Posted: 05 May 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Haaalllooo honey bees... It's me Faria Kushal Tacker.. I'm presenting you my first FF on VirMan, One Mistake, an unwanted fate...
One Mistake will reveal the bitter truth of unwanted fate and vicious part of VirMan's destiny.. A life where love will be paradise but still it wont be enough for them as a everlasting joy. You may come across with a gloomy world, filled with tortures, pain, hurt, guilt, regret, and suffocation. Hope of ray will be there, but how long will it last will be a mystery.
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Virat Singh Vadhera:
-belong to the high profile lawyer family aka The Vadhera's
-Heart throb New York Film Academy (NYFA)
- A complete flirt, extremely mischievous and a bad prankster!
- however when he is home he is completely opposite! In short best child a mother can wish for!
- Moral of his life: jiyo... Jine do chill maro :p
Viren Singh Vadhera:
Same as the show!
- have all the qualities of a good son, grandson, husband n of course best brother!
- he is the best critic n buddy of virat! Only one who is allowed to pull virat's leg!
- partly mischievous but not as extreme like virat!
- knows all the secrets of virat and
supports him no matter what!
Jeevika Viren Singh Vadhera
- not bechari like the show one!
- hates tears!
- chilled out fun going n bubbly girl
- partner in crime of virat! 2nd best friend of virat n 2nd mom too
- cousin of Jeevika ( both r single child so they just love each other like behnas however no OCD :p)
- miss red nose! Attitude is her charm. Ego is her pride (better not to mess with her)
- hates to wear Indian dress! Only jeevs can make her wear them.
- heart throbe of beeji
- prankstar n a rockstar
Rest of the characters r same old same! :D however dabba is not married n there is no sweety !
- best friend of virat
- boyfriend of jenna
- is a good boy but virat's partner in crime
- famous girl of NYFA
- used to date virat but now with Raj
- good from heart but a jealous one
New York - 8 am boys hostel
An annoying alarm clock woke up everyone except Virat.
Raj- virattt uth jaaa mere yaar subha hogaye! Aaj late nehi hosakte final exam hai... Miss Ria will be pissed if u r late this time! Remember last week was ur last warning??
Virat- go to hell let me sleep! Will take care of Miss Ria...n fall back to sleep covering his face with blanket
Raj- yeh kabhi nehi sudhrega... Ok 15 mins baad uthjana Mai phir se alarm set kararaha hu...
Meantime someone called raj ... So without looking he set the alarm for 45 mins instead 15...
He put the clock on the side table n left without fixing his mistake (he is so dead!)
Virat (v)- again taht annoying alarm woke him up n he just hit the clock which shattered into million pieces... N thn slept for another 15 mins... Usually his routin is like taht.. Hit the clock n go back to sleep!
V- Half Sleep half awake he checked his phone to see the time n screamed "9:10!!! Shittt...got up really quick took shower.. Wore his favorite white shirt with jeans. And just ran for his class!
Finally reach the class room door!
V- may I come in ?
Ria (R)- turned n gave him a dead look... Oh Mr Vadhera y not after all it's ur kingdom. Rules n regulations are for nothing!
V- stepped inside n was about to say sorry but stepped back outside cuz she gave him "u r so done" look
R- virat step outside n rest of u buck up u got only 30 mins to finish ur paper.
V- damn she is on fire... Better do something or else ...
Raj- (thinking) virat beta tu toh aaj gaya... Waise late Kyu hua ?? Alarm toh thik se lagaya tha maine.. did I?
Ria- wat is this virat? Did u even realize that u are late for ur final exam?? I mean there is a limit for everything!
V- oh Miss Ria u know I am never late for exams! U see it's all Raj's fault he set the clock on wrong time n I woke up late n all this!
R- but taht doesn't mean u r not responsible for it !
V- I know I know.. N I'm sorry for it. Btw u r looking gorgeous today . This purple suits u very well! Mr. Baker will faint today
R- oh shut up! Ur flattery words won't work today!
V- but I never lied! N gave a billion dollar worth of smile
R- l don't know y I'm giving u this chance...
V- cuz u r my sexiest professor :)
R- silly boy! However u r getting 15 mins penalty so hurry up n finish ur test.
V- fair enough! Thanks
He finished his exam n left the room t
Raj n bunch of other friends were in the hanging around ...
Virat throw a basket ball at Raj n hit his chest!
Raj- ouch .. Wats wrong with u?
V- ur timing for the alarm was wrong. N u asking me wats wrong with me?
R- umm did I? Well sorry thn but u finished ur exam na no big deal!
V- yah no big deal however wat will Jenna do to u will be a big deal
R- wat u mean?
V- sat on the grass n said "nothing much I just told her u were flirting with Saly n was about to make out with her :p
R- wat the... Virattt.. Swallowed n said "f u ... U jack ass y did u do that..."
V- scoffed n said "b4 u murder me u might wanna control her temper cuz she is burning like a lava"
R- I hate u do much! U r the worst friend I can ever have.
V- I know :p now run
R- just ran n look for Jenna
Princy-good morning everyone! You all are welcome to NYFA! Feel like ur home. These 15 days will be a time to remember! Hope you all enjoy n burn the stage. Saying that he head toward his office n other professors took care of that meeting. Later, all of themwere lead to NYFA hostel.
**** 10 students came from London Film academy for a play... They will be paired with NYFA's best students. This play is for Make a Wish Foundation (charity organization for cancer patients).
Princy call virat n some other good students such as Raj, Jenna, Maya n ...
P- good morning students. Today I have called u all for the Make a wish foundation play which will take place in 15 days!
Everyone shocked cuz it was their spring break n they only get 1 month to spare
Raj- sir u r kidding rite? I mean our vacation just started n everyone is going home.. N that charity suppose to take place after our vacation is over!
Princy- I know I know... Am sorry for it. I tried hard to change the date but London academy princy was pressuring me! I understand ur feeling. But please do this for those patients..n all the students are here. Will start the rehearsal tomorrow.
V- guys we can handle it... Let's do this for them...
Raj- was shock to hear this from virat cuz he was excited to go back home! After all, it's been 4 years since he have seen his family!
He whispered to virat n said "you r saying this ? R u ok?"
V- stared at him for 1 min n just smirked
R- understood him.. N said "ok fine but we want extra days for our vacation since we r skipping it for that charity"
Princy- ummm sorry taht can't happen because all the classes will start at the same time n I don't want u all to miss it. However u guys will have extended day to complete ur assignments! Fair deal?
Raj was about to say something
But virat interrupt n said "deal! "
Everyone was mad at him but didn't say anything...
Princy- cool see u all later! Have fun at rehearsing and yes u guys better be nice to them! Ur action will reflect NYFA status! So keep that in mind n behave
V- (in mind) don't worry princy will make them feel like home. London waliyos be ready cuz virat Vadhera will show u wat u have done!
All of them exited princy's room
Raj- wats cooking virat?
V- tandoor! Want some?
R- come on.. Wat r u up to? N y did agree with princy? Don't u wanna go home early?
V- just looked at him with a dead look.
R- ouch! Calm down.. I guess will manage.. See ya... N he left with Jenna
( raj ne Jenna ko manaliya n he promised her to take her on a date )
Meantime Jeevika called virat
J- virat! How are u boyfriend ?
V- girlfrienddd wats up?? How r u? How's bhai? N Ma vo thik hai? Dadaji ka gussa kaisa hai?
J- pheww breath ... One question at a time... Everyone is fine dadaji's anger reduced a bit ... Na is fine misses u ton. U don't have the time to call her ha?
V- it's not like that girlfriend ..my class timing sucks. N I didn't wanted to call u all late night.. So sorry but I miss u all a lot. Tell Ma I love her n will see her soon.
J- ya ya... Wait wat "see her soon" R U Coming homeee???
V- bit his tongue. He wanted to give surprise. Ummm vo Mai
J- virattt?? Mai abhi ma ko bolrahi hu...
V- no no no ! I wanna give surprise n u wanna spoil it?
J- o I see... Ok fine I won't tell anyone but wen r u coming?
V- well that's a surprise!
J- oh come on.
V- girlfriend thora toh patience rakho... I will come.. Very SOON!
Leave that.. Tell me how's bhai? Bhai se kabse baat nehi hui... Kaha hai vo?
J- ur bhai! Don't ask me... He is so mad at u n the reason for it is self explanatory
V- cares his hair n said... Aaah I'm sorry ... I know I know I have been jerk n havent msged him for a month.. Is he really mad? I mean mere bach ne ke chances kitne hai?
V- ouch. ... I guess I better be ready for his scoldings
J- u better ... U know virat.. Since last week he visits ur room every day after returning from home. Plus IPL is going on n he is really missing u. N he haven't watched a single match for IPL!
V- wattt! Bhai n missing IPL... Aaa I'm so dead.
*** both brother never missed a single match of IPL cuz they always watch together ****
He was walking n talking... And he hit a girl's who was passing by him...
G- ouch...Since he is all muscular n all it hurt her a bit... She turned to see who that jerk is but couldn't see only his back was visible.
G- jack ass! Don't they have any curtsy to say Sorry? Urghhh I hate NYFA. Thank god I buttered princy to prepone the date or else I had to cut Short my vacation ... N he just left to see princy
V- didn't realize whom he hit so sorry toh door ki bast hai...
Ok girlfriend I gotta go i have to deal with sum business...
J- virat is koi saitani karne ke toh nehi soch raha?
V- girl friend did I ever do anything wrong? U know me well rite..
J- oh no... Tum kabhi nehi sudhroge... Just don't get in trouble ok?
V- yess ! Bye love u take care n hosake toh bhai ko mana lena... I will call him soon.
J- bye! Take care n ha khana thik se kha lena...
V- ya ya will! Bye
G - may I come in?
P- yeh sure come in..
G- good morning sir... I am ________
P- nice to meet u miss ________
G- the warden said u wanted to meet me?
P- yeh! Actually I have to discuss about the play for MWF (make a wish foundation)
G- go ahead...
P- so we have already selected ur partner for the play! This is ur partner : Mr Virat Singh Vadhera! The heart throbe of NYFA... Hope u two make a cute couple
G- interesting ... Name is cool hope he is good enough for me.
P- oh ya he is... All the girls of this academy loves to work with him. N y won't they he is handsome .. Umm wat u all call it? Ha SExY.. Hahah hope u have fun working with him. N ya if u guys have any issues just let me know ..
G- ok then... I guess that be all?
P- yah.. See ya at the play! Have fun rehearsing ... N ya it starts tomorrow sharp at 9 o clock.. Don't be late cuz Miss Ria hates those students who r late to her class..
G- lol sure u have a good day sir.
P- u too n she left!
G- miss Ria... Mr virat.. Watever! Will see u both tomorrow. For now let's check out wat do they have here.
Thank you for your time... let me know if you liked it or not.. Part 2 is below
Edited by Faria12345 - 30 August 2013 at 5:49am