Posted: 26 April 2013 at 9:36am | IP Logged
OMG when on earth did you right this.
Ok just kill me now, way too many feels
So from where should i start, just want to say that this was just so so AMAZING!!! I mean just so beautiful <3
The conflicting emotions, the different perceptions have been portrayed so beautifully.
On the outside, they might appear to care a damm about each other, but deep down they do care.
Avi thought she just liked to keep everyone out of trouble. Which was troublesome for him.
Omi felt that she needed to have many toffees to calm down for just a little disruption made her go hyper.
^^ love the discriptions <3
That the six of them still hadn't recovered from the accident Panchi had all those months ago. They didn't talk about it but they knew Panchi was now scared of crossing the road and had started to pet a illogical fear of the hospitals, where she knew her heartbeat had stopped for a while. Ranveer still had major guilt trips about Panchi's accident. KD still felt the wetness of Panchi's blood on his arms. Piddi more than once had nightmares about that day and Kiya knew that the pain of losing someone important in life is always much worse than it sounds. Specially when that person wasn't at any fault. And Jaitley? Let's just say he had the urge to break the very thing which caused his little Fluttering Angel even the slightest of pain because that's how protective he was.
^^ THIS was so so damm beautifully written.
I would like more, but i just dont know what to write. Really there are no words good enough to explain how beautiful this was.
so just wanna say, Hatts off girl.
Edited by -BlazingWater- - 26 April 2013 at 11:16pm