Posted: 15 May 2013 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Destiny.
Originally posted by Faria12345
And once again I love chapter 2! Best thing about your story is its not like a typical goody goody story... What I mean by that... Usually when a girl leave her house to escape from arrange marraige parents tend to break the relation with them however here her parents is cool with the fact taht she needs space n want to live her life to the fulliest untill she is commited to someone.. How I wish my mom is like that lol. 2nd thing, She had to carry her own luggage.. LOL usually guys do the job but like I said he got a unique style which I adore the most.. Or I think he didn't help her to carry the bags cuz it was London which means DO UR OWN WORK. Forget that.. This two things were catchy...
Lastly Aisha n Raj hahahahah god raj is a nice guy although he tired to kiss her when she was drunk but hey he bare those Galiya n got beaten up by her ... Awww poor him... Honestly hen Nikhil was saying don't be scared when u see her.. I thought a dog gonna jump on her or his mother will be scolding or any such..
Ok I know u write limited like 2500 words or so which I hate the mOst! So have mercy write more n update soon! N yes ur previous story wasn't a romantic one or so but idk if this will be or not. Or if u write any romantic ones or not.. But really wanna see some romance but not so soon.. N u better do a good job to portray nikil cuz rite now he is my sweet heart
Lastly thank u for writing this story really enjoyed
Oh boy! Such a long comment girl! Thank you! Will reply to first one later, because I need to clear up a misunderstanding!
Raj DID NOT kiss Aisha. Some other guy was and Raj bit up that guy! Because that guy was Kissing his best friend and he didn't like it. I think I will have to edit that part.
THANK YOU SO MUCH! You reminded me of what I have to do! I rewrote this whole part after I had reached like 1300 words because I wasn't happy with it, and completely forgot writing about carrying luggage! I will edit that! Thank you so much!
LOL! She is fiesty! :P I like Aisha in my story, let's see what I can do with her though. Dude! 2100 words take my fingers to aching-land, you know? I write this in an hour or wo and it hurts like bitch -.- I will try writing upto 3000, cant go beyond that.
This is a romantic story, and romance will come up. But it is more of 'drama'. I am not sure how I will settle romance in this, but you will surely not see any cuddling and kissing until much late. I dont think you will see cuddling at all, actually.
Thank you for the amazing reply Faria! Love ya!
Oh that's cool when u edit them let me know will re read it... N for romantic part it's ok if I don't get romance taht much but I better see some good attitude n roughness in Nikhil's character or Radhika... When ever u think "ROmantic scene" is needed just do it cuz I have a feeling ur story will be awesome without the romance too so it doesn't really matter have read ur previous story so ya.. N since u said it will be a romantic one so hopes r kinda high but no pressure do it ur way !! N long comment haha u will get more when u write a LONG one! Will be looking forward to 3000 one haha