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Very nice and interesting  Please continue soon

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Sorry for late reply, nice part, interesting too, am loving their characterisation, and I guess as the story progress we get to see more of their character's side, just one suggestion to Priya, I know u r hurt and don't trust on relation but yehi relation aapko Ashiyaan tak laye hain, u can hide the emotion but can't sidelined it, continue plz ASAP and plz if possible then PM me

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Originally posted by jineejiggs

Sorry for late reply, nice part, interesting too, am loving their characterisation, and I guess as the story progress we get to see more of their character's side, just one suggestion to Priya, I know u r hurt and don't trust on relation but yehi relation aapko Ashiyaan tak laye hain, u can hide the emotion but can't sidelined it, continue plz ASAP and plz if possible then PM me
Yes jeeni u are right about priya but ye nahi he ki wo puri trh risto se bhagti he but ye ki uski mental halat esi he ki wo kisi bhi riste pe instantly jakin nahi karpati uska dil bolta he par dimag mana karta he,usse bahat hichhkichhahat me he,wo hamesha dil ar dimag me  se jujhtirehti he ram hi he jo use is muskil se nikalega.

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Guys i did not get enough comments regarding the update,so dont know iether i wil post futher or not.That only depends upon u all.Plz suggest iether i will post ya postpond.

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Please update dear  Such a nice story  Waiting to read it 

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[s][/s]Part-3
                      
                   Dodin bad panchhi ke janamdin ke subha ram yellow rose boucket ke sath ashiyan pahanchta he ar panchhi ko happy birthday wish kartahe.Uske bad panchhi ko apne sath ek mall me le jake ek pyari si dress kharidke lata he ar sath hi dhersare chocolates and icecreams bhi taki panchi wo sab apne dosto ko desake.Lot ne ke bad wo sabke sath milke breakfast karta he ar sam ko honewali party ke tayariya karta he.

Ram-Hei everyone listen to me,sab ko plan ke bare me yad he na ?Panchi you know tumhe kya karna he ?Pnchhi giggles and nodded yes.To me abhi office jata hun kuchh kam karta hun samko party karenge ok.Ar ram wohn se office k liye nikal jata he.

                                              Subhe se lekar afternoon tak priya bar bar ashiyan me phone lagarahi he taki panchhi ko wish karsake but koi phone uthanahi raha,wo neha ko bhi call karrahi he but wo bhi switch off araha he.Wo wohn ja bhi nhi sakti to,kam me dhyan bhi nhi deparahi hogi.Ese sochhte sochhte sam hojati he,to priya last time ke liye neha ko phone karti he.Isbar neha phone uthaleti he,plan jo he sabka karna to padta na.

Neha-Hn priya bolo.Kya bataun yar aj bahat bussy tha phone me charge nhi tha abhi dekha ar charge pe bithaya.Tumne panchhi ko wish kia ?Priya jo bhi bolnewali thi ye sunke chup hogayi kya puchhegi,ulta uskeliye sawal agaya.

Priya-Nahi neha subha se phone karrahi hun wohn koi uthanahi raha ,tum plz abhi panchi ko phone doge kya me use wish karna chahti hun.
Neha-Ok ek mint me use bulati hun,Wo phone pe hi jorse panchhi ko bulati he but actually sab use gher ke bethe hue honge,ar fir panchi phone leke hallo bolegi.
Priya-Happy birthday to my doll,happy birth day to u.Dusri worse koi jawaw nhi milta he to priya ko ajeeb lagta he.Kya hua panchhi priya di se naraj ho kya,sorrybaby me subha wish nhi karpayi,apne priya di ko maf nhi karoge ??Achha suno me tumhare liye ek pyara sa tofa layi hun jab tum cake katlogi tab wohn pe tumhe tumhari gift milayegi,,ab to smile karo ar mujhe ek pyari si kissi do ???

Panchi-Pliya di,me apni birthday party nahi manaunga.Ar mujhe koi gift nhi chahiye.
Priya-Kya kyon nhi manaogi ?Abhi tak naraj ho mujhse ???Panchhi said no.To kyon nhi gift chahiye tumhe ?
Panchhi-Kyon ki mujhe ap chahiye ??Mujhe apke sath birthday manana he cake katna he,isbar to koi bhi nhi he na lamu he na viklam bhaiya azad bhi chota he me kiske sath dance karungi ???Please pliya di isbar party me aona ??Mujhe gift nahi chahiye,agar ap nhi aogi to me aj khana nhi khaunga na hi birthday party me cake katunga na kuchh bhi karunga.Itna bole panchhi neha ko phone dedeti he.

Neha-Dekha priya mene bola tha na tumhe ki panchhi kya jid leke bethi he.Hum ne sari tayari karke rakhi he but wo man nahi rahi.Tum aj party me ati kyon nhi,wese ram bhi nhi araha to panchhi bahat sad he plz uske liye sahi thode der ki to bat he fir chalejana.
Priya-Ummm ok me aungi but sirf panchhi ke liye,use boldena uski priya di uske liye kuchh bhi karegi.

                                       After the phone convo finished neha gave high five to ram and panchhi hugging ram said,"thank u lamu u r d best".Sam ko sab ready hoke garden me jahn party ki arrengement hui thi wohn jate hen.Ram bhi panchhi ko leke nichhe ata he jo ki white frock me bilkul pari jesi dikhrahi hoti he.Fir ram sabko bolta he ki jab tak priya nhi ajati tabtak wo ar vikram andar rehte hen jab priya ajayegi tab hum bahar ayenge ar wo bapas bhi nahi japayegi.
Neha-Ram.ye sahi to he na ?Priya bahat sensitive he yar use dhoka pasand nhi agar wo gussa hogayi to !!Me use hurt nhi karna chahta.
Ram-Chill neha kuchh nhi hoga.Agar kuchh hoga to me samval lunga mujhpe bharosha rakho.
 
                                                                    Kuchh der bad priya ati he,pink and white combination ka saree me uske kalle kalle curly hair ek side pe inup hua he no make up sibaye ek white binndi ar ankho me kajol looking like  dazzling ruuby in the platinum ring.Ram jo ki parde ke pichhe khada hoka dekhraha tha,pehlibar priya ko dekh ke kuchh ajeeb sa sukun feell karta he dil me.priya ki ankho ki  gehrayi,jo bahat kuchh bolne ko tadaprahi ho,uski ghane bal jiski gehrayi wo me koi bhi madhos hojaye.uske simplicity.uski pichhe jhuk ke smile karna sab kuchh ram ko pehli najar me hi bhagayi.Uske labo pe apne ap smile ajata he.
Priya-Wo my lil pari panchhi happy birth day my darling.Wo panchhi ko galle milke kissi karti deti he,bad me sab elder members se blessings leti he.Panchhi tum apna gift nhi dekhogi ?
Panchi-Kahan he pliya di ?
                                  Priya gate ke pas khade hue kuchh logo ko instructions deti he to,wo log ek bada sa glass bowl jo ki ek parde se dhanka hua tha use leke ate hen.Wo bowl itna bada tha jise leke ane ke liye 6 logo ki jarurat thi.Sab surprised the.Priya panchhi ko parda uthane ke liye bolti he.Jab panchhi parda uthati he to khusi se chilane lagti he ar poppet ki tarah jump karne lagti heSab ke muu khule ke khule rehjate hen.Actually wo glass ki bowl plain nhi tha wo ek chota sa aquarioum tha jisme kariban 200 rangbirange machhli the starfish the turtles the pebbles,sea grasses the,bilkul chhota samundar..

Panchhi-Thank u thank u pliya di,i love u.Priya use gale lagate hue puchhti he tumhe pasand aya ??Panchhi use kissi deti hui bolti he bahat ar dono jorse hasne lagte he.Ram jo ki chup ke khada hua hota he ye dekh ke messmerised hojhata he,
Priya-To ab chale cake katne ?Panchhi ar sab log thoda hadbada jate hen.Priya ye notice karti he.Kya hua kisi ar ka intezar he kya ?
Neha-Actually priya bo kya he ki ?woo,wo.
Priya-Kya wo wo lagarakha he,chalo yar panchhi chalo cake katte hen.
Panchhi-Sorruy pliya di.Priya thoda confuse hojati he.Me sirf apke sath nahi apke ar lamu ke sath milke cake katungi.Lmu aona bahar.

                                          Tabhi ram vikram ke sath bahar ata he silly sa smile leke.Priya bilkul stunned hoke khadi he.Uske ankho me kuchh der pehle chalkti hui pyarki chamak ki jagh gussa bhara pada he.
Ran-Hyy Mss.Sharnma am ram,nd handshake ke liye hat badhata he.Priya gusse se neha ke taraf dekhti he,neha to seedhe neeche ke taraf dekhne lagta he.
Priya-Ye sab kya he neha,tumne mujhse jhut bola.Tumhe pata he mujhe jhut se sakt nafrat he fir bhi,mene sochha tha duniya me atleast tum to mujhe dhoka nahi dogi but me galat tha.Ar ap log,ap log bhi usme samil the ?Bilu massi ap to samajhti he sab fir apne bhi is jht me samil hogayi ??
Neha-Priya meri bat to suno ?Hum ne ye sab panchhi ke liye kia plz meri bat to suno me tumhe hurt nhi karna chahti thi plz priya .
Bilu massi-Beta meri bat suno hum sab chahte the ki tum issal panchhi ke sath party me raho.Wo apne priya di ar ram ke sath cake katna chahti thi..
Priya-Sab apne apne wish ke hisab se sochhliya,koi mere bare me sochha he ?Me kya chahti hun ya nhi ?Mujhe kisi ke sath bhi party manani nahi he.Mene galati ki jo aj apsabki jhuti plan me faske yahn agayi.Ye bolke wo wohn se janewali hoti he ki ram pichhe se bolta he.
Ram-Ek min Mss.Sharma,apko jo bolna tha apne bol liya kindely ab humari bat sunengi ?
Priya-Me kisike bat sun ne ke liye forced nhi hun,art khaskar dhokebaj logo ke muu se kuchh sunns bhi nhi chahti.Apne ek choti si bachhi ki sahara liya ye plans banane ke liye ?How sick u are.
Ram-Sick kisko bola apne ?Me koi raste ka romeo nahi hun jo ladki patane ke liye faltu ki nautanki kare.Mene apni jindegi me bahat ladki dekhe hen,mere ajubaju me ghumte hen harroj,ye to me hun jo unkitaraf dekhta bhi nhi.,Me sharif insan hun ar ye sab charecter mere nahi he.Ap bina bat jane ek choti si bat ko kya rup diya he uska andaja bhi he apko ?Mujhe koi souk nahi he apse milne ka agar milne k liye me itna tadpraha hota to 4 sal nhi lagta am ram kapoor do mint nahi lagta apke biodatta pane ke liye ar apko mere samne khade karne ke liye but me wesa admi nahi hun.Apne apni gift dedi panchhi ko apko pata he jitni kareeb panchhi apki he utni meri bhi.usne mujhe kya gift manga tha apko pata he ?Usne apko manga tha use gift me ye chahiye tha to ye ki usko hum dono ke sath cake katna tha.Mere pas itne paise he ki duniya ki koi bhi chij me use kharid ke desakti hun but uski ye gift me paiso se nahi kharidsaktiar uske janamdin pe me use dukhi bhi nahi dekhsata tha.Isliye mujhe yesab karna pada,agar apko ye lafangagiri lagta he to sahi me lafanga hun.
Panchi-Pliya di lamu ka koi dosh nhi mera he,mene hi jid ki thi unse.Ap plz unpe gussa mat ho .Me cake nahi katunga,plz ap gussa mat ho .Wo ye bolte bolte ropadti he. 
                                                                 Priya jo itniderse chup thi wo panchhi ke ankho me anshu dekh ke sambhal nahi pati ar nichhe beth ke panchhi ko sinne se laga ke ropadti he.
Priya- Sorry beta am realy sorry,dont cry priya di tumhare sath jarur cake kategi.Chalo cake kato.Panchhi apni ankhe pochh ke ek hat me priya ki hat dusre me ram ki hat leke cake ke pas jati he priya ram ki taraf dekhti bhi nhi actually use bura feel horaha hoga ki usne bina bat ke itna hungama creat kia.Ram bhi chup hoga.Panchhi dono ke hat pakad ke cake kategi.Tabhi ram ka hat priya ke hat ko touch karegi,dono ek dusre ko dekhenge,ek ajeeb si feeling dono ko mehsoos hogi but dono fir dusri taraf dekhne lagenge.Pnchhi dono ko cake khilayegi ar bad me sabko cake ar chocolates bategi.Party me panchhi ke force karne par priya bachho ke sath dance karrahi hogi jorse haske unke sath khelrahi hogi,ar ram use durse hi dekhraha hoga,uski smile me jesi jadu sa he itna kuchh sunne ke bad bhi ram ko priya pe arahi guusa bilkul sant hochuka hoga.Kuchh der bad priya neha ke pas jayegi.
Priya-Sorry neha mujhe maf kardo ,mene tumhe bahat kuchh kehdiya.mujhe sachh me bahat gussa agaya,tumhe to pata he na me yesab jhut nahi sehpati,plz mujhe maf kardo.
Neha-Are its ok priya,me tumhari dost hun mujhpe tum gusa hosakti ho,am also sorry ki mene jhut bola but panchhi ke liye yesab kia.Agar tum sorry bolna chahte ho to ram se bolo,wo bilkul us type ke ladka nahi he,wo bahat simple he yar,tumne jo bola sayad use bura laga ho.
Priya-Han me abhi jake sorry bolke ati hun,uske bad hospital jana he wohn se phone aya he.
Neha-Ok.
                                          Ram vikram ke sath khade hoke khana kharaha hota he,tabhi priya pichhe se ake khadi hui hogi.Kya bolegi kuchh samajh nahi prahi hogi,kese sorry bolegi ?kya reaction hoga ?Wo dheere se bolti he.
Priya-Mr.Kapoor,Ram mudta he ar priya ko dekhta he fir chup rehta he.
Priya-I,i am realy sorry mene bina bat jane apko itna kuchh boldia mujhe yesab nahi bolna chahiye tha am realy realy sorry.
Ram-Its ok Mss.Sharma,kabhi kabhi galatfemi hojata he.Me gussa nahi hun.Ar actually am also sorry mujhe bhi apko itna kuchh nahi bolna chahiye tha.
Priya-Nahi nahi its ok.
Ram-Then all good.Friends ?Esa kehke wo apna hat badhata he hand shake ke liye.
Priya-Mujhe der horahi he hospital jana he .Esa kehke wo wohn se chalijati he. 

                          Ram surprised hoke wohn pe khada hoke rehta he,use samajh me nahi ata ki usne kya galat kaha ki priya esi ajeen tarikese chaligayi.


(Guys please mujhe is ff me achhi response nahi milrahe hain,agar aplogo ko achha nahi lagraha to bejhijak bolsakte hen,taki me ise postpond karsakun ya agar kuchh chahiye to sudhar saku respond milegi tabhi to likhne ki ichha hogi,mujhe patanahi chalraha he ki likhu ya nahi to plz respond kijiye ki me likhu ya band karun)

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Its  a good story..plz do continue..Smile

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Very nice and different story.  Please do continue

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