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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged

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The Fall

 

I am falling...

Falling high from the sky,

Having a grand fall from heaven,

The way Lucifer felled once.

 

I am falling...

In the never ending depression

Of liquid sulfur,

The way Satan felled once.

 

I am falling...

My hands, my legs,

My pride, my curves,

My elegance...

Leaving me

Tearing my flesh and blood,

Exposing my ugly bones

 

I am falling...

The warm bubbles of Sulfur are jumping

Assuring me, they will calm me

Inviting me into their chest

I am closing my eyes, oh how can I?

My eye balls are floating in the

Universe, finding eternity...

 

I am falling...

With nothing but my 7 pounds heart

The only thing left with me,

Letting the burning sulfur to claim my soul.

 

 




Edited by preity_d - 24 April 2013 at 5:36am

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
omg preeto wt a poemClap

hayeee tu inni talented kese heiCrymeko bhi bana deEmbarrassed

mere talent ka khazanaHug

love u n loved ur poemClap

its just mindblowing awesumm supa fab Star

hv to say u r a god gifted gal yrEmbarrassed



Edited by ashishi - 24 April 2013 at 5:29am

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:28am | IP Logged
awesum poem priety...Clap...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashishi

omg preeto wt a poemClap   Thank you

hayeee tu inni talented kese heiCrymeko bhi bana deEmbarrassed 
mere talent ka khazanaHug 
all are my real feelings, nothing related to talent WinkOuch
 

love u n loved ur poemClap  I am happy Smile

its just mindblowing awesumm supa fab Star  zyaada ho raha hain Tongue

hv to say u r a god gifted gal yrEmbarrassed  You are a God gifted girl, I never seen a inno like you...love u loads Embarrassed



Edited by preity_d - 24 April 2013 at 5:42am

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Originally posted by rabzonedge

awesum poem priety...Clap...
Thanks Tammy Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by ashishi

omg preeto wt a poemClap   Thank you love uTongue

hayeee tu inni talented kese heiCrymeko bhi bana deEmbarrassed 
mere talent ka khazanaHug 
all are my real feelings, nothing related to talent WinkOuch oh ohEmbarrassed
 

love u n loved ur poemClap  I am happy Smileme tooBig smile

its just mindblowing awesumm supa fab Star  zyaada ho raha hain Tongueji nahi still kam heiTongue

hv to say u r a god gifted gal yrEmbarrassed  You are a God gifted girl, I never seen a inno like you...love u loads Embarrassedhahaha really thankuROFLROFL

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 9:41am | IP Logged
amazing sueperb awesome...ClapClapClap...u r really brilliant preity...the poem was amazing ...Thumbs Up...love it...Heart...u r great preity...u r really talented...StarStar...superb yaar..StarStar

Edited by yaminnthida - 24 April 2013 at 9:42am

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Preity girl its awesome. Clap

You are an amazing writer, I mean you really have a gift and you should surely explore this side of urs. Just awesome Star

Love u girl and I am lucky to know such a talented girl. Heart

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