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I have read this story from the start again as I lost the touch with it...it is a very simple and beautiful story of arshi ..I liked its simplicity the most ...no unnecessary characters... No illogical drama...just about arnav and khushi... The plot u chose to start this story is also superb as that night was the huge turning point in their relationship... U captured it so good...very few fictions are written on office theme...I would love to see their office romance more...each update is awesome and lovely...few and concise words ...its really great... You have very nicely portrayed arnav' s emotions whenever he hurt khushi treat her badly...what actually he feels for her and what an intelligent man like him should have done in reality to be with her...everything is beautifully written...I hope u update it soon and I wish u carry this story till the end...
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