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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged

Hello to all you Amazing Reader of FF Forum.

Here I am with a new work on ArHi. This is my third work piece on this couple.

First FF was A Dark Love Story which has been completed.
Second FF, is still running and it's Jism Se Rooh Tak-Jab Tak Hai Jaan.
And welcome to the third SS
called
 
The Sin
&
The Beauty
 
It is a Short Story and it will consist of 12-13 chapters.
I'll start updating this SS on Sept. as I'm busy now with exam-interns.
 
Giving you the prologue,
tell me if I need to continue or stop it right awayTongue
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Prologue
 
"One day all this will end" screamed my unconscious.
But I was no longer so convinced. I was not at all.
But I suffered all this a thousand times, just to make him feel good and, in some ways, close to me. I would rather go to hell rather than viewing him in the arms of someone else ...
I stood up looking for the strength in my legs and went into my room. I didn't look in the mirror and reached the cabinet.
I took the first trouser and a shirt pocked and put them on. I plopped down on the bed and grabbed his picture, holding it to my chest.
- Forgive me ... - I sobbed, closing my eyes.
- Forgive me if you can-the sobs continued to shake my chest, while my eyes were falling more and more. I felt the full throat and stomach burn.
The muscles were paining and skin was burning.
I fell asleep, probably.
But it was a busy sleep. I felt hot, so hot. As if I were in the flames of a burning fire. As if you were burning inside.
But, most likely, it was just what was really going on.
I was burning.
 
***
Continue or not?
 
It's a Khushi's POV
 


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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Nice Prologue,different from ur Darkff.  Continue fasr after ur exams.
Wish u Good Luck for ur examThumbs Up

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Intresting plzzz continue!!

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
parm ji,
 
congo on ur new work ji
iam so happy to know that u have started a new story
 
great prologue - sounds interesting
will wait for u to start revealing the story
all the best for ur exams ji

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intresting

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interesting prologue please continue

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