Tu Hi Tu..Thread 2 Chap 6 pg 101 Apr 22 - Page 5

Originally posted by: saibanu

Congradulations on new thread 😃

thanks Sai..

I got up at 8 and read your chapter and you were right , after reading ..i was jumping on my bed like restless kitten ...I was so agitated , angry , hurt with Ashu's behaviour ... 😭😭

😆 i can imagine...thats why i didn't post it last night..just imagine what your parents would have thought of you jumping all over the bed at night...😆

 In Abhi and Armaan 's convo , Abhi tell "Aditi should have been ashamed not you armaan !!!" what does it mean ?? ...Wondering what happened exactly 

keep guessing and wondering...

As Armaan said , yes Nidhi changed a lot ...from happy chirpy girl to someone who mastered all tactics to hide her emotions and Ashu ...looks like he just want to hurt anyone who come on his way , he just want inflict that hurt which everyone gave him ...and Poor nidhi , she is the only one right now , who is getting complete blow of it...I just wish , he does not break her so much with his words that when time comes he cannot take it back ...

@ red..yes. she is the first one to get the first powerful punch of his...and Nidhi is strong...lets see who is stronger...Nidhi or Ashu...

Tiger! I never thought this day would come..you know! (her eyes turn soft and dreamy and she rubs her cheek over the pillow) but that didn't stop me from dreaming. I never had any hopes but could never control my dreams. And it was always you in them..always.

 This girl , she loved him without any expectation , gave herself completely to him ...she is putting up with his rude behavior silently , .i don't know till when she can put up with this '.!! Till when it is going to be like this ???😕

 

Whatever happened between them ...it was plain Lust , there wasn't any love from Ashu's side ...As nidhi tell in the end ..yes indeed he was like her husband and she was his wife all through it ..and nothing else ...and what is the need  to be so sarcastic 24*7 , I am sorry ...i am just angry with this Ashu, his comment after make out session ..nearly killed me ...poor nidhi, he is hurting her 'making her feel so guilty , for one stupid mistake of hers which she committed 10 yrs back...does she really deserve this ?? I doubt...!!

well...do we all get what we deserve?? justly or unjustly in life??

In whole chapter, I was searching for a glimpse of tiger but I found nowhere..All I found was this Ashu ...who is so bitter and ruthless...I don't know where it will take them !!

Tiger is sleeping..😆

But My heart is on fire 😭😭

Fantastic writing👏👏👏''.you are leaving us in so many cross road and we just not sure which road you are going to take next?? 'I am all curious, desperate for next part '.Please bring it on 😃

thank you Sai...

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Edited by mudraswathi - 11 years ago

Congrats for second thread sujathadi. Thank u for PM and I have PMed u combined reviews for all 4 chapters. Many more things are yet left to be written -- will write to u asap.

After chap-4 ppl may tell u that Ashu is a sadist, but in my honest opinion, he is a sadomasochist. There are many layers to his character here as well, have written all these in details in PM.

Cannot resist putting 1 thing here: Ashu is snapping at Nidhi at every possible chance, tries to hurt and humiliate her with his physicality, words as well as thoughts but considering that this murder mystery is still unsolved even after a decade; he should truly be thankful to Nidhi. As Armaan-Abhi discussed, Nidhi is truly a gutsy girl. Had she not shown courage that day and told everything not only to her parents or to Ashu and his family but to the police as well; Ashuji still would have been "chakki peesing" in jail. Aditi's murder was a high-profile case + industrialist's daughter was unwed preggy and then murdered, so tons of gossiping as well -- But Nidhi revealed the truth, accepted her fault bravely and saved her love Ashu. I cannot dare imagine how her and her parents' image must have got tarnished thereafter. 😭 Nidhi must have understood then that publicly acknowledging her mistake would only bring stains to her and her family's reputations but still she never cared for that social image thingy and went ahead to save her love. Even today also, notwithstanding how rudely Ashu treats her and his vengeance, she has accepted this marriage and is surrendering to Ashu and also defending him in front of Anji. I feel sorry for Ashu and Nidhi both but  acco. to me, Nidhi deserves at least one chance from this haughty Ashuji.

Goes w/o saying that I need next chap asap but still telling you: "I WANT NEXT CHAPTER ASAP Sujathadi"😳

tc!! Have a great day ahead. May ur creativity flow to its fullest and u give us next chapter asap.😛😃

Edited by ttrocks - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchshah

Good Morn...Congrats on the brand new thread...👏here's hoping many new threads to this story!!!!!

Ok...begining for the very first scene...Armaan n Abhi conversatioon gives us a hint regarding Aditi's involvement in getting physical with Armaan(prob too soon to comment) also, Armaan's guilt gut-wrenching...Mallika is exactly same where she was in the opening episodes of the tv series but this time its Armaan n not Ashu!!!!

So, Armaan too has internalised pain n regret just like Nidhi...him not opening to any discussion of past!

hiramana kaka seems to be cast as a guarding force in the new Mathur household

kind of...Mathur household or Nidhi...left to see...

😃 i think he'll bring a lot of peace n conflict resolution in Nidhi n Ashu's routine life!

Pained to see Yog's shoock on Nidhi not having her husband's contact details!

coming to the elephant in the room...their bedroom activity!

😆 elephant in the room...lovely way of putting it...it has indeed dominated the whole chapter

 I think everyone will develop a varying amount of hatred for Ashu post this scene...n me not wanting to defend his act at all. This might be classified as marital rape, save if Nidhi had not participated willingly n not responded by her touch, her calling out his name, etc. But what disappointed me the most...was absence of Ashutosh's self-talk in this scenario (earlier updates showed his self talk on Nidhi will refuse marriage, or on her looks when she visits VM) but again this shows, that while the entire duration...his conscience was dead... conscience is which enables one to have a self-tallk or introspection...Ashu sold it to the devil!!!😡

@red...you really think so??

nidhi's feeling post intercourse(surely cant b defined as love making) was heart-breaking...her feeling of being used...Ashu not even considering her worthy to touch her or embrace her...i think no woman howsoever evil(as mallika in tv series) deserves this treatment, specially when a virgin!!!

Sujaji...not take this criticism...as your criticism..infact its the opposite...your intended message is put across...in hatred for the act; makes u a versatile writer!!😃

thank you...and yes, i do take it as an achievement...and i do understand what you are trying to say Ruchira..don't worry about offending me with your comments...

also, i totally condemn Ashu's public insult of Mr. n Mrs. Verma...i m sure his parents would have not appreciated this behavour of his...what happend 10 yrs bk , reflects only on their parenting, not on thier entire characters...(plus i am sure, Ashu n his parents would have not suffered a public shame for the incident...as compared to the Verma's...after all he was a man!!!)

oh...this reminds me...wonder if Ashu used any protection or Nidhi's left to it on her own...i am sure this is not a healthy environment for a child to come into life.

Thanks for PM!!! need to read it once more...

@red...uh huh..very valid question...not going to answer that now though...you are most welcome and thank YOU for the review