The Ghost of You and Me -OS Part II Page 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story Steph..πŸ‘
thanx for PM..

Edited by titli4love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing OS πŸ‘ thanks a ton for the pm
its to depressing and sad but its beautifully written...i felt for ur rk and his pain 
please do write a part 2 to this os if u have time and undo rishbala's wrongs😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice OS. RK's feelings have been very beautifully described.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

depressing but realistic this is exactly how it will be when madhu's revenge is executed...though you should write Madhu POV tooo because I am certain it wont be a happy one either...



Aww Thank You.. It means alot coming from a great writer like you... :)
I'm currently working on Madhu's POV too.. :) I'll post it if I feel like it.. hehe..
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Posted: 10 years ago
res will read it and edit it later

i m sure its awsum

mughe pm deti rehna apne updates ke  plzz

luv u steph
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow steph! ur writing is sooo descriptive! marvellous OS! but d ending was a total cliff-hanger! wow again. 

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Posted: 10 years ago
That was amazing Steph! When I first saw your warning I was like. 'Oh no!'. Because I'm not very fond of sad stories. Still how can I not read your OS! So I gave it a try and whoa I was very much happy I actually did read it.

You have depicted RK's emotions so well. It actually stung my heart to see him like that. Yeah, it's hard for me to see my RK that way. Still I know RK's at fault. I loved it how you went down the memory lane as to why Madhu was provoked to do this. Therefore, we can't actually blame her either. haha and I'm glad you didn't mention the unwanted person in your OS! Phew! The mere mention would have been a killjoy, but of course you know better! πŸ˜‰

The last words of RK.. Aww now I'm going to go sulk in a corner. 

Fantastic work again Stephiness! I would love to read more work from you! πŸ˜Š *huggzzz*


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Posted: 10 years ago
Only one word- BEAUTIFUL!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nooo!!! RK :(
Beautifully written! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb os..but cant u write a second part atleast to let us know what madhu'll do than..pls