The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41 - Page 3

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ashw99 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very Very interesting...
would really love to read about Arnav's childhood, his schooldays etc.
Thanks for this new story looking forward to know about young Arnav.

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start...plz pm me too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippee a new short story from you, so excited to read more.

The prologue is amazing, eager to read more.

Love the fact the story is going to be based on Arnav and hopefully we get an insight on what he has gone through in his past.

Loved the character sketch, so is Khushi not part of the story?

Continue soon and thanks for the PM xx


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Posted: 10 years ago
So...I saw this in the morning and wanted to reserve the first place so bad but didn't because I knew I wouldn't be able to comment till this blasted week reached an end. Exams and all. But Yay you started a new FF! 🥳

I'll edit this on Friday, okay?

I res!
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I unres. Okay. It's just prologue and it's short, so I read it. And the character sketch as well. Love it. Yes, no one has touched this part yet, as in no writer has ever given this part attention.

So far so good. Liked the first scene. So is it going to be all present or story is going to take a leap and show a grown up Arnav too? I don't mind either.

Good stuff.
Edited by Anarocksick - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
NK seems to be interesting.
But where izz Khushi Bitiy. I wonderz.
 
Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow a new story by you helee...you won't believe how happy i m...
talking about the prologue...this is something new...fiction entirely based on arnav...n m looking forward to it...
loved all the characters n new font too😆
continue soon n thnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved d start
Continue soon
oKBSo thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
intezaar kab tak hum karenge bhala lol!

will wait for you next update
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
res...
i can't believe american standard time thing actually worked for me...will comment later... need to sleep ryt now...😃

edited...
what a wonderful chapter...this update left me ineffable...
this concept of yours is something new n refreshing...i got excited after reading the prologue... i love khushi too but its really interesting to see how arnav became ASR...
coming to the update...
i loved akash in this update...he is mature and understanding...he is eager to help his brother who thought him as a low class cousin of his until today...
i think arnav is not wrong here..after all he is a child..its his father who is the culprit...
u know helee whenever i watched the show n they showed about his past i always used to think that his parents were cowards nothing else...poor kids, both anjali n arnav had to face the consequences of their spineless act...

u made me cry today...what a family...nani, mamiji, akash loved everyone...their selfless love for arnav n anjali left me amazed... 

when they were discussing about his education i was surprised, the people whom his dad never even considered worthy of their friendship are actually sacrificing their everything for both the kids...
specially akash he is just a kid who is ready to use second hand books just because arnav won't like reading used books...this is family...m glad they r in better place ryt now...
loved it...very well written👏

ps:u changed ur font again??


Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago