I will give.. but b4 that i have 2 think something which can go by ur story.. If i m not wrong Onir n Shonali r yuvraj n yuvrani..thats supercool i like it..
Zara increase PuNir scene quantity in ur update..i like ur ff PuNir..n deal between Deshmukh n Royal usko thoda fast forward karke deal ho gaye n after that a Party..where the royal's can meet Onir n Shonali..