MG SS-Aashiqui, pt-11/pg-148/ June 4 +fhmmt update

Posted: 10 years ago



Aashiqui- A Musical Journey of Love


part-1



"TWINKLE TWINKLE LITTLE STAR

HAVE YOU WONDER WHAT YOU ARE"

 

"now repeat" he told her in his demanding tone in this early age of his, just 5 years... she looked at him with her doe shape eyes and her chubby cheeks puffed a little because she didn't understand what he said just now...she batted her lashes and sat in his lap and said cutely...

 

"kuch samajh ni aaya" and a tear escaped from her hazels,,, it pricked his heart seeing tears in her eyes... she is crying for little thing... he at once wipe her tear and repeat in soften voice and repeat slowly so that she is able to understand properly what he is saying...

 

"twinkle twinkle"... "twinkle twinkle"..."little star"... "little star"

 

a loud shriek of his cell broke his dream... he got up at once startled with the loud sound, looked here and there where he is... uff again he went in his childhood... he doesn't know how many times he had dream about his childhood and why... may be she is the reason of his dreams... he wants her back that's why he is regaining every little thing about them...  "twinkle twinkle little star" he mumbled and little smile touched the corner of his lips... "why  you went away?" he asked to himself and searched the answer but where he'll search and whom to he'll ask... he sighed cause he knew that he won't get the answer... 

 

They were best friends in childhood'.. they were neighbors too'' it was like happiness is around the all the time'. Their parents were also best friends'. They used to share their small-2 things with each other whether it is candy or their clothes'. Whenever she is  in grumpy mood that time she went in his room and wore his shirt  which went to her knees'. Well she looked that time so cute and nave also'..

 

Well there is no doubt that she is still so nave and cute but today they are not together'..  khuranas left Hoshiyarpur and went to delhi for maan's studies'. Because there is no good school and his father also wants to settle his business there in the big city,  that day both children cried a lot and then everything has been changed'.. he forgot her and she also did the same'.

 

When she was 8 years old, she met with an accident and then she forgot everything'. Her identity, her parents, her friends, and maan'' she forgot everything small thing which is related to him'

 

*****

he came out from his thought when his cell buzzed again., , he picked up knowing the caller is about to blast him...  

 

"Did you start your drive from there?" dadi asked to him... he knew it,

 

"wo dadi... mai..." maan fumbled with the words...

 

"maan, " dadi soften her voice feeling his pain... "she needs you., come here" said dadi

 

"i know dadi maa... am coming, you don't worry.." replied maan assuring her...  he paused for a second'."I'll bring her here at any cost' I'll convince her'"

 

*******

 

Hot sunshine and a warm air, such a hot day of June , such a bad weather outside of his Mercedez Benz, warm air with lots of dust... but chilled weather inside his car, , AC on it's full mode giving chills to his spines and loud music was playing that is giving such a great satisfaction to his mind... listening the song which were written by him and sung by him... well he used to tap his shoulder for doing such a great work...but now he left singing... actually he loves soft songs which take out our emotions in the words in a form of song, ,

 

he was never good in telling his point of view to anyone, he was never into words, he never told to anyone that what is inside his heart, if something come to the emotions then he was tongue tied but if someone tell him to write a song on a particular situation or describe his emotions , the emotions should be oozed out in that song then he was perfect for the choice,,,, there is no other person who can put their emotions in a song,, he was lost in his song and thoughts and he didn't glanced what is going here and there outside of his car... well how can he? he is not the type of this village, he lives in big city Delhi but sometimes he came here in punjab for shooting some songs rather say shooting for some stanza of his song...

 

actually he was not a big singer, , just singing when his mood swings... sometimes when he was so emotional and feeling like to play guitar or violin,, emotions were not in his control,, sometimes he sang for his dadi or sometimes for his mom only for their demand... but he stopped singing after the death of his sweetheart, his mother...

he went in depression that time after his mom's death... he loved her mom a lot, , after some years, his father also left him and went to his mother near to god leaving everything on the shoulder of Maan... that time he was only 19...  only his dadi maa who was beside him and his baby sister anwesha who was just 3 years younger than him,,,,, but today he is 24 and anwesha is  21...  but now he started singing because of her and now sometimes he sang in his parties only for her sake or his friends...

 

he came back to his surroundings when he reached to his destination... he sighed, finally he is here... it was really a long journey for him... if he wanted then he could come by flight also and after journey by car but he wanted to made her wait for him as much as he waited for her... a sweet smile lingered at the corner of his lips thinking about her... "oh god i love her so much..." he said to himself and parked his car aside... well there is no parking are there... he has to park his car only in empty ground...  he came out from his car in his typical MSK style but before he was able to show his style to anyone, he felt the pain in his back... uff... continuously driving of long 6 hours... his back is aching a lot... he wore his goggles and settle his tie...

 

someone from far watching him , thought that he didn't come here for any business meeting but still he wore his formal attire, , at least for here he could wear some casuals... but a big no... everywhere he has to show his professionalism... that person sighed and went inside because of anger, because he was late... he promised that he'll come early but no... his work is really important for him...

 

he was greeted by Mohinder Handa and Rano Handa... he bend and touched their feet taking blessings from them... they lovingly caressed his head and gave him lots of blessings and the person came to him fuming in anger...

 

"maan. what is this? why are you so late?" asked dadi with her angry tone... maan smiled a little seeing his dadi again in fuming mode... he went ahead and hugged her...

 

"missed you a lot dadi maa..." said maan holding her tight...

 

"but humne aapko bilkul bhi miss nahi kiya" she said again in anger...

 

"really!!" asked maan looking at dadi's face... she nodded silently...

 

"then why these tears in your eyes?" asked maan showing her tears on his finger tips which he wiped just now... dadi looked at his finger tips and faked anger... "these are not because of you" and then wiped her remaining tears from her eyes...

 

"then for whom?" asked maan crossing his arms over his chest standing in his typical MSK manner...

 

"wo toh bas i... leave it maan aur andar chaliye... all are waiting for you" replied dadi...

 

 

 

******

 

He went inside and was mesmerized by the view'. She was looking breathtaking beautiful in red color suit with chudidaar'. Open curly hairs but her  hairs were covered with her chiffon dupatta'. He hated this tradition in their family''


uff he placed his hand on his heart stopping it from beating so fast'. But seems his heart is not in his control'.. but next minute he gulped his saliva seeing the expressions on her face which she gave after seeing him'.. those expressions were not so good, and he knew that, now he is going to blast again but by someone else this time'.. he smiled nervously'' well  Man Singh Khurana is nervous''''.. of course'.. today is his engagement and Yash's wedding'.. her elder brother'.. 



 here is the part-1...i hope you like it... tell me hows this?

typed after a long time so didn't able to pick the pace of typing, and yes i'll be able to give a update once in a week... coz i am busy... and this is a short ss...


for pms... add neha5058



part-2 page-21

part-3 page-30

part-4 page-46

part-5 page-56

part-6 page-69

part-7 page-91

part-8 page-105

part-9 page-117

part-10 page-133

part-11 page-148

Thread 2


Edited by neha5058 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
hy intruguing start ðŸ˜› will wait wait for part 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Very interestinng. Amazing start. Cant wait for more :)
Posted: 10 years ago
interesting starting
geet lost her memory when she was small 
waiting for more
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome start 
cont soon 
Posted: 10 years ago
congrates on new ss
interesting update
loved the concept
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice starting. But im a lil bit confused geet left maan a long b4. But at the end u wrote about their engagement. How it happened? Well waiting for next. Hopefully my all confusion 'll be gone away.
Posted: 10 years ago
interesting start
liked it very much
continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
will be waiting
awesomest update

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