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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
 Shocked
ab kya hoga???

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
brilliant first tym on IF i m reading gujarati... even m also gujarati...i loved it

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chinudolly

res/unres

ShockedShockedShocked
1st  guju  story  
firstly  i  thought   that  i  won't  be  able  2  read  it  
but  thanks  4  translation guys  

great  work   


your  story  is  very  amazing  ,  interesting  

plz   plz  update  soon  
i  really   want  2  know  what   will  happen  next  SmileSmile



Jaan i know ke tu to shock hi ho jayegi but thanks for this comment luv u muaaahhh and will update soonSmileHug

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
ekdum mast update hato...
please jaldi continue karo...
 Wink(even i m a gujarati)

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Nice, mujhe Gujarati padhte want bahut Mazda aa raha tha.
Bahu saras che .
( hope I am right )
Omg tauji ne msg padha now what !!!! D'oh

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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --coco--

Nice, mujhe Gujarati padhte want bahut Mazda aa raha tha.
Bahu saras che .
( hope I am right )
Omg tauji ne msg padha now what !!!! D'oh
ya ur guju sent. is rite...Wink
n thanx...Smile

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Hey Guyss We r back firsr of all thanks guys for u r precious comments and we hope ke age bhi ap hume asa hi support karege soo ab hum bolna band karte hai and here is u 2 part enjoy guyss Smile

Chap :-2 

(pachi tene Rey na mobile ma sodhva madya ane pachi  rey ae karle la chela phones joya abe Rey ae 1 divas ma Taani ne 30 vakhatthi pan vadhare call karya hata pachi temne messages kholya ama tTaani ae muklela badha j sara messges hata...pachi tene Rey na pics Taani sathe joya teo gusa ma pan hata khush bi hata ane duki bi guse atle hata ke Rey temni bhatriji ne dating karo hato...sad atle ke temne temne kidhu natu ane khush atle ke Rey khub j saro chokro che...ane ana mate ae dancer nahto...pan chatay te Rey ni test leva magto hato atle ae phone ne side ma rakhine sidhi sadi rite besi gayo...Rey ae pacha ayi ne first to message tapasya ke koi navo message to nathi ne..pan tene kai na malyu kemke Mr.She badha message tapasi lidha hata...te chinta ma besi gayo...ane papa shekhawat joine puchiyu)

[Aft tht he starts searching more from rey's mob...he goes 2 list of last dial...n sees tht rey has called taani more den 30 times in a day...den goes 2 his inbox...n founds all d lovely MSG by taani...den goes 2 images n founds all d images of taani...he was so angry, sad n happy at d same time ...angry coz rey was dating his nephew...sad coz dey don't tell him...n happy coz rey was an awesome boy...n specially was nt a dancer ...(in his eyes...) bt still he wanted 2 test rey...so as rey came back he puts rey's fone at his place n sits normally as nothing was happen...rey aft coming back 1stly checks if der r ne new MSG...bt he doesn't found coz Mr.shekhawat had already read it...he sits der in anger...papa shekhawat notices dis n starts asking...]

MR.She :- to Rey tari koi gf che?? [so rey...tumhari koi GF hai???]

(Rey choki jay che ke shu javab apvo jo sachu keshe to teo ae banene svikarshe nai ane jo khotu blshe to koine koi vakhat temne khabar padi jase athi tene Taani nu name lidha vagar j javab apyo) haa 

 [(was totally shocked 2 ans...he was not knowing wat 2 ans...if he will say d truth den he may nt allow dem 2 b 2gather...n if he will lie...den kabhi na kabhi toh sach samane aana hi hai...so he decided just 2 say yes without taking taani's name...)...yes i have...] 

MR.She :- (vicharine)ha...aa ek honest chokro che (rey ne)..so tane ae chokri wishe shu game che??  [ hmm...he is an honest guy...(2 rey)...ohk so wat do u like abt tht special gal???]

Rey :- badhij vastu (swapna ma) ane ankho,anu smit,ana hoth ane ane vat karvani rit(Rey bolya j karto hato ane MR.She ne kai vandho pan nato tethi te bolto hato)  [ach n everything...(dreamingly)...her eyes...her smile...her lips...her way of talking...(rey was just going on n on...n Mr.s couldn't take dis nemore...so he said)...] 

MR.She :- saru mane khabar padi gayi tu ane prem kare che k pachi samay pass kare che? [ohk...ohk i get it...so u love her...its just...time pass??]

Rey :- (gusa ma) naaa koi hisabe nai!!!!hu ana bahuj prem karu chu bahujj tamne khabar padi gayi (pachi ana thayu ke te papa She. sathe vat kare che tethi te shant thai gayo)hu mafi magu chu sir hu ane(Taani) laine thodo chinta ma avi jau chu atle...hu aha rakhu ke tame samjsho 
 [(gets angry): NO WAY!! I truly love her...i love her so much get tht!!!...(den realize tht he was talking 2 papa shekhawat...so he calms himself n said)...so sry sir...its just usse (taani) lekar mai thoda hyper ho jata hu...i hope u understand...]

MR.She :- ha hu samji saku chu (smit kare che) (vichreine)wahh Taani beta te to ek dam mast chokro sodhyo che kadach tara bhai ma pan tara jevi budhi hot (Rey ne)so taro bhavisya no plan shu che??  [ya of course i do...(n smiles)...(thinks)...wow taani mera bacha tune perfect ladka chuna hai...m proud of u...kash tumhare bhai mai bhi tumhare jaisi akal hoti...(2 rey)...so tumhare future planning kya hai???]

Rey :- (vicharine)ave shu karu (mr.she ne)ae hu pan (jevo te bolva jay che tya waiter avi jay che) [(thinks): ab kya bolu??..(2 Mr.s)...ah wo kya haina mai bhi...(as he was abt 2 speak further waiter came)...]

Waiter :- sir aa tamaro order  [ sir here is ur order...]

Rey :- khub khub dhnyvad  [thank u so much...]

Waiter :- are tame mane kem dhnyad kari rahya cho ato mari nokri che [exuseme, aap thanx kyu bol rahe hai...its ma job...]

Rey :- te maro jiv bachvyo che [arre u saved my life...]

W+MR.She :- shu???? [WAT!!]

Rey :- (are aa hu shu boli gayo)are tame mane parosyu atle mane khub j bhuk lagi hati nai to hu aiya j mari jat atle (badhu ek j swas ma boli jay che)haishh(ane dhimu smit kare che)  [(oh shit ye kya bol diya): i mean u served it 2 me n i was so hungry...agar thoda der mai nai khaya hota toh mai mar jata...thts'y...(speak all dis in 1 breath) phew...(n laughs nervously)...]

Waiter :- ok saheb (ane jato rahe che) [oh its k sir...(n leaves)]

Rey :- te maro jiv bachvyo che [arre u saved my life...]

W+MR.She :- shu???? [WAT!!]

Rey :- (are aa hu shu boli gayo)are tame mane parosyu atle mane khub j bhuk lagi hati nai to hu aiya j mari jat atle (badhu ek j swas ma boli jay che)haishh(ane dhimu smit kare che)  [(oh shit ye kya bol diya): i mean u served it 2 me n i was so hungry...agar thoda der mai nai khaya hota toh mai mar jata...thts'y...(speak all dis in 1 breath) phew...(n laughs nervously)...]

Waiter :- ok saheb (ane jato rahe che) [oh its k sir...(n leaves)]

MR.She :- tare kevu joite tu ke tane bhukh lagi che to jaldi bolavi let  [ tumahe batana chahiye thana ki tumahe bohot bhukh lagi hai...hum unase keh kar jaldi order mangwa lete..]

Rey :- are vandho nai sir ave avi gayu ne [ts k sir abhi toh khana aa gaya na...]

MR.She :- to apde chalu karia??? [so shall we start??]

Rey :- ha saru (ane chalu kar che) [ya sure sir...(n dey both start eating)..]

Ahi Taani sathe....[Here wid Taani...]

Taani :- (phone par swayam sathe) bhai ave ahi badhu barabar che ma sir ne tame badha collage mate bahar gaya cho avu kai didhu che pan jem thay aem jaldi avjo karanke aa NDC mate che ane zaruri che  [(on phone wid swayam): bhai ab sab thik hai...maine vp sir se keh diya hai tht aap sab colg k kaam se bahar ho...n ya ho sake toh jaldi wapas aana...its abt NDC n its really imp...]

SW :- ha Taani ame collage pacha avi j rahya che [ don't worry taani...we r on our way 2 colg...k...]

Taani :- ok bhai byee [ k bhai...bye]

SW :- byee...

(Swayam no phone pachi  tene ek bijo phone ave che ae???) [(as she cut swayam's phone she gets 1 more call frm ???)]

??? :- hello Taanu kem che my Sweetheart...ma tane bauj miss kari... [hey howz u taanu...i missed u so much sweetheart..]

Taani :- (ankh ma ansu sathe) tame ma tamne bahuj yaad karya pan tamaro phone achanak j  ma vichryu natu ke tame mane atla varsho pachi pan yad rakhsho ane tamre pase maro no kya thi avyo??ane ane tamne...  [(wid tears in her eyes): aap!...i missed u 2...bt aapka call achanak se...maine socha nai tha tht aap muje itane saal baad bhi yaad rakhenge...n aapke pass mera no. Kaha se aaya?...n ..n aap ko...]

??? :-  are mari xspress mane to kai bolva de  [arre re meri xpress muje toh kuch bolane de...]

Taani :- are haan mane maff kari do  [oh ha sry...]

??? :- ha to rahi bat tuje bhulne ki to vo tu kabhi sochna bhi mat ane taro no ??? ae apyo  [ha toh rahi baat tuje bhul ne ki...toh aaisa mai soch bhi nai sakta...n tera no. Muje tere ??? ne diya...]

Taani :- ane tame mane phone kem karyo...kai kam hatu??  [oh...ohk...so aap ne muje call kyu kiya...koi kaam tha?]

??? :-  wo aje sanje mare tane juni Taani banavi che...mari juni Sweetheart  [ha wo aaj sham ko tuje purani taani banana hai...meri purani sweetheart...]

Taani :- tamne kone kidhu hu badlai gayi chu (dard vala avaje)  [aapko kisane kaha ki mai change ho gai hu...(wid a sad smile)]

??? :- aene jene mane taro no. apyo  [usine jissane muje tera no. Diya...]

Taani :- saru pan hu juni Taani nai bani saku hu ana chodine agal avi gayi chu  [ ohk...bt mai ab purani taani nahi ban sakti...mai usse chod kar bohot aage nikal chuki hu...]

??? :- hu phakt ajni sanj mate kau chu...tu mara mate atlu nai kari sake sweetheart??  [mai sirf aaj sham k liye keh raha hu...plz na...tu mere liye itana nai kar sakti sweetheart?]

Taani :- saru pan phakt aj mate ane tamara loko mate  [ ohk lekin bas aap sab k liye...n sirf aaj k liye...]

??? :- dhanyavad [Thanks...]

Taani :- pan mare avanu kya che..ketla vage..ane kem.  [waise muje aana kaha hai??...n kitane baje...n kyu...n...]

??? :-  are tu pachi chalu thai gayi tare kya avanu chu hu tane leva avu chu tu khali mari juni Taani taiyar rakh k?  [tu firse shuru ho gai...oh god...tuje kaha aana hai ye tuje pata chal jayega...mai khud tuje lene aaunga...bas tu meri purani taani tayar rakhana...k?]

Taani :- saru sanje jaldi avjo hu tane prem karu chu  [ok byee..aj sham jaldi ana...love u...]

??? :- hu pan tane prem karu chu bye [love u 2 byee]

(ane teo muki de che)  [(n dey hung up)...]

-IN THE EVENING-

Taani's outfit :-



Taani :- to hu pachi avi gayi(niche joine)pan phakt 1 divas mate kadch hu am j rahu...na na Taani aa shu vichari rahi che pagal thai gayi che k shu...aa Taani mari gayi che ane aj pachi kabhi jivti nai thay...tane khabar to che shu thayu hatu...pan to pan...na...ave aa badhu chod ae loko tane leva avi j rahya hase...(taiyar thai gaya pachi avaj sambhadi ne " amni aa jor jor thi horn bajavani adat haju sudhi nathi gayi"ane phari hase che...au chu baba...ane jay che...
niche jay che ane banene vara pharti bhete che...ane ama thi ek

[so m finally back...(looking down)...bt just 4 1 day...kash mai aaise hi reh paati...no no taani ye tu kya soch rahi hai pagal ho gai hai kya...ye taani mar chuki hai...n aaj k baad kabhi zinda nai hogi...tuje pata toh hai ki kya hua tha...lekin fir bhi...no way...chal ab ye sab chod...wo tuje lene aa hi rahe honge...get ready...(aft giving final touch 2 her self she heard a horn n smiles thinks" inki ye zor zor se horn bajane ki aadat abhi tak nai gai"...n smiles again...n says "aati hu baba"...n leaves...
Going down...sees both d guys n hugs both off dem 1 by 1...tightly...1 of dem]

??? :- are atlu zorthi bhet nai nai to koi ne lagse ke hu taro BF chu (ane Taani dhire thi tene mare che)

[re itana tight hug mat kar warana kisi ko lagega mai tera BF hu...(n taani hits his chest)...]
 

Here we rest...:D:D:D...hope u all will like it...n ya keep on thinking who r tht persons??and plzz do comment tabhi age update milega warna no update Wink


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