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peeyara

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 12:19am | IP Logged

Hi everyone,  I am starting a new ff/os/ss ( I don't know how much I'll be able to write). The thing is jitna mujhe reading karna pasand hai us se kahin zyada likhne se nafrat hai phir bhi socha k lets give it a try. Hope you all like it.

Character Sketch:

 Ram Kapoor: owner of Kapoor industries, a self made man, has only dadi and one brother(who 'll be introduced later in the story). He is calm and composed and always sees the positive side of every situation and he never gets angry

Priya Kapoor: wife of ram kapoor, she is good at heart, emotional and also very weak at heart so always tries to show to people how arrogant she is ,very stubborn and if she has decided something she definitely make sure k it happens , get irritated very easily but vent out her anger only on the persons she loves. She owns an NGO which is for old people and children (in Mumbai) .and also she works as lecturer at a college  

Dadi: ram's dadi who lives with her sister

Sudhir Sharma and shipra Sharma: parents of priya Sharma. Sudhir is responsible for her stubbornness because he always listens her and fulfil all her wishes. Shipra is smarty she knows how to make her daughter do things which she don't want to do------by emotional blackmail

Shiney Sharma: brother of sudhir Sharma. He is a total comic and loves his wife a lot , can do anything for her

Niharika Sharma:  wife of shiney whose whole world revolves around parlour, kitty parties and all

Ayesha Sharma: daughter of shiney and niharika who aspires to be a super model, priya hates her and thinks she is the most stupid girl of world she has ever met. Priya and Ayesha can't stand each other. They always keep taunting each other.

(sharma's are renowed business family who are settled in Punjab, since priya has no interest in business and also she don't want the lime light of media so she has started an ngo in Mumbai and she's settled there)

Part-1:

A newly married couple is walking on railway platform trying to find the train in which they have to board. The bride groom is wearing golden color sherwani and bride is complimenting him with red and golden color combination's lehenga.(They are ram and priya). Finally they finds the train which is fully decorated with flowers and TT welcomes them and ask them to board the train.

They board the train  to reach their destination that is ram's ancestral house which somewhere in Punjab. After making themselves comfortable:

Priya (who is very unhappy n frustated with her sudden marriage): ye train itni decorated kyun hai aur isme koi passengers kyu nahi hai?

Ram: wo actually dadi ne sari train hamari liye book ki hai

Priya: kya? Hamare liya poori train'oh god!

Ram: wo mai to chahta tha k hum car se jaaye par distance long hai aur dadi ki wish bhi thi  isiliye mai mana nahi kar paya, I hope its ok for u

Priya: ab isme mai kuch kar bhi toh nahi sakti na, toh its ok. Waise aap ke pas abhi laptop hai?

Ram: what laptop,  abhi?

Priya : ok '.tabloid ya ipad hai?

Ram: ipad(confused)

Priya: acha cell phone to hoga ya wo bhi nahi hai?

Ram; par kyu,  ab uski kya zaroorat hai?

Priya : aapke pas hai ya nahi?

Ram: haan hai..ye lo

Priya opens her mail and starts typing something and ram starts peeping in toh priya ko gussa aata hai and she says: aapne employer ko mail kar rahi hoon ke mai meri sudden and unexpected shaadi  ki wajah se job chod rahi hoon

Ram shouts in surprise: tum ne mujhe bataya kyun nahi k tum job bhi karti ho

Priya: oh sorry, mujh se to itni badi galti hogayi shaadi to aapne ki hai na mujhse to aapko sab pehle maloom hona chahiye tha

Ram thinks to himself kya pagal ladki hai aur dadi ne isse meri shaadi karadi,, ab to ram ji hi bachaye mujhe)

Ram: nahi mera matlab wo nahi tha

Priya : nahi nahi  mujhe to sab batana chahiya na, to suniye:

Hi,  mera naam miss priya Sharma arey sorry sorry abhi to mera naam bhi badal gaya mera naam hai mrs priya ram kapoor, mera fav color white n green hai, mujhe books pardhna acha lagta hai, mujhe smokers, drinkers aur juha khelne walo se saqt nafrat hai aur hai jhoot bolne wale , trust torne walo ka to mai murder karne se pehle ek bar bhi nahi sochungi, mai ek number ki ziddi, arrogant ladki hoon, aur jab ek bar kuch soch  leti hoon na to wo karke hi rahti hoon(she gives her intro in one go)

Ram( in undertone):  priya tumne to sirf apni burai batai apni achaye to batayi hi nahi

Priya slaps her forehead and thinks maine itne gusse se sab kuch kaha phir bhi  is ko to zara bhi gussa nahi aaya)

Priya: burai batana zaroori tha kyunki ab aapko mujhe lyf tym ke liye jhelna jo hai, thodi aasani hogi aur rahi baat achaiyon ki to aap mere pati hai aur sari umar hum saath rehne wale to dhoondh lena aap hi meri achaiyon ko

Ram: waise ab mujhe bhi tumhe intro dena padega kya?

Priya : ji nahi iski koi zaroorat nahi aur jab zaroorat hogi tab mai pooch lungi..abhi mujhe rest karna'gud n8

Ram: gud n8

Ram smiles seeing her and thinks to himself she has the third and fourth quality also which I wanted in my lyf partner.(3rd quality which ram wanted in his lyf partner was she should speak to him without any fear and that too by directly looking into his eyes kyunki jo bhi ram se milta hai wo ram se nazre jhuka k baat karta hai some out of respect and some out of fear and 4th quality : she should be straight forward in expressing her thoughts and that to honestly)

Precap: Flash back t: how these two people with different personalities were united in auspicious relation


index:

part 1:1

part 2:2

part 3:3

part 4:5

part 5:6

part 6:8

part 7:9

part 8:12

part9:14

Part-10:15

Part-11:19

Part-12:20

Part-13:24

Part-14:29

Part-15:34

Part-16:39

Part-17:46

Part-18:52

Part-19:58

Part-20:60

Part-21:63

Part-23:69

Part-25 A:79

Part-25 B:82




Edited by peeyara - 07 July 2013 at 7:49am

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 12:47am | IP Logged
wow nice start love it 
Niharika & mama ji hubi & wife and their daughter Ayesha ???? like it
looking frwd d nxt pls continue soon 
pls PM me if possible 

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 1:02am | IP Logged
to good continue soon?
LIke in 3 sec** If u see a heart...♥

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Very nice start... Clap
Mamaji nd niharika couple or ayesha unki beti..acha hai..LOL
Raya re already married...very interesting..
Cont soon

kaparikh1

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Awesome start pls continue...

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 2:50am | IP Logged
Nice start:)
Please continue...Smile

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Wow its awesome dear. Continue soon.

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Good  start  Continue soon

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