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[QUOTE=sandiab]What a sweet chapter just loved prishna and the sargam and pintu where just awesome.[/QUOTE)The next chapter I think has come out very well...I loved writing <font color="#0000ff">it</font>...Thanks for liking this one...
Shanti has any1 ever told u that u are a total tease. Lol i think i said this twice to u.

I am...and those who know me ----know that I am...but tell me isn't it fun!!!!LOLLOL
lol i so dnt expect this reply from u. This ss is bringing out your true personality u should have started it sooner.

??? LOL Me a good girl!! Big smile honestly...Smile

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Chapter Seven ' Pintu's absence felt

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Pintu gets ready and comes down to the breakfast table. All had already assembled there and he was the last one. Krishna and Sargam were serving and all others were seated. TTS notices that Pintu was yawning away.

TTS: Pintu Singh, looks like you need to rest a bit more. Hope you don't have any shoots today.

Pintu: Yes, Babuji'I am quite sleepy as I hardly slept last night.

He then realizes what he had just said. Krishna who was near him pinches him hard---hard enough to remind him to be careful of what he spoke but not to hurt him! He looks at her and she gives him a stare. He gives her a look of apology which was caught by Babloo.

Sargam all along knew that these two were so happy and she felt happy for them. Though she never got her share of love from Babloo she never complained. She loved him and was willing to wait patiently for him to love her back. Babloo was still unable to accept her as he was not able to forget his feelings for Krishna. However, he was happy for Prishna'just that he could not have a similar feeling for Sargam as he had had for Krishna. Maybe he required more time---a lot more than what he had imagined when he decided to marry Sargam.

Once they were done with breakfast, Krishna and Sargam too joined and Pintu offered to serve them.

Sargam: Devarji, all these days you never bothered to do what you are doing today.

Pintu: Yes, I agree'.but just in a day I have realized how important it is to keep your wife happy in your own interest. So, I better see to it that she is taken care of!

Sargam and Krishna share a smile.


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As they were clearing off the table after finishing, Pintu gets a call. Krishna was in the kitchen putting away things in place.

Pintu comes there and says: Krishna, I want to tell you something.

Krishna thought he was again trying to play around with her.

Krishna: Pintuji, please let me finish my work. It does not look nice if you keep hanging around me all the time.

Pintu: But listen Krishna please come to our room as I have to tell you something.

Krishna: What??? Our room??? No way Pintuji, it is so embarrassing for me. I am not coming now.

Pintu goes away as he knew Krishna wasn't going to listen now.

After about an hour, when Krishna was done with all the pre-preparations for lunch she realized that Pintuji was nowhere to be seen and so decided to go up to find out if there was indeed something important and urgent that he wanted to share.

In their room


Pintu was sitting in deep thought. He never slept though he was tired.

Krishna comes there and asks him: Pintuji, what's the matter? Is everything alright?

Pintu (smiles): Yes, Krishna. I got a call that I need to go to Mumbai for a very exciting shoot and it looks like this is going to be a great break through for me. I need to leave tonight for 3 days.

Krishna's heart sank but she managed to smile at this great news. It was a wonderful news for his career and an opportunity he could not miss.

Krishna: Wow, shall I help you pack then?

Pintu: Yes, Krishna that's why I wanted you to come.

He removes his clothes and other stuff and Krishna neatly packs up his suitcase. Once she was done, she realizes that her eyes had tears but she did not want to cry. She held them back and wanted to leave the room.

Pintu: Krishna, do you still have some work in the kitchen? Can't you stay with me for a while?

Krishna stops but could not look at him as she was sure to break down then. It could make it even more difficult for him to go.

Pintu: Actually, I am going to miss you.

(He walks closer to her as he said those words.)

I don't think I can now stay away from you even for a day. What will I do Krishna?

He had gone close to her by then. She was on the verge of tears. He turns her around and sees that the tears had started to roll down by now. He holds her face and controls his own tears. He then hugs her. Both of them begin to sob. They stopped talking for while and just kept holding on to each other and not wanting to be separated at all.

After gathering themselves, they decide to just sit down beside each other.

Pintu: Krishna, sorry I did not expect this to come up now'just after our marriage.

Krishna: No Pintuji, it is fine---and also after last night------I am----like ---very very happy!

She now gets a bit shy as she had confessed about their closeness and her being happy about it. She begins to blush and Pintu sees in her a radiant glow---one which he wanted to see for a long time and he was glad to be the reason for it!


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Sargam got to know about this news and felt bad for Krishna. TTS too told Pintu that he should be more careful when he took on assignments as now he wasn't alone. He had a responsibility towards his wife too. Pintu agreed and then by evening it was time for him to leave. Everyone wishes him best of luck and he sits down in the car. Krishna goes up to him and from outside the window she shows him a "bye" ---with a smile. He waves to her as the car moves away.

That night Krishna kept thinking about the previous night. She was so much filled with emotions at the care which Pintuji had shown to her. It was after all the first time she was with him---alone. But his tender ways of touching her, not rushing her into anything too quickly and also appreciating her little ways of expressing her love was all coming back to her. He was so understanding, so loving and so nice that she had completely fallen "in love" with him in the complete sense. In fact, she also knew that he was so good looking and quite irresistible to stay away from. She started smiling a little as these thoughts ran through her mind.

Her phone rings. It was Pintuji.

Pintu: Haven't you slept, Krishna?

Krishna: No----not yet.

Pintu: Why?

Krishna: Not feeling sleepy that's all. Have you settled down comfortably there Pintuji? Please rest as you need to be fresh for your first shot tomorrow morning.

Pintu: I know. You take care and I'll be back soon and then we can continue from where we left----remember what I told you? I have a lot more to offer!

Krishna smiles as she could see Pintuji was trying to cheer her up as much as he was trying to do the same to himself.

They hang up and both go off to sleep.


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Next morning, Babloo was getting ready to go to his centre when Krishna wanted his help on some books to select for her Mains. She thought these three days she could catch up with some studies. Babloo notices Krishna to be a little depressed because of Pintu's absence. He somehow could never see her unhappy. He gives her the names of the books and leaves quickly from there.

Krishna spends the day by keeping herself immersed in her books as Sargam offered to take care of other things at home. That evening after Babloo returns, he was in his table as usual writing something, when Sargam comes there with a cup of tea.

She then says: Devarji and Krishna are so loving. I am really happy for both of them. Krishna hasn't been the same ever since he left yesterday.

Babloo: Yes, I know---I feel sorry for her. It must be tough for her to stay away from the one she loves so much.

Sargam: Who can know that more than me? It is not easy ----at all.

Sargam was getting emotional as she said these words and Babloo could catch what she was probably trying to say. Sargam quickly realizes that she should control herself and leaves the room. Babloo however, had started wondering about Sargam's words. He did feel guilty.

When after dinner Sargam returned to her room she as always walked towards the study table to give Babloo his glass of milk but did not find him there.

I am here Sargam ---Babloo said.

He was on his bed sitting there and waiting for her.

Sargam goes to him and says: Sorry Bablooji, I have always seen you only on the study table so I went there looking for you. I did not know you wanted to retire early today.

She hands over the milk to him. This time Babloo touches her lightly as he took the glass of milk.

Sargam feels good and looks a little away from him. He could see a smile on her face.

Babloo: Sargam, please sit here next to me.

These were words which Sargam was dying to hear for so many months now. She sits down nervously next to Bablooji and waits for him to say what she probably wanted to hear desperately.


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What did Babloo say? Was it what Sargam wanted to hear?

You will know in the next chapter.

Hope you all enjoyed this as well''.

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Wow, wow and wow what an excellent chapter Shanti. U have out did yourself. The pain of separation, longing to be 1 by all 4 where amazing to read. And the few moments of happiness that krishna remembered oh my word beautiful. Prishna are beautiful. I always respected babloo bt as the show went on neither did i hav love, lik or respect for his character. Bt u made me love him here. I am afraid to hear what he says i hope he dnt tel sargam of his feelings for krishna. I dnt want to see her hurt. Shanti really beautiful chapter u hav truly surpassed your previous work. This is an exceptional chapter. And u a good girl gone bad lol.

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Wow, wow and wow what an excellent chapter Shanti. U have out did yourself. The pain of separation, longing to be 1 by all 4 where amazing to read. And the few moments of happiness that krishna remembered oh my word beautiful. Prishna are beautiful. I always respected babloo bt as the show went on neither did i hav love, lik or respect for his character. Bt u made me love him here. I am afraid to hear what he says i hope he dnt tel sargam of his feelings for krishna. I dnt want to see her hurt. Shanti really beautiful chapter u hav truly surpassed your previous work. This is an exceptional chapter. And u a good girl gone bad lol.

Thanks a ton Sandia for all your kind words...(except the last one!!!!)

Actually you won't believe I wrote this chapter without thinking much...just let my thoughts flow as I typed...I had a story in mind already as I do with all my work ------but I never planned this one chapter---no rough draft----at all...
So I am happy that you loved it...Smile

Thanks again...


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Another great chapter Shanti,,was choking up and the tears came for my favourite jodi of course,,loved this part immensely :-
 

He had gone close to her by then. She was on the verge of tears. He turns her around and sees that the tears had started to roll down by now. He holds her face and controls his own tears. He then hugs her. Both of them begin to sob. They stopped talking for while and just kept holding on to each other and not wanting to be separated at all.

After gathering themselves, they decide to just sit down beside each other.

Pintu: Krishna, sorry I did not expect this to come up now'just after our marriage.

Krishna: No Pintuji, it is fine---and also after last night------I am----like ---very very happy!

She now gets a bit shy as she had confessed about their closeness and her being happy about it. She begins to blush and Pintu sees in her a radiant glow---one which he wanted to see for a long time and he was glad to be the reason for it!

 
 
 
Loved Krishna's memory of their first night, such pure-deep-respectable love for each other,,
Hope Babloo surprises Sargam with nice words and makes her happy,,
Will wait for update,,and bring my Pintu back soon,,


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Thank you Lisa...for loving the chapter...

What Babloo says...you will know in a day or two...

And Pintu will return...soon ...to his Krishna!

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Chapter Eight ' Pintu returns

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Babloo had to now be careful with what he spoke. He was a nice person with a golden heart ---however, he still did not feel the same way as Sargam felt for him.

Babloo: I am Sorry Sargam for taking this long ----- actually I do feel guilty as I have not been fair to you. You are a very nice person and have been a great wife and daughter in law to this house.

Sargam was feeling good to hear something at least about her from her "man" and it sounded soothing. She was still waiting to hear more ---for it was the first time Babloo was speaking about her---about them maybe!

Babloo continues: I still need some more time though it is already late ---but please try to understand me. I am not able to see you as you want me to.

Sargam had got it. It was not yet to be. Her wish had to wait for longer. Her patience had to stretch for more. Her eyes were filled with tears because she thought it was a new beginning for her ---for them ---and their relationship.

Babloo sees her a little sad and places his right hand on her left.

He says: Sorry Sargam to make you sad.

She starts crying and wipes away her tears with her right hand and draws away her left from his and gets up. She then takes the glass which she had given him and slowly walks away. She comes down to the kitchen and puts away the glass. She stands by the sink and gives way to her tears. She wept as hard as she could. She had never shared with anyone that there had been "nothing" between her husband and her in the last so many months of marriage. She always maintained a happy face and never let out her yearning to be accepted by him. Even when she saw Krishna and Pintu and their togetherness, she only was happy for them and hoped that a day would come when she too could feel the same way.

Krishna had been studying and came down at that instant to fill up some cold water. She sees Sargam bhabhi there and wonders why she was sad. There was no reason according to what her mind told her except maybe some misunderstanding between husband and wife. She was too new in the house to ask her about it --- so she decided to keep quiet and makes a little noise as she entered into the kitchen to give Sargam enough time to gather herself and keep her emotions " a secret" which Krishna knew she would have wanted to as any other woman.


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That night Krishna had mixed emotions as she went to bed. Will I also go through such trying times in my relationship with Pintuji? He is so nice and it is just a day ---but I wonder if I can ever take it should he get upset with me in the future. It must be so painful for Bhabhi.

Her phone rings. It was of course Pintuji.

Pintu: So you haven't slept yet again?

Krishna: Pintuji, how are you and how was your day?

Pintu: It was good ---very tiring --- but successful. Krishna, hope you are fine there. The new environment, people and me not being around ---- worries me a little.

Krishna: I am fine Pintuji --- and am catching up with my studies in your absence. But I am worried about Bhabhi.

Pintu: Why what happened to her?

Krishna: Nothing, I think she is a little sad that's all ---but I don't want to ask her the reason as it may be something that she may not want to share with me. I am so new here Pintuji, that's why.

Pintu: Don't worry, Krishna Babloo bhaiya will take good care of her. He is a great husband too ---just like me, you see!

Pintu tries to make the talk a little humorous though he was also worried about his bhabhi as he loved her a lot.

They then say bye and go off to sleep.


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The following day Sargam was normal as always with a cheerful look as she went on with her breakfast routine. Babloo knew she was sad but wasn't somehow able to do much.

Sargam: Babuji, with your permission may I start doing some job?

TTS: What? But why bahu? Why should you work?

Sargam: No Babuji, just to keep myself occupied. Otherwise I know there is no need for me to.

Babloo: Sargam, why don't you come and assist me in my centre ---that way --- you will be of help to me and can spend your time out of the house meeting more people too.

TTS: I think that is the best idea. It will be good that you go out and yet be in a safe and secure work place.

She agrees as she finds this yet another opportunity to win over Babloo.

She gets ready and leaves with Babloo for half a day to begin with. Krishna quickly finishes off the work along with Ganga and gets on with her studies. She felt better that at least Sargam bhabhi went with Babloo Sir and all was not that bad after all.


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In the evening, as everyone was relaxing after getting back home, they hear a horn and the sound of a car/taxi. They wonder who it could be. Sargam goes to see as Krishna was up in her room studying. It was Pintuji. He had returned a day earlier. Sargam was so happy to see him. She smiles a big one and Pintu indicates to her to keep silent as he wanted to surprise Krishna. She nods and gets a little near him.

Pintu: Bhabhi, how are you 'and how is your devarani?

Sargam: Devarji, I am fine and she is fine too ----but is missing my Devarji!

Pintu smiles: As much as your Devarji missed her!

He then blinks and goes inside to just wave to Babloo and others and goes up towards his room.

Krishna was busy with her books. She did not expect him and so there was no chance for her to look at the door or anywhere at that time. He sneaks in and stands right behind her.

Pintu: Now that's what is called a good student!

Krishna is startled on hearing his voice from behind. She turns around and he was there standing with a huge smile.

She gets up immediately and in a moment puts her arms around his shoulders and goes close to his face. She could not stop herself anymore. She starts showering kisses on his cheeks and chin and tries to move up to his forehead which she wasn't able to reach so easily. So Pintu quickly lifts her up by bending down and holding on to her thighs. Now she was a little taller than him and she could look down at him while he looked up at her.

Pintu: Krishna, you can continue now'.

Krishna continues without the slightest bit of hesitation and expresses to him how much she had missed him. She however did not kiss him in one place.

After a few minutes Pintu brings her down and both share a look ---- a look of love and longing.

Then Krishna suddenly feels embarrassed at herself and turns red. She looks down in shyness.

Pintu: May I start now?

Krishna was blushing and wanted to just hide herself somewhere for what she had just done which was not what she thought she would on seeing him. She just stands there as Pintu makes her look at him 'he raises her head but her eyes were lowered. He passes his fingers over her lips and she moves away his hand turns her head too. Pintu smiles.

Pintu: Okay, we'll continue later. Can I have a cup of tea?

Krishna nods and leaves to get him some tea. She walked out of the room and to the kitchen all in a trance as if in a dreamland. She was totally smitten by him. She was smiling and taking care to see that no one noted her expressions. It was so tough for her --- to keep to herself the joy she felt on having her husband back!

Pintu was glad too to see a joyous Krishna. While she was away, he comes out of the room and finds Sargam bhabhi walking towards her room. He goes to her.

Pintu: Bhabhi, how are you?

Sargam: Fine Devarji, from today I have started going with Bablooji to his centre to assist him as I get bored at home the whole day.

Pintu: Wow, that's so nice bhabhi ----but please don't become a book worm like him ---or else we'll have to get another study table for your room!!!!

Sargam: Yes, that's true, he is always writing something and I wonder what. But it is not good to read another person's work without their knowledge. That's bad manners. So I haven't asked him.

Pintu: Yes, you are right. By the way, I had asked Krishna for some tea. Could you please go and check what is taking her so long?

He wanted her to go as he now wanted to know what exactly Babloo was doing for hours on end at his desk.

He reaches Babloo ' Sargam's room. There was no one there as he had sent Sargam away and Babloo was downstairs relaxing. He goes to the study table and finds two diaries. He starts going through the first one. As he flips the pages, he is in a state of shock! He moves faster and faster from one page to another as if he wanted to know all that was written there in the next few minutes which wasn't possible. He then decides to take a diary with him and hides it under his jacket.


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He returns to his room and waits for Krishna and while doing so reads a few more pages. His eyes were getting filled with tears as he read more. He wasn't able to come to terms with what he read.. He was really in a state of shock. It was as if his world came crashing down.

Krishna enters and he had to quickly mange himself with a sweet smile. She gives him the tea and sits down next to him.

Pintu: Krishna, last night you told me that Bhabhi was sad right? Could you find out the reason.

Krishna: No Pintuji, now she seems to be okay. Maybe I was reading too much into her expressions ---that's all.

Pintu nods but knew there was a lot more which Krishna did not know. Nor did Sargam Bhabhi.


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                                        So how did you all like this part?                                                                                                                                                          

Next one will reveal what was written in the diary

The effect it has on Prishna----

and how they plan to bring Babloo and Sargam closer.

 



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Awe such a bittersweet chapter i really enjoyed. I love Pintu this is why i love his character so much he always puts them 1st. Best character ever. Really again a very beautiful, perfect chapter i cnt wait for the next chapter. Awesome work amazing.

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