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Holaaa Ladies! I was bored so I decided to write a one shot, but then I got so into it that it turned out to be way longer than I expected, since I randomly thought of cute moments that should happen between AsYa as I was writing. So I am going to divide it into a few parts! It is the same time as the current track in QH, and its about how Billo Rani gets busted! Lemme know what you think! See you on the other sideee! :)

Part 1- Below

Zoya's POV


"Mr. Khan!" I said as I opened his slightly ajar door and stepped into his pristine room. 


"Ms. Farouqi. How many times have I told you to knock before you walk into a room." He yelled blushing, the man was shirtless... again. I think he had a thing against wearing shirts, not that I minded because that is one sexy body he has there. Looking at him shirtless makes me want to just touch his biceps, his triceps, and his abs, Allah Miaa, his abs were so perfect, they could probably cut diamonds. I wanted to just lic-


"You have a little bit of drool on the side of your mouth there." Jahapana smirked while putting on his shirt.


"Woh... nahin, mein aapke biceps, triceps nahi dekh rahi thi, aapka sex... I mean six, six pack bhi nahi dekh rahi thi." I said, well tried to say. This man's body did some weird voodoo on me, my mouth just freezes up when he takes off his shirt. Why is he putting his shirt back on? Nahiii, yeh naynsafi hai! It should be illegal for this man to wear a shirt.


"Aap mujhe dekhne aaye hai yah koi kaam bhi tha?" He said crossing his arms in front of me.


"Don't flatter yourself Mr. Khan, even if you are eye candy ' I mean if I wanted to ogle someone I would go google pictures of Hrithik Roshan or something." I said rolling my eyes. "Now, those are abs." I said jibing him, he looked angry. Ooo, Jahapana doesn't like being compared to other men.


"Aapko aisi baate karte sharam nahi aati?" He questioned.


"Is mein sharam ki kya baat hai? Allah nai usko dekhne kai liye hi banaya hai, aur mere paas ankhein hai usko dekhne kai liye..." I said stating the obvious.


"What do you want Ms. Farouqi?" He said pinching his nose, ah, his signature move. Oh, how I love annoying him, he looks so cute when he is angry. Like a little kitty pretending to be a lion. Haaa! I should tell him that, he'd be so mad.


"Before I was so rudely interrupted." He gave me an exasperated look as I talked. "I was going to ask you if you've noticed something weird going on around the house?"


"Ms. Farouqi." I honestly don't know why he calls me that, I am his fiance after all, and Zoya sounds way better coming from his lips. His very kissable lips. "You live in this house, thus everything IS weird." he said.


"HAHA, you are sooo funny Mr. Khan. Seriously though, for once apna dimag use kijiye." I teased, he gave me that look again, where his eyes kind of roll back. I think its cute. Well, everything this man does is cute, or hot or sexy.


"What do you mean Ms. Farouqi?" he sounded confused, aw my shona baby.


"I don't know how to say this... don't get mad okay? I said sheepishly. He just looked at me. "You have to promise me first Mr. Khan! Whenever I say something you get mad, and kick me out and then realize that you are wrong and come running after me like a mad man because you DO care. "


"Ms. Farouqi, I don't have time for this. Can you get to the point? I will try not to get mad." He said sitting down on his bed.


" Well, have you noticed that Tanveer is acting...weird? Like suspicious?" I said really quickly and waited for his response.


"Ms. Farouqi, just because you are weird doesn't mean that everyone else is." He said getting up and walking away.


"Mr. Khan, can you listen to me for just once?" I said grabbing his hand, of course all of a sudden I forgot what I was going to say because I felt my hands tingling, like a bolt of electricity running through me and my skin warmed. He didn't say anything but just stared at me, the looks this man gives me confuse the hell out of me. When he looks at me like that I feel like he does care for me, maybe even loves me.


"Everything is weird these days, Ammi insisting we get married in ten days, your mood swings..." He said when I interrupted him.


"MY MOOD SWINGS? You are the bipolar one here. 'Oh Zoya mat jao, ab yeh meri mangetar hai aur mujhe inko rokne ka pura haq hai and then 'yeh sab drama tha, I didn't mean it."


"Zoya- can you tell me what you came in here to tell me?"


"Fine. Do you remember how the other day, at the airport, when you- um you know." I smiled, he looked down, the man is blushing. Awww. Stop getting side tracked Zoya! "Mr. Bha-Bha-Whatever was saying that some girl kept calling him over and over again telling them about our fake engagement. I was thinking about it. No one knew about the engagement but Ammi, Najma, Tanu and us." Why do I like the way "us" sounds so much?


"What are you implying? That Tanu was the one calling?" He asked like I was crazy.


"Well yeah, who else would? Najma wouldn't, Ammi wouldn't and no one else knew..." I reasoned.

"Miss. Farouqi, aap ki tabiyat theek hai?" He questioned.


"Mr. Khan, think about it. How else would Mr. Whatever find out?" Of course he wouldn't believe me, his precious Tanu couldn't be questioned.


"You are just jealous of her."


"Excuse me! Why would I be jealous of her?" I yelled, well I kind of was, but I'd never admit it to him. He tells her everything, but he won't talk to me. Jammy this, Jammy that, how dare she call him Jammy? And she can call him Asad. And he doesn't call her Miss Whatever her last name is.


"Of course you are not Miss Kyun aap sirf Tanu kai haath ke bana khana khate hai?"


"That was a question, no jealousy there."


"Miss. Farouqi, you are wasting my time. Stop accusing the poor girl." Mr. Khan said trying to walk away again.


"Allah Miaaa, what's wrong with you Mr. Khan? I wouldn't question her either if I didn't have a reason. Come with me." I said grabbing his hand and running to the living room. Grabbing his hand was a frequent occurrence now. I slid in front of the phone and pressed the play button for the messages.




"Tanveer Bi, mein master ji bol raha hoon. Bas aapko batana tha ki Mr. Abbas ka order nikal chukka hai, or uski payment bhi aagye hai. Aur Annaya Bi ka order bhi tayar hai lekin woh aapse pehle baat karna chahti hain. Factory mein sab kheriyat hai ' BEEP." The end of his sentence got cut out since it was too long.


"But Tanveer nai to kaha tha ki-." Mr. Khan stated in disbelief.


"Factory jal gayi thi." I finished.


A shocked Mr. Khan sat down on the couch. I sat down beside him waiting for him to process what he had heard.


"But why would she lie about that?" He asked.


"I don't know. But that's what I mean, she's been acting so weird recently." I said. "She is always creeping around the house, and the way she looks at me sometimes...it's like she wants to eat me alive."


Mr. Khan's head shot up and he looked right at me, the look on his face was one of ... worry and, and another emotion but I couldn't pin point it.


"The wire." He whispered.


"The wire?" I asked confused?


"Yesterday, when that live wire fell into your bath tub...the wire was tucked underneath the flower pots like it was routed to your bathroom." He said quietly. He got up and ran towards the fuse box as I followed.


"It is still here, I didn't really think about it after everything that happened yesterday. But now that I think about it, it doesn't feel like an accident" The wire was tucked neatly under two pots and led to the fuse box where it was connected to the fuse. The wire didn't belong there; someone put it there. I gasped.


"Someone's trying to kill me." I whispered. Mr. Khan grabbed me and pulled me into a hug and I felt him bury his nose into my hair. I sighed as I buried myself into his neck, inhaling his comforting scent. I didn't feel like letting him go when he hugged me, something about him always calmed me down. I could be hyperventilating but as soon as he touched me I calmed down, or got keyed up depending on the situation.


I don't know how long he held me for but it felt like the whole world stopped and it was just me and him. I don't understand this man, he tells me he doesn't care but his every action contradicts his words. He rushes to save me, holds me like he is afraid of losing me and his eyes, the worry, the anguish and relief they express. I nuzzled his neck when his hands tensed around me and he let go.  I backed away from him like I was on fire awaiting his "woh actually". But he surprised me.


"I am going to get to the bottom of this, nothing is going to happen to you Zoya."


"You can't do this without me, we make a great team remember! We will get to the bottom of this." I smiled at him remembering our endeavours to find phupi's shooter.


"Do you think Tanu...?" He said not daring to finish the sentence.


"I hope not." I said squeezing his hand. It would break him if his best friend was...I don't even know what she is trying to do. I followed a dejected Asad back to his room.


"What are we going to do?" He asked. "It's not like we can just ask her."


"Leave that to me Mr. Khan, is duniya mein aisa koi kaam nahi hai joh Zoya Farouqi nahi kar sakti."


"Kuch nahi kar sakti." He murmured under his breath.


I glared at him, "meine sun liya! It'd be nice if you put more faith in your FIANCEE, soon to be wife."


"We aren't going to get married, we are going to find a way to get out of it." he said.


"Then why did you say yes to phuphi, you want to marry me don't you Mr. Khan, koi bhi kisi sai aise shaadi karne ke liye nahi manta unless they mean it. You mean it na Mr. Khan?"


Say yes, that's all I need to hear from him, he doesn't have to tell me why yet.


"Ms. Farouqi, can we stop talking about this and focus on the task at hand?" He said avoiding the subject.


"Okay, hubby." I laughed.


"Can you not call me that?"


"Why? What's wrong with it, hubby? That's what you're going to be."


"I don't have time for you nonsense, I need to get to work." He said grabbing his jacket and walking out.


"Bye Hubby!" I said as he walked out, I swear I saw him smiling from the corner of my eye. I also started to leave when I noticed his phone laying on the bed, I picked it up and ran out of the room.


"Mr. Khan, you forgot your phone!" I yelled running out the room at full speed, being me I of course tripped over thin air as soon as I came in front of Mr. Khan. Shit, this is going to hurt. I closed my eyes and waited for the impact. But it never came, instead of the cold hard ground I was encased in soft warm arms. I opened one eye to see Mr. Khan above me. There he goes again catching me, I swear I would be black and blue everywhere if he wasn't around.


"Uh thanks." I said righting myself up. "You forgot your phone..." I said handing it to him.


"Thank you." He said pocketing it and opening the front door as I turned to go to my room.


"Zoya." he said causing me to turn around, he was standing at the door. "Be careful, and if anything happens call me okay?" He actually sound worried.


"Don't worry Mr. Khan, mein apna khayal rakh sakti hoon." I assured him.


"Just be careful." He said finally walking out.


Lemme know how it is! The next part will be up soon, I am in the middle of writing it, it's going to be Asad's POV next! Smile

Part 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3562900&TPN=3&#81952320

Edited by astonm - 09 June 2013 at 8:57am

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Loved it! Please continue soon!

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YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS :D Please please please post the next part SOOON Day Dreaming

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Very nice Smile

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OMG !! You left me speechless...
What an amazing SS... 
It was hot, cute and filled with suspense at the same time... 
Loved it to the core...
Hats off to you dear, seriously I can't wait to read more... Clap
It's so amaziing, I loved the way you write...
Zoya's thoughts were so naughty Blushing
And Asad's care for her was well described Smile

Please continue soon Big smile

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Awww! I love this! Some light romance is what we all neeed! Girl you can carry on describing his sexxxyy abs! Ahhaa, it put a huge smile on my face; Asya teamwork! I wish things could go like that in the show, i've always wanted him to comment on her drooling over his six packs! *sigh*
Zoya's thoughts are hilarious! Lmfaooo! Great job lovely,
Thanks for the pm, cannot wait for the next part! :)

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