#2 Arhi ff: Making you mine,ch 7-9.#3 link pg 1 - Page 47

:(Edited by ..Divya.. - 10 years ago

Shifted from IF!Edited by rotten.tomato - 8 years ago

reswa
nw editwa
itne dinse spamming karne k baad got first spot,tym for celebratn,
thanx to my spamming capacity lolz tht i got this position
Celebration 🥳 🥳 🥳   🥳 🥳
darna mat rotten update k baremain comment karne k liye niche reswa kiya hai 🤣
i'd hav got second positn for tht lekin meri spamming partner bichmein agaye 🤣
luv u all my spamming partners 🤗
tum sab ki bhajese aaj rottenwa ko update dena padha warna yeh thread v khatam ho jata 🤣
next update jaldi dena warna yeh thread v gaya rotten ji 🤣 Edited by MyluvASR - 10 years ago

reswa😛 Edited by dj_arshifan - 10 years ago

main ab sare pg res karlunge hehehe 🤬
i knw... i knw.. i m evil par kya kare yeh dil mangta hi hai more 🤣
no more bakwas nw abt update
Bechara Arnav,Khushi ne hpko phn kiya par arnavko nhi 🤣
yeh aaya maza toh arnavji ko neend nahi arahi hai Khushi k bina,ab next tym Khusiko kahi send karnese pehele zara sochlena Arnav babua 🤣 fabulous update...
P.S-Rotten this ff depend upon u,the way u take so u shouldnt think abt criticism write wht is upto u,dnt give damn to others n zara weekend main update diya karlo bohot wait karwati ho 🤣 Edited by MyluvASR - 10 years ago

aagaye tum... 🥳 🥳
tumhe lagta hai ek din pehle...😲
aur hum e lagta hai bis din baad...😊
anyways,thoda aur intezar toh hum karlenge...tum bas ek bada sa update dena...  

Awesome update *claps*
So arnav is feeling bad after hurting khushi.. Always hurting her and regretting later :p...
Do update soon rotten..
Dn't make us to spam ur thread .. Hehe... :D Edited by ..Divya.. - 10 years ago

EditedEdited by Hawa1997 - 10 years ago

Please try and update sooner, cause after a month I usually have to re-read the story to understand whats happening?

Having said that awesome update..

really its just the sorry that will let go of this restlessness
dude are ya kidding me
but it seems he still hasnt got it
and i think he wont get it for a while either
hey DM what do we do with this fella
dude for a very observing person you sure dont know what your feelings are towards your wife
now if only there was some way for him to realise the same
that would be fun
but how thats the main question
am sure you have an idea of the how now when would be the next question
so arent able to sleep or do anything properly since she has gone
and he still dont get it
he only went to sleep because of her pillow
and the sorry aint gonna stop all these feelings you have mate
but whats the point in telling him that right
cant wait for more now