ArHi SS: The Sin&The Beauty..PROLOGUE

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Hello to all you Amazing Reader of FF Forum.

Here I am with a new work on ArHi. This is my third work piece on this couple.

First FF was A Dark Love Story which has been completed.

Second FF, is still running and it's Jism Se Rooh Tak-Jab Tak Hai Jaan.

And welcome to the third SS

called

The Sin

The Beauty

It is a Short Story and it will consist of 12-13 chapters.

I'll start updating this SS on Sept. as I'm busy now with exam-interns.

Giving you the prologue,

tell me if I need to continue or stop it right away

For PMing,

check below ji

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Prologue

"One day all this will end" screamed my unconscious.

But I was no longer so convinced. I was not at all.
But I suffered all this a thousand times, just to make him feel good and, in some ways, close to me. I would rather go to hell rather than viewing him in the arms of someone else ...
I stood up looking for the strength in my legs and went into my room. I didn't look in the mirror and reached the cabinet.

I took the first trouser and a shirt pocked and put them on. I plopped down on the bed and grabbed his picture, holding it to my chest.
- Forgive me ... - I sobbed, closing my eyes.
- Forgive me if you can-the sobs continued to shake my chest, while my eyes were falling more and more. I felt the full throat and stomach burn.

The muscles were paining and skin was burning.
I fell asleep, probably.

But it was a busy sleep. I felt hot, so hot. As if I were in the flames of a burning fire. As if you were burning inside.
But, most likely, it was just what was really going on.
I was burning.

***

Continue or not?

It's a Khushi's POV

Edited by DUGGUlicious - 16 May 2013 at 2:39am

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Nice Prologue,different from ur Darkff. Continue fasr after ur exams.

Wish u Good Luck for ur exam

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged

Intresting plzzz continue!!

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parm ji,

congo on ur new work ji

iam so happy to know that u have started a new story

great prologue - sounds interesting

will wait for u to start revealing the story

all the best for ur exams ji

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intresting

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interesting prologue please continue

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