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Posted: 18 May 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
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[QUOTE=sandiab]What a sweet chapter just loved prishna and the sargam and pintu where just awesome.[/QUOTE)The next chapter I think has come out very well...I loved writing it...Thanks for liking this one...
Shanti has any1 ever told u that u are a total tease. Lol i think i said this twice to u.

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Originally posted by kmfan_2

[QUOTE=sandiab]What a sweet chapter just loved prishna and the sargam and pintu where just awesome.[/QUOTE)The next chapter I think has come out very well...I loved writing it...Thanks for liking this one...
Shanti has any1 ever told u that u are a total tease. Lol i think i said this twice to u.

I am...and those who know me ----know that I am...but tell me isn't it fun!!!!LOLLOL

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Chapter Six ' Prishna Unite in Wedlock

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Krishna opens her gift and finds a beautiful pendant gifted by Pintuji. She is really happy. Pintu too was glad things went off smoothly and his professional and personal fronts were falling in place.

It was about four months after Babloo and Sargam's wedding that the Prishna wedding was fixed.

 

Pintu looked like a prince in his sherwani. Krishna looked resplendent in her beautiful bridal saree. Right through the rituals it was evident that these two were in love and made for each other. They had different interests and goals in life but their hearts beat as one! They shared a perfect understanding even in the unsaid things and that's what was so magical in their relationship.

The 'jai mala' garland exchange saw a lot of fun moments, the 'pheras' were taken and the wedding was complete.

Krishna was overwhelmed during the 'bidaai' as it was time for her to leave her maternal home. Pintu took a lot of care to be by her side and offer her all the support during these emotional moments.

Krishna enters the TTS household and the 'griha pravesh' is done. Sargam helps her in all the rituals along with Ganga. She slowly starts feeling better and was quite composed now. TTS, Ganga, Babloo and Sargam did all they could to make this an easy transition for Krishna. And yes, not to talk of Pintu ---who still had a lot more to do on his behalf as her husband to make her feel good.


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Sargam had decorated their room with utmost love and it was tastefully done. Pintu enters the room first and looks around and has a smile flashing on his face. He was waiting eagerly for Krishna to make an entry.

Sargam brings Krishna along with her.

Sargam:  Devarji, here is your Krishna.

Pintu turns around and looks at her. She obviously looked gorgeous in her little frame elegantly covered with a beautiful saree. Her shyness was appealing to him. She had in her a dignity along with a sense of great sensuous attraction without any effort what so ever!

Sargam: Krishna, how do you like your room?

Krishna: (looking down) It is nice Bhabhi.

Sargam: But you haven't even seen it. You are so shy to even look around and have a glance at the decorations and at your Pintuji!

 

Pintu could sense that Krishna was quite uncomfortable by now and comes to her rescue.

Pintu: Bhabhi, if you continue to hang around, how will she ever make an effort to look at the room or ME??!!!!

Sargam: Okay Devarji, I'll leave right away and not eat into your time anymore!

She leaves and closes the door behind her.

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Krishna was standing where Sargam left her. Pintu slowly goes close to her. (He had never touched her till now except for the day when she held on to him by the road side!) He gently holds on to her shoulder and walks her towards the flower decked bed. He makes her sit down and seats himself next to her. Krishna was smiling happily and blushing as well.

They sit for a while silently and then Pintu speaks: Krishna I want to tell you something.

Krishna just nods and still does not look at him. She was waiting in anticipation as to what Pintuji would come up with on their special night!

Pintuji: (whispers) Actually, I am as nervous as you are!!!!

Krishna is surprised at this and looks up at Pintuji in disbelief. Her eyes were wide open and she had a naughty smile as well. Pintuji returns an equally naughty smile and then very quickly winks at her---finally grinning.

 

There were no more words exchanged that night. The hours that followed saw Prishna share some beautiful moments expressing their love for each other in numerous ways. It was a non-stop flow of love from each one in turns. Though it started off with slight reservation but gradually there was a storm of passion that was seen in their union. Pintu had never imagined that Krishna could be so uninhibited in expressing herself so freely with him. He loved every bit of her advances towards him. It only gave him a lot more confidence to reciprocate his immense love for her in his classic style which Krishna received willingly. They hardly slept that night and the beauty was that they hardly spoke either. As it was approaching the early hours of the morning, Pintuji falls asleep with his head on Krishna's lap while she was running her fingers through his thick hair. She also dozes off in that position. Both had experienced a blissful union.

 

The alarm rings waking up Krishna who looked quite tired.  She switches it off and slowly places Pintuji's head on a pillow, covers him with a sheet, smiles at him and gets off the bed. She gets ready for her first day in her new home.

As she gets ready, she looks at herself in the mirror and feels beautiful. She once again has a glance at Pintuji who had a faint smile while asleep. She then leaves the room.

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Ganga sees Krishna up and ready so early and asks her: Krishna, you are up so early?

Krishna: Yes Ma, I am used to getting up early even at my place.

Just then Sargam comes there and sees Krishna. She nudges her.

Sargam: So Krishna, could you sleep at least a bit?

Krishna just smiles and moves towards the kitchen.

She takes some tea for Pintuji to wake him up as well. He was fast asleep after a rather sleepless night. Krishna goes to him, leaves the tea by the side table and gently taps him on the forehead to wake him up. He opens his eyes and looks at his wife.

Krishna: Good morning, please have some tea.

She picks up the cup and Pintu gets up and sits with his back on the head rest of the bed. His eyes were still groggy. But he had a very sweet smile as he takes the cup of tea from Krishna. She sits for a moment and then gets up to leave.

Pintu: Krishna, why don't you too have a sip from this cup. They say if a couple drinks tea from the same cup, their love increases.

Krishna looks at him, sits down and goes closer to the cup to take a sip. Pintu moves the cup slightly away from her and towards himself as he wanted her to come closer to him.

Krishna was smart to sense what Pintu was up to as she had just experienced his naughty ways the previous night. So she DOES NOT make an effort the second time to get closer to the cup.

Pintu: Hey Krishna, don't you want our love to increase? Come on and take a sip.

Krishna (smiling): Pintuji, I am contended with whatever love I have received!!!!

Now Pintu did not expect this answer. So quickly he had to think of something.

So he says: What??? You're already satisfied??? But I have a LOT more to OFFER!!!!!

Woh toh trailor thha-----

                                                                                                                                                                                     Picture abhi baaki hai!!!!!

 

Krishna is stunned at what she heard.

She blushes like never before but tries hard to keep a straight face as she tells him: You are Impossible!!!!

And quickly exits from there.

On reaching the door of their room, she turns around to look at Pintuji and says: Please get ready and come down soon------or else you'll not get breakfast!!!!

Pintu smiles at the first "sweet scolding" he got from his dear wife!

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Hope you all enjoyed this Prishna romance''.

Posted it a day early as I had the time!

                                                                                                                           



Edited by kmfan_2 - 19 May 2013 at 12:59am

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Loved this chapter also Shanti,,,it was our Prishna's wedding and consumation (which we never had),, loved how there were no fine details but left to our imagination,,just pointers,,can't believe Krishna was so outpouring with her love but certainly enjoyed it,,there was Krishna's shyness,,Pintu's cleverness,,Prishna's unspeakable closeness,,Sargam and her Devarji's teasing,,Thanks for posting and await the others to follow,,

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Wow just lovd it shanti this was my consumation scene nt that crap they showed. Very beautiful lovd it.

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kmfan_2

Originally posted by sandiab

Originally posted by kmfan_2

[QUOTE=sandiab]What a sweet chapter just loved prishna and the sargam and pintu where just awesome.[/QUOTE)The next chapter I think has come out very well...I loved writing <font color="#0000ff">it</font>...Thanks for liking this one...
Shanti has any1 ever told u that u are a total tease. Lol i think i said this twice to u.

I am...and those who know me ----know that I am...but tell me isn't it fun!!!!LOLLOL
lol i so dnt expect this reply from u. This ss is bringing out your true personality u should have started it sooner.

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by trinilisa

Loved this chapter also Shanti,,,it was our Prishna's wedding and consumation (which we never had),, loved how there were no fine details but left to our imagination,,just pointers,,can't believe Krishna was so outpouring with her love but certainly enjoyed it,,there was Krishna's shyness,,Pintu's cleverness,,Prishna's unspeakable closeness,,Sargam and her Devarji's teasing,,Thanks for posting and await the others to follow,,

Thank you so much...Lisa...

I always believed that they did not show enough of Prishna scenes...the kind which we would have loved to see in AB...they were the perfect couple and their love could have been showed in the most beautiful ways...

I wanted to write a scene like this for long...where there would be no details but yet I could convey their immense love for each other!

Thank you for liking it...

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sandiab

Wow just lovd it shanti this was my consumation scene nt that crap they showed. Very beautiful lovd it.

Thank you so much Sandia for loving it...actually as I've already said I loved writing it too...

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