Wow...I think you just about left me speechless for a long time after I read this I think this replaced your KiyAn OS as my favourite Maisy story. Brilliant, flawless, beautiful & breathtaing
You know...you manged to capture the very essence of the Buddies in these few paragraphs. I can't tell you how much I loved it<3<3 Whether it was the old, or the new, you got them down pat. Both sides want to manipulate RanSh into being there pawns, which was clear from when JJ challenged the gangs, yet the truth is that the bond that connects them, along with JJ, who holds them together, can never be broken by these outsiders. I don't say that in a harsh way. I love the new people honestly. I am looking forward to their journeys, & have accepted them all whole heartedly. But Buddies are Buddies. They have been through so much together, have become so much a part of each other, that its literally impossible for anyone else to be a part of them at this point. The Buddy Project had truly changed the lives of these five...six forever. Yes, maybe in the future they will ALL become friends, they will form a close knit group of their own, but the Buddies, JJ's Junglees, will always be KD, Ranveer, Kiya, Panchi & Piddi.
Panchi was on the ground, her hand resting on Jaitley's shoulder as she seemed to be sobbing and he was stroking her head gently. Ranveer was on the other side of her, holding her hands and head bowed in gratitude. KD was standing behind him, giving reassuring taps on Ranveer's shoulder. While Piddi seemed to be wiping away tears from his eyes and Kiya was crouched in front of Panchi, tending to her leg which seemed a little bloody.
THIS...this is so symbolic. They are literally holding on to each other at the very terrifying possibility of harm coming to one of them, not just physically, but emotionally too. You just made me remember one of my favourite & one of the most beautiful scenes of TBP - the Buddies outside Panchi's hospital room:'). You showed here exactly what was shown there, that if something happens to any of them, to the others it feels like a void is created in their lives, no matter kaun kiske zyada close ho.
And they realized - that they were on the Outside. They had always been on the Outside, living under the illusion that they meant something important. But ultimately, it was only one sided. For the Inside was much more powerful than they had fathomed it to be. And that didn't set too well with them...
This is again pure brilliance!!! Its true. Somewhere or the other, they HAVE noticed this connection & want it to weaken. Not out of malice or spite, but because they want parts of them for themselves. And sooner or later whether Omi, Avi, Avantika & Rukmini are going to understand, that this connection is beyond anyone's reach, even the Buddies themselves. I loved how you showed the way their lives were changed because of the Buddies.
Fantistic & Brilliant Maisy. How did you do this yaar? *Sigh* you are my biggest inspiration on this forum
Edited by ..DamonCrazy.. - 26 April 2013 at 2:15am