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NushIsh

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Posted: 19 June 2013 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
So Nikhil and Radhika are going away together. 

Sounds like fun. And I agree with Aaru I also want to find out how Raj and Aisha's story turns out. 

Waiting for Nikhil and Radhika's adventure to unfold, he certainly brings out the best in her. 

True that you posted this before YJHD but it has a bit of a ring of Naina and Bunny and also jab we met how Shahid and Kareena just take off on an adventure of their own. 

Your update was unusually short considering that you usually write extra long updates. So hopefully the next one will be long and we can see more of the devilish grin from Nikhil and more of the wild side of Radhika. 

PS: This post was my 100th post  

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Posted: 20 June 2013 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
Love u baby!!! Finally u gave something for my boy!!! And I'm sooo falling for him. Smart guy... Checking girls luggage ahem bad boy n good observation... "u didn't have a phone n u had ur family pic in ur bag" I wish all boys were that smart rofl!!!

Hold safe driving first of all!!! Nikhil is crazy or wattt India driving n London driving is hell a lot of difference!! But lOveee fast driving!
Well... If u wanna be adventurous thn just go for it... Waiting for Cornwall saga.. 2days with him... I will murder u if u don't give me Nikhil parts / POV thn Radhika..

It's his place so I better get stuff I wannan readdd!!! Make this Radhika a bit interesting... She is dull rite now..:/

But this chapter was really niceee I lie the swimming pool section... <3 infect loved everything actually...
Oh dear Sally! Update soon yaar u literary take agesss to write n post >_ < will be waiting n being impatient... If u can make my boy a bad boy..: little fun will be just alright :p

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 3:57am | IP Logged
You know I think I should get a few tips from you about how to make a reader fall in love with a fictional character...Its one thing to see someone in a show or movie and drool over them, it's another to just read about somebody and go crazy over him! Nikhil's descriptions, man, don't I want to be in Radhika's place now!LOL
Great updates!Thumbs Up I really dunno where this story is going, but I simply love reading each chapter. I seriously hope you change what you said to me in the last reply - that you are gonna end it soon. I generally like to read short stories in forums, (I lose connection with the long ones, unless its already completed) but I really really wish this one goes on for a whileSmile

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nishalrockerz

Oh Dude! :O um In Second Chapter N um Addicted! 

Its Just Awesome! Cant Wait What Is Next Reallly Liked Nikhil's Character! Now Um Addicted So Please U will Update Quick Lol !! xD n I Have To Complete It Quick Its Wow!! I LoveEd It !!
Originally posted by Nishalrockerz

Awwwhh!! Love Love Love It!! It Was A Sweeet Updatee!! 
Love The Friends Circle!! Radhika Is Sweet! But Lil Bit Serious too Lol well superb i love it!! N Ya I Love The Mention Of Mr.Darcy!!
Great Going You Keep It Up !! :D
Originally posted by Nishalrockerz

Lalalalala!! Um Done With Part 5 too!!! 
Lovely Updatee!! The Way He Was Saying k come n u drive the car!!! WoooW!! Now I Want Next Please! :O

Smarty, is this you? Thank you so much for all the amazing comments! I love it when you guys comment chapter by chapter <3 I am sorry Radhika is a bit serious! LOL Mujhpar gayi hain! Kidding! 

Thank you for awesome comments! Mwah!

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by IAmAaru

Done!

Sowwiefor my previous lame reply.. was  tired but i wanted to be the first one who replied!
Well well well.. The Cornwall trip sounds interesting!

And dont make Nikhil Smile devilishly. Cause each time he does that My heart flutters and stops beating!!! <3

Putting aside my craziness.. Its getting really interesting!
Btw! my suggestion.. I dont know what you have in your mind.. but mere liye.. can you revolve around a chapter on Raj and aisha! i want to know more about them!! pretty please!

It wasn't lame! I like all your comments <3

Even though he smiles devilishly, he isn't really a devil. Well, maybe not :P But kamini, your heart flutter at EVERYTHING! -_- LOL

Ah, I will try giving a special chapter on Raj and Aisha, maybe the part where they rreunite? pata nahi. I will try. And I have the story in mind, you will see them, don't worry. :)

Thank you! Love you! Mwah!

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NushIsh

So Nikhil and Radhika are going away together. 

Sounds like fun. And I agree with Aaru I also want to find out how Raj and Aisha's story turns out. 

Waiting for Nikhil and Radhika's adventure to unfold, he certainly brings out the best in her. 

True that you posted this before YJHD but it has a bit of a ring of Naina and Bunny and also jab we met how Shahid and Kareena just take off on an adventure of their own. 

Your update was unusually short considering that you usually write extra long updates. So hopefully the next one will be long and we can see more of the devilish grin from Nikhil and more of the wild side of Radhika. 

PS: This post was my 100th post  

I guess they are. I was initially going to make them tour the London instead, but I didn't have time for research.
Raj and Aisha...I will try to give you guys an extra chapter. Plus, the story is not over yet, patience my dear! LOL
*Sigh* I am sorry. I try to be original, but an amateur is an amateur anyhow!

I posted 2 chapters, it made up one I guess LOL 
Wild side of Radhika? That's hard, lol! I will try! 

Thank you for the awesome comment again! Love ya!

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