SS : KAREWA chapter 15 updated page 30...1st june - Page 13

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by enchanted23


Arti your update speed is amazing very tough for me to keep pace with it,so apologies for being late will try my best to get to it as soon as possible from now on' 

 aww thanks adi nothing like tht a group hug will compensate all 🤗😉


Chapter  4 : That profound statement from Kesar at very young age "bada hoke main usse apni manmaani nahi karne dunga said it all na'." she was his Gulaal from then on'it was just matter of time'..till he had his way'his touch, his looks, his talk everything about him screams that he has grown up and is attracted to her, But what surprises me is that Gulaal expected anything less from him, he should have known this from the way he had said "Tera Pati aur Kaun", bechari pata nahi kaunse bhram mein jee rahee hai....thanks adi i think gulaal had a slight prmonition of wht future might bring thts y she maintained a reasonable distance with him may be the envouirnment his friends and collegues make him forget this whole fiasco aah so wrong gullu he grew with this pati jaap 😆 

Chapter 5 : Kesar bought the ring for her and she extends the hand to take it not wear it 'gosh Gulaal bhi na'kab samjhegi'I like this sheepish Kesar,he is making his moves and poor Gulaal ko toh kuch pata bhi nahi'hey bhagawaan Gulaal kabse itni buddhu ban gayee'.Bechari Gulaal this shana kuda is taking full advantage woh bhi without any sharam kyun nahi aakhir biwi jo hai, Gulaal should know by now rather than get his work done from someone else,he was going to make her pay for staying away all those years, till he understands the reason right now he is pyar mein lattoo munda who doesn't even know he is in love'Preeto seems more intelligent than Gulaal here,but I guess Gulaal is trying to turn a blind eye to something very obvious, hope she will learn soon'...yes kesar is returned as a total fia husband and gulaal is scared by his sudden behavioural changes lets see whts ahead

Thanks for lovely updates , I will try and catchup with rest of the chapters later today or tomorrow thanks alot and me waiting 🤗

Edited by arti07 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by SilverFairy


Sweet Chapters.

thanks alot 🤗
Posted: 10 years ago

 

              chapter 8

 

Next morning gulaal stood up she was determined she went straight into biji's room

Biji saw her she was worried gulaal tu..yeah kya haal banaa kar rakha hai aur tu itni subah baat kya hai"

Gulaal looked at biji and she went near her she sat near her feet and said "biji baat hi aise hai ki mein khud ko rok nahi paayi'biji meine kesar k liye kuch socha hai'. aapse anumati lena chahti hun"

Gulaal explained wht she had in her mind

Biji looked at her curiously she said "par kesar maanega"

Gulaal said avoiding her gaze "kyu nahi biji'ek se ek ladkiyaan hai sundar hai padi likhi hai aur kesar k umar k hai k saath achi jodi rahegi"

Biji remained silent she took a pause and said "par itne jaldi kya gulaal kesar abhi abhi to lauta hai sheher se"

Gulaal said nervously "biji der bhi to nahi kar sakte naa" looking at her with imploring eyes

Biji nodded her head in consent

 

Kesar slept till late morning preeto came in his room and woke him up kesarveerji kesarveerji

Kesar rubbed his eyes and looked around it was 11 in the morning he got up and asked gulaal ghar par hai kya?

Preeto nodded her head and said haan wooh hein aur biji ne aapko neeche bulaya hai jaldi se aa jaaiye

Kesar took a huge sigh of relief he nodded his head and said aata hun

After sometime kesar came in the drawing room of the huge mansion gulaal was standing near the pillar and biji was seated on a sofa in the vintage interior

Kesar gazed at gulaal'she lowered her eyes in anticipation'..kesar swallowed and with the hesistant steps stood infront of biji

He asked curiosly"biji apne bulaya"

Biji looked at him and said aa mere pass beith and she made him sit beside her

Kesar sat and smiled "ji biji boliye kya kaam tha"

Biji asked "kesar factory mein kaam kaise chal raha hai"

Kesar replied bahoot acha looking at gulaal he said gulaal ne is factory ko itne ache se sambhala ki mujhe karne ki jarurat hi nahi padi he said proudly and stole a side glance at her

Gulaal looked away

Biji smiled and said "yeah to achi baat hai''..  tera jeevan sawar jaaye hume aur kya chahiye'''..tere liye kuch socha hai meine"

Kesar looked at her curiously

Biji said "par usese pehle tu yeah bata kya sheher mein koi tha jo tujhe pasand hai?"

Kesar was puzzled he asked "matlab"

Biji asked directly "matlab koi ladki?"

Kesar shuddered''''.. immediately he got up and said "biji kya kah rahi hai aap? meine kabhi kisi aur ki taraf nahi dekha, sach looking at gulaal nervously

Biji smiled she put her hand on his shoulder and said "janti hun mera kesar aisa nahi hai aur ab tak nahi dekha to ab dekh le she extended some snaps at him

Kesar was perplexed he took those snaps in suspicion and asked "yeah kya hai biji"

Biji smiled and said "yeah kudiyon ki photo hai thek se dekh le rajjo ne poore pind se sabse sundar aur sabse achi ladkiyon k tasveer inhe dekh aur bata tere rishtey k baat kanha chalaye"

Kesar eyes widened in shock his eyes fluttered and he threw away the pics in disgust "yeah kya kah rahi aap biji hosh mein to hai"

Biji stood up and asked "ki hoya betaji tasveer pasand nahi aayi"

Kesar was restless he said "biji kya ho gaya hai aapko kaise baatein kar rahi hain aapka beta aur apki bahu aapke saamne hai aur aap meri dosaari shaadi k baat kar rahi hai'.pointing at gulaal he said "gulaal meri patni hai uske rehte yeah sab?"

Biji looked bit shocked she took a deep breath and said "tu kaise baat kar raha hai kesar'she paused looking at him suspiciously she asked kahin tu karewa k baarein mein to nahi kah raha"

 

Kesar looked in other direction trying to hold the storm in him

 

Biji said putting her hand on his shoulder "dekh kesar tujhe is baarein mein pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai'' panchayat ne tujhe par koi dabav nahi daala hai tu is rishte se inkaar kar sakta hai koi majboori nahi hai is rishtey ko nibhane ki."

 

Kesar brushed her aside and said "majboori? kisne kaha aapse ki yeah rishta meri majboori hai biji...mujhe is rishtey se koi pareshani nahi hai" looking at gulaal who was hell nervous''"yeah rishtey meri majboori nahi balki meri marzi hai" he said looking at her with possessiveness'.

 

Biji replied "kya bak raha hai tu 'gulaal aur tera karewa majboori mein hua tha sab jante hai ki is rishtey k koi maayne nahi hai"

Kesar looked at her surprisingly he was shattered he stammered "k..kya kaha aapne'.saari zindagi meine yahi manaa ki gulaal meri patni hai hamesha is rishtey ka samaan kiya aaj aap kah rahi hai ki is rishta k koi maayne nahi hai" he looked at her with tears in his eyes'..gulaal was blank at the moment she didn't knew how to react she wanted to runaway but seems like her feet were glued to the floor

Biji said "kesar mein janti hun tera aur gulaal ka rishta atut hai ''..tu bahoot manta hai gulaal ko'saari zindagi tu gulaal k ugli tham kar chala hai''par beta shaadi alag baat hoti hai tu nahi janta par ek pati aur patni ka rishta bahoot alag hota hai'.uska ehsaas wooh pyaar alag hai kesar"'she tried to be reasonable

 

Kesar took a dep breath and then looked at biji with firmness he said "aur mein usi pati aur patni k rishtey k baat kar raha hun biji'..

Biji was numb, gulaal was shattered''..

He looked at biji and said h"aan biji mein wahi pyaar aur rishtey k baat kar raha hun"''..Biji looked at him in disbelief she sank in chair blankly'''

He turned back and looked at gulaal with utter passion looking straight into her eyes he started walking towards her he said "haan biji jo ehsaas ek pati k man mein apni patni k liye hote hai

wahi mein mehsoos karta hun gulaal k liye'.'''kaise batao mein aapko ki mein kya mehsoos karta hun kaise batao ki wooh mere liye kya hai''mere wajood mein samayi hui hai wooh ''..meri sansoon mein khusboo k tarah mahakati hai wooh''' he kept moving'looking at her'. meri ankhon mein khawab k tarah behti hai wooh'.mere dhadhkan mein basti hai wooh'.. gulaal meri khwaish meri manzil meri ibadat meri chahat"

 

 he stood infront of her with tears welled up in his eyes he looked at her and said "mera pyaar"

 "aur yahi mere jeevan ka sabse bada sach hai"and he blurted out'''''''. the feeling tht he kept hidden for many years finally found a vent'his emotions got an audience''''.

 

Gulaal looked at him in disbelief unable to bear she pushed him aside and was about to run but kesar caught her hand and said  passionately "mein tujhse pyaar karta hun gulaal bahoot pyaar karta hun'.. hamesha se karta aaya hun''' I LOVE U"

 

 gulaal was shoked her mouth parted in horror she stood there for some time in silence as if the words fall on her like a thunder bolt threatening to plunder her whole being...she closed her eyes in desparation and yelled "bas" 

she yelled "bas'aur nahi sunana hai mujhe"''putting her hands on her eyes she shouted'.."paap hai yeah kesar" and she wept bitterly'''.."meine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tu mere saath aisa karega"

"paap hai yeah kesar'.."

Kesar looked at her in confusion he held her with her shoulder and asked "kya bol rahi hai tu? Tu meri patni hai'..ek pati k naate'''tujhe chahne tujhe pyaar karna mera haq hai phir yeah paap kaisa hua"

gulaal shook off her shoulder and said "kaunsa haq kis haq ki baat kar raha hai tu"

kesar holded her back and said "wahi haq joo tune mujhe diya tha "

 tune khud sabke saamne mujhe chaddar dalne ko kaha tha bhul gayi kya?

He said "tune poore gaav k saamne mujhe apna pati kaha tha'.tune hi to kah tha mere haq hai tujhpe'''.? Phir ab yeah kya hai kaise paap ho gaya yeah" he asked in the cracked voice

He was unable to decipher y she his wife was denying him to be her husband

Gulaal said "kyunki yeah rishta meri majboori tha samjhoota kiya tha meine halat k saath' rab janata hai meine tujhe kabhi bhi pati nahi manaa"

Kesar was in tears "pati nahi manaa aur phir bhi shaadi kar li''..? kyun ?" he questioned her

Gulaal lowered her eyelids

He stood silent for few minutes

Gulaal tried to speak to him "dekh kesar mere baat sun''.mein samjhati hun tujhe ki'.."

kesar wiped his tears and shouted back "mein kuch nahi samjhana chahta mein'gulaal naa mein kuch janta hun aur naa kuch sunana chahta hun''mein sirf itna jaanta hun ki tu meri patni hai itne barso sirf tujhe chaha hai meine pal pal tere saath jindagi beetane k sapne dekhe hai'..tu chahe is rishte ko majbori samjhe yaa samjhota par meri liye yeah rishta meri jindagi hai aur is sachaai se koi inkaar nahi kar sakta"

Gulaal looked at him in anger and said "nahi kesar yeah kabhi nahi ho sakta"

 Kesar was in tears

She pushed his hand aside she started moving upstairs

He climbed upstairs and blocked her and said "tu aise kaise kar sakti hai mere saath tujhe meri zindagi barbaad karne ka koi haq nahi hai'''..hum pati patni hai aur tujhe is sach ko sweekar karna padega"

Gulaal threw a angry glance at him and said "bas kesar kaan khol kar sun le kesar tu chahe jo samjhe par sach yeah hai k mein teri patni nahi hun'nahi hun"

Kesar shouted "to phir yeah chudiyaan yeah rang yeah shringaar kyu'gulaal dekh apne aap ko yeah chudiyaan yeah laal rang yeah bindi yeah sab is baat k gawah hai k mein tera pati hun'.aur tu is gao mein''' is jagah mein' yanha tak ki is ghar mein sirf meri patni ki haisiyaat se hai" losing all his control on himself

 

gulaal was shocked for a second she was broken into pieces  she said looking into his eyes "kya'kya kaha tune mein is ghar mein sirf teri patni ki hasiyaat se hun"'.closing her eyes in desperation she said "acha hua kesar jo tune mujhe bata diya'.acha kiya"

she wiped her tears and went inside her room shutting her doors on him

kesar banged her door and yelled "gulaal tu aise nahi jaa sakti'.tujhe mujhse baat karni hogi'gulaal'gulaal"

he shouted at the top of his voice

few minutes later

kesar walked to and fro in the room'he was restless and his heart in tatters'.biji was shattered she was blank at the moment she was unable to respond emotionally to them in ways appropriate to the situation she was miserable she was helpless then'she was helpless now

gulaal opened the door she was determined'.her luggage was packed'

biji and kesar looked at her in shock slowly she climbed downstairs and stood before biji

biji looked at her in confusion she asked "gulaal yeah sab kya hai yeah saman'''tu kanha jaa rahi hai"

gulaal touched biji's feet and joined her palms'''..with tears in her eyes she said "mein yeah ghar chod kar jaa rahi hun biji'''aaj tak mein is ghar ko apna maana meine hamesha yahi socha ki yeah ghar meri pehchaan hai'nodding her head in denial she said kitni galat thi mein'kitni galat thi mein biji mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki meri koi hasiyaat hi nahi hai" looking at kesar with contempt'."yeah sheher se pad kar aaya hai humse jyada samajhdaar hai isne samjha diya mujhe ki mera wajood is ghar mein sirf iski patni ka hai aur kuch nahi'."

Wiping her tears she said "to mujhe is ghar mein rehna hai to iski patni ban kar rehna hoga haina'''par mujhe yeah manjoor nahi''''"

kesar was in tears his impassioned maybe unintentionally barbaric words hurted her'but he was confused all sorts of logic failed him'''.

 

gulaal walked towards him and said "mein is ghar mein sirf teri patni ki haisiyaat se hun haina'to nahi chahiye mujhe yeah wajood'.nahi manti mein is rishtey ko aur ab tere saath mein ek chat ki neeche nah rahungi tera yeah ghar yeah gao yeah rishta tujhe hi mubarak ho kesar"

throwing an angry glance she walked past him

kesar's heart pounded heavily'''.. the well of painful emotions crested and spilled over'her words torn him

his heartbeat was beating frantically wht if she leaves him? How will he survive without her? His mind went blank,,,,,tears burned at his eyes and he struggle to breath as the words spilled from his lips "ruk jaa gulaal"

he ran and stood before her and grabbed her hand"tu kahin nahi jayegi gulaal'tu mujhe chod kar nahi jaa sakti"

gulaal retorted back she pushed his hand away "tu mujhe nahi rok sakta kesar'mein jaa rahi hun hamesha hamesha k liye teri zindagi se dur jaa rahi hun "

kesar felt lifeless...his mouth opened in horror

He quickly turned and saw her reaching the front door he shouted madly "ruk jaa gulaal tu kahin nahi jaayegi"

but she refused to listen

kesar was adamant his madness now reached a crescendo'..in the fist of anger he grabbed a knife in his hand and shouted out "gulaal tu agar gayi to mera mara hua muh dekhegi"

and he took cut his wrist with knife his wrist felt sore and stung painfully''..blood gushed and ran into his hand'..soaking everything in blood

biji was terrified she screamed kesar yeah kya kiya tune

gulaal stopped she turned and saw blood puddle on the floor her eyes widened  filled with horror her mouth opened in scream "kesar yeah kya kiya''khoon" she said in extreme shock

kesar refused to listen anything he was in a frenzy his eyes reddened with rage he said madly "tu kahin nahi jaa rahi hai gulaal"

Biji cried "koi roko ise"

Kesar said looking at gulaal with burning eyes "koi nahi rukega mujhe'''.ise mere deewangi ka pata to chale"

gulaal said cryingly "kesar yeah paagalpan hai" 

 

Kesar said with obsession "tune mera paagalpan dekha hi kanha hai gulaal''''Himmat hai to jaa kar dikha mujhse door"

with this he cut his hand again

gulaal went pale she screamed "kesar kya kar raha hai" moving towards him

he said "jitney kadam tu is ghar se jaane k liye bhaadeyegi utna hi khoon mera yanha behega'tu kahin nahi jaayegi gulaal'..tu kahin nahi jaayegi"

gulaal trembled with fear''she was so frightened tht she couldn't think  but his eyes were drawn to her he was possessed by a strange fierce obsession'. Suddenly his head spinned he felt the room swirled around and around he felt dizzy his vision blurred'''he fell on the floor and collapsed

gulaal and biji ran towards him they took him in their arms and cried bitterly'''''

he mumbled in the state of unconsciousness "tu mujhe chod kar nahi jayegi gulaal"

 

Edited by arti07 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
ok guyz the new chapii is here 🤗 
Posted: 10 years ago
res 😭 missed you arti tu theek hai na gotta rush will be back 😭
EDIT
Aww Arti pehle you should take care of your health😭😭😭Get well soon.Take plenty of fluids and ample amount of rest first chappis can wait Awww pls GET WELL SOON..
Okies now coming to the fultoo arti ishtyle awesome mad deewangi wala chappiii🥳 m still dancing like this wohooo
Abhi diwangi dekhi hi kahan hai tune hahhahahhahhah😆😆😆Matey ab bhag tu kahan bahgegi..Ok I am blown over by this Deewana Kesar awww Mian sadke jawan but haath katan is so not good BUt pala jab the GREAT WALL OF SANOUR se pada hai toh desperate measure toh lena hi thaAwww diwane ko bacah le yaar Gullu
Dekhta hun tu kaise ghar chhodti hai😳 WAY TO GO !!Kesu par haath na kaat re..Deewangi is good but haath mat kaatKoi kesu ko bacahooo Gullu 😡😡😡😡😡
Okies breathes ..Coming to the wowest and awesomest confession lines👏👏👏👏 Loving it totally⭐️ BTW there was a tiny moment where I absolutely adored him ,bechara he was like aian maine toh koi ladki nahi dekhi lagat hai gullu ko shaq hua hai..nahai biwi I love only you but wah😭 becahre ko kya shock laga idhar biwiw ne hi uski shaadi karane ki planning kara rakhi hai
update when you get well arti..Till then waiting with bated breath POOR KESU😭
Edited by manzilmukul - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Arti tu pakka baroda gayi thi na . 😭. .now come to chappi . . .Arre baap re . . .arti . . .inna pagalpanti wala chappi . . .i loved every line of it . . .all of us knew that gulaal will do the match making stuff . . .and poor kesar photos dekhakar bhi pooch raha hai . . .yeh kya hai .😆 . .and then he gets the shock of the century . . .the relationship which is the very base of his life is being called bemaaiyne by others . . .it is such a pathetic condition . . .i loved each and every line uttered by kesar . . .haila . . .inna romantic confession . . .meri saanson ki khooshbu , meri manzil , meri chahat , meri ibadat .😳 . .oh god only gulaal would not melt on such words . . .and then how logically kesar puts the point that she lives in the house as his wife . . .and we know when kesar talks logic what does gulaal do . . .she runs away .😡 . . .seriously yar i never understood teri gulaal aur show wali gulaal ko bhi . . .matlab ghar mei rehena hai par kesar ki patni ke haq se nahi rehena . . .show mei bhi jab mota bha ask gulaal ki woh iss ghar mei ab kis rishtey se rahegi she just replies ki mujhe ghar mei rehene dijiye . . .she just simply avoids the stark question . . .why ji . .jab kesar ko pati nahi maanana toh ghar mei kis haq se rahing .😡 . .so here too she takes her bags and starts her journey while poor kesar cries . . .And then comes the most amazing twist which i just loved loved loved . . .the majnu kesar takes over helpless kesar . . .i know the knife and all is typical scene par pata nahi kyu yeha bada achcha lag raha tha . . .i loved how he says abhi isne meri deewange dekhi kaha hai . . .hahaha aur gulaal ki batti gul . . .loved the scene yar . . .ab itna dhamkane ke baad bhi kesar ko kaun MIL ring de gayi . . . .jaldi update kar .
Posted: 10 years ago
nahi pinki actually hospital mein thi zalim docs k beech...still under the strict survillence of my mommy dearest 😭...u know this ss is bday gift for piu and mini thts y wll complete it anyhow 😭 nahi to mein to bas ab bhagna chahiti hun 😭 feeling low 😭 will reply later on chorry 😭 
Posted: 10 years ago
OMG arti . .i just read tujhe food poisoning ho gayi thi 😭. . .summers mei yeh bahoot kharaab bimaari hai yar . . .awww u just take care . . .reply ki chinta mat kar . . .aur jab theek ho jana toh story puri karna . . .abhi rest kar . . 
Posted: 10 years ago
Take care arti😭😭😭 Aram kar drink lots of fluids and strict boiled food  Get well soonStory aur reply ki chhod hum idhar hi wait karing tu aram kar pehle🤗HUGS unres done on pg 16😳
Edited by manzilmukul - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
awww Arti I hope you are completely fine now.You should be taking rest na.We can wait for the updates.Taking care of your health is more important right now.Be careful and have plenty of liquids.Take care ok.

I am so sorry the weekend is a little hectic so I have not been able to read the update yet but I will do it tomorrow morning and comment right after...I apologise for the delay😭

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