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My Dream World.

MyDarkPassenger IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 5:51am | IP Logged

Hello all Hug

I am sure you all have never seen me here before.. even am shocked because am not a writer.

But am here to post one of my work..which I wrote around 2 years back.

Its not a poem or story, just some lines by me. 

Don't expect anything else. 
Sorry if their are any grammatical errors because if its from the heart, language is not an issue.
Don't get bored its quite long.. 362 words Shocked Unbelievable! 
I wrote this during my board exams LOL

P.S-- Its not my story.. just a random thought. Embarrassed
So I'll stop my non sense... and continue with it.
*Fingers crossed*

I liked him,

He liked me,

I loved him,

He loved me,

Life was easy,

Waiting for him to say it to me,

We talked, laughed, shared,

Love was in the air!


I saw myself in the mirror happy, loved, pretty and flawless..

Love was still in the air.

He never  told me he loved me,

But I knew it from deep inside my heart that he did,

Day by day was getting lost in his thoughts,

Actually was lost in a fairy tale.


Then I woke up from my dreams!

Life was never easy,

He never loved me,

He never liked me,

Love was never in the air,

It was just me and my one-sided love!

I was used when needed,

Played with and then,

Left lonely.


Then I saw myself in the real mirror :

I was just a normal, ugly, unattractive girl,

Lost in tears.

Never wanted to see the mirror again.

My life was shattered,

No love. No happiness.

The ending was painful..


I was a girl who could never be loved or liked,

I cried, cursed, thought of taking revenge,

But it was of no use,

Because life would not be the same!


He was happy,

Living, cheerful. No regrets!

My life was full of regrets

Just left everything on God,

Time was my best friend,

Because time was the best healer than anyone else.

And I thankful to God because my life was getting better day by day.

Now my life was something else.


My life was just family, friends and the world except him,

But behind everything happening there was a reason.

It was my fault that I was lost in my Dream world,

I fell down but again I was standing,

My life was again the same!

I was happy without him

No regrets!


But Again the cupid did its work,

I again started liking him,

But this time not like before.

I was never madly, deeply in Love again.


Then I knew that life was a Tangle and will always be!

We can't get rid of it.

The folly human nature.

But I was thankful to God that I was never in my Dream world again.

                                            X--The End--X

Likes and Comments are always welcomed, any type of criticism is allowed. Wink


Edited by ..Ashraa.. - 11 December 2013 at 4:57am

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Ashru loved it. 

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Dhoxi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:31am | IP Logged
OMG that was just brilliant and why didn't you posted it like once you wrote it. Its just so awesome. I love the way you described everythig.

Shall I say one more thing? Embarrassed can you write another one again please Tongue

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-Spirited- IF-Addictz

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
OMG wooow it is like soo wooohooow i mean its like a cute teenager ki dil ki baat Embarrassed

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-SiDsAnGeL- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:48am | IP Logged
OMG OMG Shocked
Ashruuu I wanna Hug U Tight Hug
My Eyes becomes teary after reading this [:6(]

You are such a wonderful Poet..Ashruu I Love u soo Much re Big smile
This Poem is out of the World..m completely Speechless Ermm
U should write more more and More Smile

oh I am so in love with ur Poem Day DreamingThumbs Up

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
its outstandin loved the poem..

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:01am | IP Logged
nycchhh thnxxx fr pm...

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Mindbilowing awsm ashru u r amazing

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