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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
                                                                                                                                                                   HUMSUFER-WHO FILLS THE VOID OF YOUR LIFE                                
"Some other crations of mine"

1-OS:Destiny :The truth of life
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3671341

2-OS:Hatred Love
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3625022

3-OS:Rain-The season of love
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3602475

4-OS:Best gift of my life
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3594496
(INTRODUCTION)


 Hello guys me itni achhi writer ni hun bt mujhe books padna acha ar ff padna achalagta he nd after reading ffs in my free times ye intrest badgaya he av mujhe bht time ni milta exam he bt jb padaise boar ho jati hun to socha k kyo na apne imotion ko story ka nam dia jae. Ye story ek imotional lovestory he jhn 'Ram' nd 'Priya' do insan jo ki alag alag background se aye hain ar humsufer banne k bad kese ek dusre k jindegi k void pura karte hain wo he.Pehla part thoda boaring hoga actualy introduction hoga ok guys here i go.  
                                               Intro - "Ashiyan" ye ek esi jagh he jhn dur dur tak vedvaw,jealousness,takrar,chinta jesi koi v chij ni he. Dunia k ek esi kona jhn bahar harpal horahe jhad ka jarasa v effect ni he. Na yahn pyar denewalon k kami he na lene walon k . Kehne ko to ye 5 floor ka ek badasa building he jahn ek bada sa hall he samne garden me taratara k ful hen but khubsurti yhn k rehnewalon me he. Yahn wo bache rehte hain jinko unke paida karnewale mabapne apne hal pe chod dia ya bo jo dunia me ate hi mabap ko khodia bt jb wolog pehlibar "Ashiyan" layegae tabse bo bangae 'special gift of God '. Yahn sirf ye bache ni rehte, jese paudho ko sinchne k lie bagwan hote hain wese hi yahn wo log rehte hain jinki jindegi k ash chutgai thi bt yhn ane k bad wo ash firse jaggai. Koi yhn bacho me apne bache pagae to koi apne natinatin,inmese kitne ma bangae to kitne dadadadi ar nananani,koi bap to koi chacha chachi.          Iss 'Ashiyan' se judi he do ese insan jinke bina ye kahani adhuri he.      

    RAM- Ram Kapoor "The Ram Kapoor"india k bade industrialists mese ek hain.30 sal k umr me Ram ne jo mukam hasil ki he usklie badebade experts ko puri umrlagjati he.Shirf 4 sal me Kapoor group ko ek room k office se leke india k top inRam ne apne scholarship k paiso se apna carior suru kia ar aj wo sab kuch hasil karchuka he.Itna kuch pane k bad v usk jindegi me ek khalipan he.Abhi tak sadi ni ki na koi girlfriend.Girlfriend to dur k bat ghar ane pe koi intezar karne k lie v ni he na ma bap na vai behen na koi v ristedar sibae banshi kaka ko chod k. Jo 4 sal me ram k akelepan k gawah hen. Ram ne unhe ek cook hisabse rakhato tha bt wo khud kapoor mansion k jinmedari le li , islie ram k lie wo banshi se bangae banshi kaka bangae.Ye sab ko chodke Ram ke jindegi me do ar log hain jo usk bahat karib hen.Vikram ar neha , dono ram k sath ek hi orfanase me bade huen hen. Tino me sahi maine me dosti k bondage he.Sath me bade hote hote vik nd neha ne ekdusre ko humsuferchunlia ar do sal pehle bangae humsufer. Ab to unka ek sal ka ek beta he 'AJAD' jo Ram k bahat karib he. Vikram ne ram k sath california se degree pai thi bt jb ram ne apna phesla sunayatha tab bina kuch soche vik ne apne job offers chodk ram ka sath dia aj bo kapoor group ka CEO he. Ar neha delhi se padai khatam karne k bad mumbai me ek college me padati he.Ram 'Ashiyan' se kese juda he wo to ek pyari si bat he. Ram ne hi banaya he 'Ashiyan',wo ni chahta tha ki jo sb usne samna kia he orfanase me wo sab in nanhi kalion ko na karna pade. Usne socha to tha sirf bacho k lie bt neha k dost k soch ne use majbur kia un bagwano k bare me soch ne k lie. Har tarh k comfert di he ram ne wohn har bache ko ache dress ache toys ache schools sb facility jo ek normal bache ko milna chaie. Ar ek khasbat he ram ne ye freedom di thi k jis bache ko jo v karna ho matlb dancing singing swimming cricket footbal kuch v wo sikhsakta jese unko kisichik k kami na ho. Ek normal bacho se jada khus the ye bache. Ram hapte me ek bar yhn jarur ata tha apne akelapan ko vulne k lie ar apnd ashiyane me thoda khusi pane k lie .dustry bananeme usne apni ji jan lagadi he.California University se gold medal k sath degree pane k bad kitne ache executive post ko thukrake wo apne desh me kuch karne chalaaya.

.INTRO-2                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Priya Sharma- Priya Sharma is a very famous cardiologist in Life Care hospital in mumbai.As a docter she remains busy always.It is not dat as a docter she remains busy but she herself wants to keep her busy all time.Kyon ki khali time pe bo apne jindegi k kadbe pan ko yad karna nhi chahti.28 sal ke har bitter experience uske samne ajate hain jab bo khud k liye time dene ki kosis karti he to.Bo hamesha apni family dur vagna chati he ar hamesha karti v he.Bo to ye v sochti heki,why that"Sharma" tag is with her,which remindes her the truth of her life.She always thinks that tag is only to convey the world that she is the daughter of Mr and Mrs.Sharma but bo hamesha se yahi wish kiya he ki kash bo unki beti na hui hoti.Kyon bo log janam diya jab uskeliye usko pyar dene ke liye unkepas kavi time hi nhi tha.Jab v priya apne ma bap k taraf ek kadam badhaya he hamesha undono ko khudse bahat dur paya he.Unkeliye jese priya marriage ko dunia k samne success dikhane ka ek tag tha.Ek dusre se jhagadne se time mile to dhyan de na uspe.Priya ne jab se hos samvalna he tab se dekha he apne ma bap ko har choti badi bat k liye jhagadte hue.Ek bar to class 4 me padte time frustation me ake priya ne school se ghar ane k bajaye park chaligayi thi sochhtha ke usko dhundne k bajese sahi uske parents sath to ajayenge but hua kuchh ar hi.Jab bo ghar loti usko laga tha uske ma bap use gale laga k jee var k pyar karenge ar baki bachho ki tarh bo v apne parents k sath happy rahegi.Lekin gale lagane to dur jab bo ghar loti tab uske parents usko dhundne k bajaye ek dusre pe dosh derahe the priya k gum hone k liye .is bajah se priya bachhpanse hi apone ma bapse dur hogayi thi.Khud ko in jhagdo se dur rakhne k liye usne apni padhai pe concentrate ki ar achhi student hone k karan aj bo ek badi cardiologist banpayi he.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Lekin bo khud ko jese ek band kamre me confinde karke rakhna chati he.Wo sab ke sath mix to hojati he but kisiko apne jada kareeb ane nhi deti.Kyon ki usko kisi bhi relationship me varosha nhi he,use insecurity he.Use lagta he ki agar wo kisike jada kareeb ayega to wolog usechod k chalejayenge jese uske parents usse dur hen.Sadi k upar to uska thoda sa v biswas nhi he.Trust karne me use bahat taklif hoti he.                                                                                                                                       Wo apne 12th class se hi hostel me rahi he but college hostel me rehne k bajaye wo private hostel me rehti thi taki jada dosto se uski interaction na ho.Wo akela rehna chahti thi.The agony of loosing faith on everything took her in a stage that she wanted to weep nd wail out her surrow but can not. She remained numb.There was no geting rid of it,She wanted to escape from that situation & hide harself somewhere else but simply can not .                                                                          After her 12th when she got medical sheat in Delhi, she had to share har private hostel room with Neha due to some circumstances.And it is neha for whome she is coming to normal position slowly.it took 4 years for priya to tell dat she found a best friend in neha ,she told it with so much difficulty.She shared many things with neha but not totally and neha also never forced her.She felt dat she can share her surrow with neha.Avi v kafi hichhkichahat avi v he usme.But kafi badlaw aya he priya me khas kar 4 sal pehle jab neha ko mumbai me lecturship mili ar priya ko lifi care hospital me   posting as a docter.Dono ek hi hostel me rehte the, itne kareeb hone k bawjud neha ar vikram k sadi me priya nhi gayi thi koi surgery k bahana karke but neha knew the actual fact of her absence.                                                                                                                                                                   Rhi bat "Ashiyan" ki jab neha ne priya ko uske bare me bataya tha to priya bahat khus hui thi ar usika idea tha ki sirf bachho ke bajaye ashiyan sab k liye hona chahiye.Actualy nam ki riston se jada benam risto se pyar hone laga tha, use wohn milrahi benam risto ki pyar apne bina trust nd pyar k so called nami risto se kahin bada laraha tha.Isliye hapte me ekbar wo yhn jarur ati thi.Jab bo ashiyan me ati thi to ek alag hi priya banjati thi jese ki khusi ke leher vari hui fresh flower jo jindegi ko jinda dilse jeena chahti thi.Neha bahat satishfied thi ki uske chote se contribution ke karan priya thodi hi sahi khus to ho pati he na.Pria hhar mahine apne salary se ek part apne parents ko vejdeti thi esa nhi he ki Mr.Sharma k pass kuchh nhi tha wo delhi k one of d succesfull industrialist the. But priya ye kehke wo paise deti thi ki wo karja chukarahi he usko paida karne ki,uske manke apne parents k liye itni rudeness vari hui thi.Bki paiso se apne jeene k liye kuchh rakh k sab ashiyan ko de deti thi usi me usko khusi milti thi.                                                                                                                                                Ashiyan k har member hapte k do din intezar karte the ek to kb priya ayegi ar dusra kb ram.Irtne salo se ashiyan se jude hote hue v ram ar priya ek dusre se kav nhi mile hen halaki bahsat bar ek dusre k bare me sun ne k bad v.Sayad kismat ne intezar kia tha sahi time pe dono ko milwane k liye.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           [ps:- guys ye yesi story he jahn ram ar priya milne k bad ram priya k insecurity ko dur karega ar usko relationship me trust dilayega ar dusri ar priya ram k jindegi k khali pan ko pura karegi but yhi he humsufer ki story pehla part sayad agle hapte update hoga criticise is allowed thanks for bearing dis]


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Edited by jeena1993 - 23 July 2014 at 4:07am

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good beginning  it is diff continue soonSmile


Edited by shamavi - 21 May 2013 at 12:56am
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Nice intro..seems interesting looking forward to it..
Cont soon nd plz pm me if poosible next time



Edited by vironikajain - 21 May 2013 at 12:34am
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Very nice and interesting.  Looking forward to it 
Please continue soon
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Interesting continue soon...!
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
ek bohot alag pehlu dikhne ko mila RaYa ke iss naye story me, kehte hain agar jeevan saathi ek dusre ko compliment kare, ek dusre ko complete jate tabhi marriage successful hoti hain, iss kahani me mujhe woh nazaar aa raha hain, plz continue and is possible then PM me, will look forward to read next part

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Well interesting...
Continue
Aashiyaan se RaYa ke milan ki aasha...
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Originally posted by shamavi

good beginning  it is diff continue soonSmile
Thank u.Will update soon.

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