari karti hu.
Sonarika: Thik hai beta.
Roshni leaves the room. Divakar and Sonarika takes their cups in hands.
Manjusha: Bhaiya, mujhe ye larki kuch thik nehi lag rahi hai.
Divakar: Aisa kyun lagta hai tumhe?
Manjusha: Bhaiya, aap inn gaon ke larkiyon ko jante nehi. Humare jaise sheher walon ko lutt lete hai.
Sonarika: Didi, mujhe nehi lagta Roshni aisi larki hai.
Manjusha: Bhabhi, ye larkiyan na...(stops as Roshni enters)
Roshni: Sorry to interrupt. Nashta lag gaya hai. Aaplog khana khane ajaiye.
Sonarika: Thik hai beta. Hum arahe hai. Tum jao.
Roshni leaves.
Sonarika: Kitni pyaari bachchi hai Roshni. Pata nehi bhagwan ne usske saath hi aisa kyun kia...shayad usske nasib mei koi achcha insaan ana likkha hai. Aur didi, aapki Roshni ke bare mei aoch galat hai. Roshni bohot achchi larki hai. Aapko bhi jald hi mere baat pe yakin ajayega.
Manjusha: Par bhabhi...
Divakar: Manju, mai Sonarika se bilkul sehmat hu. Tumhe jalf hi hum pe yakin ajayega.
Sonarika and Divakar leaves.
Manjusha: Bhaiya to meri baat kabhi nehi sunenge. Mujhe bhabhi ko hi samjhana hoga.
Manjusha also leaves.

1:47pm
Mumbai
Police Headquarters'

Aabha is sitting n her cabin. Anurag brings two cups of coffee. He gives one to Aabha and keeps one for himself. Both drinks coffee and talks about something.
Mayank and Varun are discussing about a murder case with Ranveer and ACP Diler.

Abhigyan is working alone, sitting in his cabin. Kashish is working on some files with Meghna and Aditya.
Kashish: Meghna, Aditya tum doni samajh gaye na kya karna hai?
Meghna: Yes ma'am.
Kashish: Good. (looks at Abhigyan and thinks something)Abhigyan ki problem kya hai...
Aditya: Ma'am kehna kya chahti hai?
Kashish: Matlab ki, Abhigyan bohot chup-chup sa rehta hai, kisi kaam ke ilava aur koi baat nehi karta...aur to aur uss din Mayank ke ghar pe Mayank-Roshni ko dance karta dekh thora emotional hogaya tha. Is there any problem?
Meghna: Ma'am you're right. Maine bhi notice kia hai, Abhigyan sir kisi zyaada baat nehi karte, chup-chup se rehte hai.
Aditya: Ye to hona hi tha. Abhigyan sir ne apne 'khaas dosto' ko jo khoya hai.
Kashish: Khaas dost? Matlab?
Aditya: Ma'am, actually...(before he can say anything Ranveer and Varun joins them)
Ranveer gives Kashish and Aditya their coffee-cups. And Varun gives Meghna her coffee-cup.
Meghna to Varun: Thanks.
Varun: You're welcome.
Meghna and Varun shares an eye-lock. Ranveer, Aditya and Kashish clears their throats to break Varun-Meghna's eye-lock.
Meghna: (blushing and shy)Excuse me.
Meghna leaves. Kashish, Ranveer and Aditya starts teasing Varun.
Kashish: To...Mr. Varun Kashyap kya chal raha hai? Hmmm?
Varun: (shy-smile)Ku...kuch bhi to nehi ma'am.
Ranveer: Achcha bhai, ab tu humse chupayga?!
Varun: Sir kuch hoga to bataunga na...
All laughs.
Mayank is trying to call Divakar but he isn't picking up as he went for lunch leaving his cellphone in the room.

Mayank: Dad phone nehi utha rahe hai?!!
Mayank joins Kashish and others. ACP Diler, Meghna, Anurag and Aabha too joins them.
Aabha: Aaj Kavi sir dikhai nehi de rahe?
ACP Diler: Mai tumlogoko batana bhul gaya, aaj Kavi ne chutti li hai.
Kashish: Haan mujhe pata hai. Bulbul bata rahi thi use shopping karni hai.
Anurag: Kuch din baad unki shaadi hai, to shopping karna to banta hai.
ACP Diler: Waise aaj yaha ke do purane officers wapas ayenge.
Aditya: Purane officers? Kaun sir?
ACP Diler: Wait. Sab pata chal jayega.
ACP Diler calls Abhigyan to join them. He joins them.
Varun: Sir, aur kitni der wait karna parega?
ACP Diler: Thori si...(a voice interrupts)
Voice: Hum agaye sir!
All turns to see. Vikas and Aastha are standing there! Aditya and Mayank are very happy to see their friends back.
Ranveer: Sir kya ye naye officers hai?
ACP Diler: Nehi Ranveer. Actually tumhari galti nehi hai. Tum sab naye hona iss liye tum inhe nehi jante. Ye dono pehle yehi kaam karte the, baad mei inki posting Delhi Crime Branch mei hogaya. Aur ab inki posting wapas yaha hogaya hai. Ye hai Sub-Inspector Vikas aur Sub-Inspector Aastha. Inhe Aditya, Mayank aur Abhigyan bohot achchi tarha se jante hai.
ACP Diler introduces all of them.
Vikas: Abhigyan sir, Gautam sir kaha hai?
Abhigyan turns sad.
Abhigyan: Please excuse me.
Abhigyan leaves.
Aabha: (in her mind)Gautam sir ke bare mei sunte hi Abhigyan sir chale kyun gaye?...Akhir baat kya hai?

11:50pm
Mumbai
Mayank's house
Mayank's room

Mayank comes in his room, lies in the bed, takes his cellphone in hand. He messages Roshni.
Mayank: (message)Soo gayi kya?
On the other hand, Roshni is lying in her bed, trying to sleep. Hearing the sound of her phone, immediately takes the phone in her hand. She replies Mayank.
Roshni: (reply) Nehi. Mera phone kyun nehi uthaya?
Mayank-Roshni's message conversation:-
Mayank: Kyun ki...tumhara message parna bohot achcha lagta hai.
Roshni: Kyun meri awaaz sunna achcha nehi lagta?
Mayank: Kyun ki tumhari awaaz meri dil mei basi hui hai...aaj shabdo ke bhasha mei baat karna achcha lagta hai.
Roshni: Achcha...toh ek kaam karti hu. Mai Mumbai ane ka plan cancel kar deti hu. Okay?
Mayank: Tumse mile bina to mai marr hi jaunga...waise kab arahi ho?
Roshni: Pata nehi... Bohot raat ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe sona chahiye, subha jaldi jo uthoge. Good night!
Mayank: Good night!
Both keeps their phones aside and goes to sleep.




Precap:
After the SmokeMan case...


Edited by Tarza - 03 July 2013 at 1:04am

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nice part...update next part soon on...

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