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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 5:07am | IP Logged
brilliant job StarClap you really move the story to another level Clap it was like tit for tat
very nice ending the best StarClap
waiting to read more of you amazing writting art Hug really good job ClapStar

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tohru

brilliant job StarClap you really move the story to another level Clap it was like tit for tat
very nice ending the best StarClap
waiting to read more of you amazing writting art Hug really good job ClapStar


hahaha thank u thank u! m glad u liked it!!
Love yaHug

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Will you believe if I say erm I was expecting this...


Yes, I was expecting this twist...
Hats off to you how u unveiled the matter slowly slowly so beautiful...
The little little details about their masti, laughs, love so enchanting


awesome, and I know you will do write more Wink  hugs Heart

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
oh wow LOL
their guilt brought them together LOL
hmm idk what to think about the story .. but again,  you hav written wonderfully Clap

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Wow, that was...good. The first chapter had me "Eh, I don't like this cheating business!" But after reading the second chapter, I kind of liked it. It explained one thing about human mind, at least. A person's heart is so easy to move, it's a sin to the life...

Great job! Clap

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Amazing stuff! loved the second chapter.
After reading the first chapter.. didn't feel good with her cheating on the husband.. though liked the way you portrayed their married life..
 really liked how you changed the course of the story in the 2nd chapter..
 Nice ending!
Very well- writtenClap

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 2:22am | IP Logged

Great stuff again! Clap

I really liked this chapter. I liked how it is not just guilt that brought them together. Of course, it played its part. But more of how both of them still gave their relationship a chance after what they happened. They tried what they hadn't tried before, even if that stemmed from guilt. And they realized what they had with each other was far more real and beautiful than what they had experienced with either Jay or Anisha.
 
And I loved the ending. In a twisted way that assuaged her guilt. That she wasn't the only one who had wronged. LOL Very real.
 
Great job!
 
 

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
AWESOME

AMAZING OS :)

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