Virika FF: Married At 18 Ch.21 Pg143 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Such a. Emotional update yer,feeling very very pity for jeevika.i feel like killing jeevika  mom dad dey rso badd.thats. nic how viren is concerned for jeevika.plss continue soon .wnt to see virika marrysoon.thanks for the pms.continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
wow its beautifully written
love it
viren getting angry seeing jeevs scars n on top of all she is nt telling him how she got them n she is avoiding her, i bet next time he won't let her go without telling the truth as she now has the scar on her forehead n the recent burn 
my goodness jeevs mum step father n step sister r so cruel
they treat her worse than an animal how can she bear all this 😭  its so sad

VIREN PLEASE TAKE HER AWAY AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Wow amazing story. Hate Jeevikas family. Her own.mother is so nasty. Hope Viren turns into her good samaritan. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Can't wait to read more
its just so awesome 👏
poor jeevika 😭
continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Oh my God. I had goose-bumps while reading this update.
No, seriously the way you described the scene and Jeevika's POV, I felt so sorry for her.
Her family is a group of sheer rascal.
Just a question, is Jeevika the step-daughter of her mother as well. Like Jeevika's dad married soon other woman and after his death she remarried and is keeping Jeevika for her money?
Anyways, I like the grey shades in Viren's character. I hope he helps her relief her problems.
Great update. Please update FWP as well. Waiting for that one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
gosh so brilliant update...just loved the update dear...they r torturing jeevika so much burnt her hand & made her forhead to be drenched in blood...how cruel people can be...the last prt when jeevs was talking wid her dad really tear formed in my eyes & he really do care 4 jeevs...his concern showed it all...awesome update dear...do continue soon !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
This is so amazing
I litterly cried 
I feel my heart is aching 
Very well written
Do update? His n fwp tooo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Brilliant update...
Loved how u portrayed all the characters..
Continue soon..
Cant wait for the next update..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Amazing!! Superb writting babe
Poor Jeevika I cant wait for Viren to save her
its ok to update soon 😉 infact if next update is ready you can post we wont complain
😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
just absolutely superb brilliant