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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #4 Chapter 24 pg 133 (Page 4)

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
great ff .. pls continue. 

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Oh super make out .. Commented on the blog ..
I love it when u addresses the issue why does Khushi takes shit ..Arnav stood up for wife and the truth came out about him .. So mrs Khushi raizada can make manorama shut up proper .. It didn't seem right to me that Arnav would stay on at his mamas place after shaadi .. A place where his mom
Was asked to leave ..
And Khushi made kebab which hubby just ate quietly no appreciation ..   And then talked about mom .. Typical Indian men .. Can never seem to leave mommys nipples Angry .. It's good u brought the loop of Khushi keeping quiet ..
There's still more to the story .

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 3:48am | IP Logged
the argument on breakfast table was dhamakedaar kavi and i could feel the tension..!! brilliantly written..Smile and did i tell you that you write ahem-ahem scenes brilliantly- they are decent and you can feel the passion too..WinkBlushingEmbarrassed
 
how long this story will be..(not that i mind this story can continue as long as you want)  but wanted to know when will arnav get to know about his mother's deeds..poor guy will be shattered...Cry

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 3:49am | IP Logged
wow! what an update.loved it. Clap

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

God, that was a maha update. And maha updates ka bhi maha update on the blog :D 

The update pleased my heart, mind and ovaries, youknowaddimean ? :D 

She told him she loved him. And I think Arnav does believe her; he always knew that and perhaps thats the betrayal hurt him more than it would have otherwise. And then they have hot steamy near-bed breaking sex. Brilliant. 

Arnav has sacrificed more than any of us will ever fully know, hai naa ? And unlike others, he doesn't do if for the adulation. Its a true gesture of affection and loyalty. He is a beautiful man inside out, that we have established. And cemented. Wow. Seriously - put Mami, Mama, Lavanya and Shyam in a deep dark pit and bury them right there. 

See, I can understand why Khushi wouldn't want to tell him the truth about Sharda, but I still don't understand why she accepts being treated like a doormat. If Arnav was not the man he is, she'd be no better than a servant in this house. Another thing that worries me is that no one we know is witness to Khushi's side of the story. The truth has to come out at some point, but how ? 

I always like Nani, and in this story I have a soft corner for Akash too. He speaks up when he has to, and is not ungrateful for the things his brother has done for him. And he is not an invertebrate, this is the second time he has stood up for Arnav and Khushi in front of his mother. Good. Payal is useless.And pretty dumb. Really, has she spoken a single line in all this time? 

I do want them to move out. They will be away from Snakewa's reach then, hai naa ? Arnav, darling, sleep well tonight :) 

Wonderful update, Kavi! And I hope you are doing well now :) Smile

Thanks Twiggy!

I have been waiting for someone to comment about the "maha update" on the blog Wink

Thought I should try out as I have been advised in the past though I haven't yet got a warning

18 + readers who don't read notes might miss out on this one Embarrassed


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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 4:15am | IP Logged
just amazing update...loved there love and how arnav bring things for her to help her without make it a big deal and i hate this bad mamiji very very much...a very good family man arnav and husband ..but still i wish khushi told him everything happened in the past from his mother... to proved that she always loved him 

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Brilliant. Now Arnav will never find out that his mother was a manipulating selfish elitist witch who single-handedly destroyed his happiness.

While Arnav does have a heart of gold, his inability to see his mother's duplicity is his Achilles's heel.

Bet you Shyam is going to take advantage of this now.

For their sake, I DO wish Arnav and Khushi would move away but they won't. -__-

And I won't even BEGIN on how selfish Payal is or how spineless Akash is.

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Loads of revelations.. awesome part..

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