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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Hey i'm saathana.i have read your updates so far and sorry but i have not yet commented.sorry for not commenting.Actually i liked your ff a lot.It is a very different concept compared to the serial.Loved the concept very much.Arranged marriage for both virat and manvi who have barely met each other.I think virat loves manvi secretly from childhood itself.Loved their first night part where virat's lips slightly brushed manvi's and her marks on his back ,his marks on her back.These scenes were so cute.Loved the  way how virat covered manvi in his arms due to her fear on thunder.Loved how the elders teased them and the way they both reacted for that.The most hilarious part was how manvi told virat that he kissed her accidentally and the way he got shock was funny.Their morning romance part was superb.The most emotional scene was how virat announced his decision for going to mumbai to his family and the way manvi was hurt was heart touching.Loved their first date concept,their dance,virat's protectiveness towards manvi when some men viewed her.Awesome part.add me to your buddy list.thank you for giving us such a wonderful ff.continue soon Smile
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
thanks for all ur comments and likes guyz now time for teasing evil teaserEvil Smile

Teaser

''Going away from her was not easy it was very difficult she was my need my partner and i can't leave without her...and i don't wanted to leave...but still i have too...i still remember her sad face and tears in her eyes everyone came to see off me but she didn't came but i know she was looking at me from balcony i can c her i can feel...isn't it weird how attach m with her in this short period of time''...but i left...i left her behind...
 

so how was it ROFL jhoote chappal everything is welcome xcept tomato i don't like tomato and eggs i don't like their smellROFL

so c u guyz in the update thenROFL


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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Teaser looks amazing
Excited for the update
Continue very soon!!

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
precap padhke mujhe rona araha hai very emotional precap ...
i just hope kuch aisa ho jaye that manvi also goes with virat to mumbai... Smile
next part updare sooon Smile
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
nice teaser
plz update soon
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Teaser main jaan nikal rahi par updt ki soch soch ke dil jumping japang kar rha h... Cont soon...
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
nice teaser
plz update soonBig smile
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by naina927

Teaser main jaan nikal rahi par updt ki soch soch ke dil jumping japang kar rha h... Cont soon...
shhh nain it's an secret update mai kya hai dn't reveal it Wink ROFL

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