OS: A little Longer

😊😊Edited by MeghnaA - 10 years ago

beautiful update...pls give happy ending..😃

thats so beautiful...i loved those concluding lines..they just made me go weepy and smiling at how beautiful this is... couldnt have been more lovely...flawless...😳

Adorable Part ...

Totally Loved the way u conveyed everthng with ur words. Loved it ❤️
Hope to get one mre sequence . Pls ...

Beautiful! Please end this on a happy note =)

👏 *****Bow  **** , ****claps******

Please please please please ... HE IS COMING BACK, RIGHT ??   RIGHT ?? 😡 Make him .. for some of us are faint hearted and cannot take it any other way 😭.. CANNOT, YOU HEAR !!!  😡 Just love it :D ❤️

Beautiful one. in that you have described the feelings and longing of geet waiting for maan to be return from war. here u described the feelings of maan who is going to go for war and didn't know if he will return or not.

wow very beautiful...a big request...could you write second part...with a happy ending...

This had me in wet eyes. An officer is an officer after all.