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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 6:15am | IP Logged
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thanks for adding kapil...but tum to koi kahani khatam nehi karti...pehle gaushi,then khatarnak khel aab this 1
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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shabnam94

Originally posted by Tarza

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thanks for adding kapil...but tum to koi kahani khatam nehi karti...pehle gaushi,then khatarnak khel aab this 1

You're right!! I am also thinking the same! Mai kya karu??? Daily mere dimaag mei ek ek naye ideas ate hai... I can't stop myself from thinking new ideas!
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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tarza

Originally posted by Shabnam94

Originally posted by Tarza

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thanks for adding kapil...but tum to koi kahani khatam nehi karti...pehle gaushi,then khatarnak khel aab this 1

You're right!! I am also thinking the same! Mai kya karu??? Daily mere dimaag mei ek ek naye ideas ate hai... I can't stop myself from thinking new ideas!


ideas ana gud thing hai..btw tumhe agar itne ideas aate hai ..then stdies meon dhyan kab deti hoo??and tumko toh i think tv ke saab stars ke naam pata hai...kitne serials dekhti hoo tum??
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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shabnam94

Originally posted by Tarza

Originally posted by Shabnam94

Originally posted by Tarza

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Now this is a FF not SS!



thanks for adding kapil...but tum to koi kahani khatam nehi karti...pehle gaushi,then khatarnak khel aab this 1

You're right!! I am also thinking the same! Mai kya karu??? Daily mere dimaag mei ek ek naye ideas ate hai... I can't stop myself from thinking new ideas!



ideas ana gud thing hai..btw tumhe agar itne ideas aate hai ..then stdies meon dhyan kab deti hoo??and tumko toh i think tv ke saab stars ke naam pata hai...kitne serials dekhti hoo tum??

You knowna...the education system is nowCREATIVE! So I need to be good in Creativity and writing helps me in it. Idon't watch much serials.
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
                                   

New characters:

Divakar Desai- Father of Mayank. A Businessman. Very close to Mayank.
Sonarika Desai- Mother of Mayank. A housewife.
Manjusha Desai- Paternal aunt of Mayank. Unmarried. Cunning lady, always brainwashes Sonarika's mind.




Next day(14th June,2013)

12:39pm
Roshni's village
Roshni is walking in her village. Suddenly someone comes shouting "Gaon walo yaha par tinlog zakhmi huye hai! Jaldi ao!" Roshni with some villagers runs at the accident spot. They see two women and a man are injured badly are unconscious, in a car.
Roshni: Oh God! Inki halat bohot kharab hai. Chacha inhe aap mere ghar pe leke aiye.
Villagers take them to Roshni's house.


1:48pm
Roshni's house
Roshni is aiding a woman who's injured. Mayank calls her but she isn't able to pick it up.
Roshni: (looking at her ringing cell)Sorry Mayank. Mai iss waqt baat nehi kar sakti. Sorry!
Roshni continues aiding the woman.
On the other side, in Mumbai, Mayank is tensed about why Roshni isn't picking up his calls.
Mayank: Roshni ko kya hogaya? Phone kyun nehi utha rahi hai.
Kavi and Kashish comes to him.
Kashish: Any problem Mayank?
Mayank: Ma'am, Roshni call nehi le rahi hai.
Kavi: Are bhai, itni si baat! Busy hogi!
Mayank: Hmmm... Shayad...
Kavi: Bhai ab chal kaam pe lag nehito ACP sir teri band baja denge.
Kashish: Mayank tumhe patrolling ke liye jana hai. Jaldi jana aur jaldi wapas ana. You know na aaj bohot kaam hai.
Mayank: Yes ma'am!
Mayank leaves. Kashish and Kavi gets back to work.


2:00pm
Roshni's house

Roshni is coming downstairs with her cellphone in her hand.
Roshni: Kabse Mayank ko call kar rahi hu! Mayank utha kyu nehi raha?! Aabha se puchti hu.
Roshni calls Aabha. Aabha doesn't pick the call.
Roshni: Are inn sabko ho kya gaya hai? Koi mera call hi nehi utha raha hai! Bulbul ma'am ko zarur pata hoga.
Roshni calls Bulbul.

Mumbai
ACP Diler's house

Anjali and Bulbul are laughing about something. Bulbul's phone rings.
Bulbul: Roshni. Anjali ma'am Roshni ka call hai.
Anjali: Uthao.
Bulbul picks up the call.
Bulbul: Hi Roshni! Kaisi ho?
Roshni: Mai thik hu. Aap kaisi hai?
Bulbul: Bohot bariya. Anjali ma'am ke saath hu unke ghar mei hu. Batao kaise call kia?
Roshni: Vo...ma'am actually...kya aap ko pata hai ki Mayank, Aabha, Kavi sir aur baki sab ko kya hua hai?
Bulbul: Kya hua hai?
Roshni: Mai Mayank ko call kar rahi thi par vo utha nehi raha ha aur Aabha ne phone katt dia...iss liye...
Bulbul: Achcha? Mujhe kuch nehi pata. Ek minute mai Anjali ma'am se puchti hu.
Bulbul to Anjali: Ma'am kya aapko pata hai ki iss waqt Police Headquarters mei kya chal raha hai? Koi bhi phone nehi utha raha hai.
Anjali: Haan...vo kal Diler bata rahe the ki...aaj vo sab bohot busy honge... Shayad usi wajah se...
Bulbul to Anjali: Oh okay.
Roshni heard what Anjali said.
Roshni: Bulbul ma'am maine sunn lia hai. Thik hai to mai baad mei baat karungi.
Bulbul: Hey Roshni. Aaj mai aur Anjali ma'am dono free hai to hum soch rahe the ki shopping ke liye chale. Akangsha aur Druv(ACP Diler and Anjali's kids) wapas arahe hai to unke kuch kharidna chahti thi ma'am aur mujhe bhi kuch shopping karni thi. Kya tum hume join karogi?
Roshni: No ma'am. I can't vo actually(tells what happened this morning) So i can't come. Aap dono jaiye.
Bulbul: Okay thik hai. Bye.
Roshni: Bye ma'am.
Bulbul hangs up.
Anjali: Kya Roshni arahi hai?
Bulbul: Nehi ma'am aaj vo bohot busy hai.
Anjali: Oh! To chalo shopping ke liye chalte hai.
Bulbul: Chaliye.
Bulbul and Anjali gets up for going to shopping.

Next day(15th June, 2013)
9:30am
Mumbai
Mayank's house
Mayank's room
Mayank is sleeping peacefully on his bed. His sleeps breaks with the ringing of his phone.
Mayank: (waking up and looking at his phone)Uffo!! Iss phone ko bhi abhi bajna tha!
Mayank takes his cell in his hand. 
Mayank: (seeing Roshni's name flashing on the mobile screen)Oh Roshni!
He picks up the call.
Mayank: Good morning!
Roshni: Good morning?!! Tum iss waqt "good morning" bol rahe ho?! Inspector sahab aapko ho kya gaya hai? Subha k sare nau baj rahe hai aur aap ab uth rahe ho?
Mayank: Haan. Vo...(rubbing his eyes)actually...kal bohot kaam tha...ghar ate ate tin baj gaye the. To aaj ACP sir ne chutti di hai. Kal tum phone kyun nehi utha rahi thi?
Roshni: Baat aisi haiki...(Roshni tells Mayank the whole story)
Mayank: Do you my need my help?
Roshni: Nope...abhi zarurat nehi hai. 
Mayank: Aur bataon...Mumbai kab arahi ho?
Roshni: Mumbai...dekhte hai...(hears one of the injured women's sound)Mayank mai tumse baad mei baat karti hu. Bye.
Mayank: Okay. Bye.
Mayank cuts the call. Mayank keeps his cell on the bed-side-table and goes back to sleep.

Roshni's house
After talking with Mayank, Roshni goes to the room(where the two injured women are). After reaching the room, she sees that one of the women has gaines consciousness. Roshni helps the woman to ait on the bed.
Woman: Mai kaha hu? Ye konsi jagah hai? Kiska ghar hai?
Roshni: Aunty, ye mera ghar hai. Aap Songara gaon mei hai. Actually, aapka accident hogaya tha.
Woman: Accident?
Roshni: Haan. Ab aap kaisa feel kar rahi hai?
Woman: Better feel kar rahi hu. Ao beta, idhar ao. Mere pas batho.
Roshni sits beside the woman.
Woman: Beta, tumhara nam kya hai?
Roshni: Roshni...
Woman: Roshni...wah bohot sundar nam hai. Mera nam Sonarika hai. Aur ye dusri aurat meri nanand hai. Aur woh aadmi mere husband hai, Divakar Desai.
Roshni: Oh. Aap sab kaha k rehne wale hai?
Sonarika: Mere husband Businessman hai. Hum Rajaathan se lout rahe the to tab accident hogaya.
Roshni: Aap thaki hongi. Aap araam kijiye. Mai breakfast ki taiyari karti hu.
Sonarika: Mai tumhari kuch madat karu?
Roshni: Nehi nehi aunty. Mai khud karlungi. Aap araam kijiye.
Sonarika: (cupping Roshni's face)Tum bohot achchi ho. God bless you!
Roshni smiles and leaves the room.

11:30am
Manjusha and Divakar gaines consciousness 1hour back. Now, Roshni is placing food in the dining table. She goes upstairs and calls them for food. Everyone comes down and sits in the table. Roshni serves them food.
Sonarika: Roshni, ao batho humare saath.
Roshni: No aunty. Aaplog khaiye, mai baad mei khaungi.
Divakar: Beta ao. Humare saath khane batho.
Roshni: Aap doni otna keh rahe ho to thik hai.
Roshni joins them. All start eating breakfast.
Sonarika: Beta tum aapne bare mei kuch batao.
Roshni: Aunty, mai kuch din pehle hi aapna college khatam karke yaha wapas ayi hu.
Sonarika: Aur tumhare parivaar wale kaha hai?
Roshni gets sad. She gets up and goes near her family's photo, takes the garland(which fell on the ground, from the floor) and puts it around the photo. Manjusha, Divakar and Sonarika understands what this means.
Sonarika: I am really sorry! Mujhe pata nehi tha ki...
Roshni: Its okay aunty. Shayad yehi mere kismat mei hai.
Divakar: Bhagwan jo bhi karta hai kisi wajah se karta hai. Iss ke piche bhi koi karan hoga.
Roshni: You're right uncle. Ye sab baatein choriye. Ab sab khana khaiye na.
Everyone continues eating breakfast.
Manjusha: (in her mind)Ye gaon ke larkiyan bhi na! Chance chahiye inhe sheher walo ko lott ne ka... Ye larki mujhe thik nehi lag rahi hai. Bhaiya se baat karni paregi.


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Edited by Tarza - 28 June 2013 at 1:18am

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Thank you for the PM.

The update is absolutely thrilling.

Excellent work as always.


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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 4:32am | IP Logged
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Thank you for the PM.

The update is absolutely thrilling.

Excellent work as always.



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