Virika FF: Married At 18 Ch.21 Pg143 - Page 4

Grusha ! :)

@Kryan_SanDhir

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Of course this is not ur last update..

I loves it.

It's a unique story :)

Please update sooon

N plz pm me

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res

Unres

The first part was absolutely phenomenal

Absolutely loved it

Hate Jeevika's family to death

I just want to beat the heck out of them

Viren and Jeevika's conversation was heart-touching

Loved how Viren wanted to know who hits Jeevika

Viren carry on showing your affection on Jeevika

Please don't discontinue this story it's hard to cope with you discontinuing injured love already

Thanks for the pm please continue soon

Edited by Love_Family - 10 years ago

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starstellie

@starstellie

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

wow this was just tooo good i loved it

its just too good i just wish that she wud stop getting hurt im feeling soo sorry for her

i cant wait fr the nex update

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Mehak

@MehakGera

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

ressy

Unres...

Luvd it so much dear...

Really feel bad for jeevika...

Thank god viren is tensed about dose scars n reason bhind dat

Update asap...

Edited by mehakLUVSvirika - 10 years ago

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

I will be honest now..I loved ur Injured love story that this one when I read this story's prologue..

Now after reading the first chapter I am in love with this story..

Brilliantly written..Loved this update...

Hope the story goes more interesting in the upcoming updates...

You are a good writer..

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon..

Cant wait for the next update...

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

res!!

navvs! wil edit mrw!

too sleepy now

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796038

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

ohkay now viren has nive intensions

hope jeevz is fine and looking ahead for the next chapter

navya its an amazing concept

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aashna irani

@aashna.irani

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

that was an amazing beginning !!

👏

i think its a fantastic concept 👏👏👏

but i just hope viren is not the bad guy but the prince charming in disguise at the end!😃😃😃

really well done ! great job !

continue soon 😃

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Mona Khan. (:

@monakhan.

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

amazing do con.t hope her family those bitches get in so much trouble by viren aww poor jeevs </3 breaks my heart...

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Fari_15

@Fari_15

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb update!!
Loved how u wrote their pov and expressed everything!
It was amazing!
A very different and new concept..looking forward to it!

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