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Thread no.3 !!!! Yayy !!

[:D/]   Party

Congratulations ... Hug

This is for many more to come...
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Avi I love you for this Dedication my dearest Angel Hug
 
Coming to the update, I guess I have already told you that I like this style pf writing where in each part we get a sneak peak into the other characters of the story.
 
Adi-pinky... south meets north love story reminded me of two states only with a Avi-style tadka... LOL
Adi's dialogue of how the whole Indian map can be represented by them with Rosgolla & VadaPav, had me grinning ... I love Vada pav, its lifeline here in Mumbai. Big smile
 
Loved this sweet si love story with many hiccupps in between, right from the man needing some guts & the girl needing to just let her see through her relations... Clap Great way of introducing the characters. The convo which was one sided... was very well worded & combined that the other sided talks could be easily understood. This looks easy biut when you must've tried putting words to it & actually excuting it, it must have taken a hell lot of efforts.. kudos to you for it. Clap
 
Maan & Geet ... What I'm guessing is Geet couldn't come to meet Maan on his last day, farewell day to see him off. She must've gone to HP for her family issues & couldn't come. While he felt she on purpose didn't come or else he wanted some answers form her on this party, with Pinky's info of problems on that day while traveling he had hope coming back which his misunderstanding ruined all in the prologue. ... Now I can keep guessing but will wait for you to present it all in your style. I'm sure you've planned ity in much better way. Smile
 
Sujal... Embarrassed Liked his brotherly concern & love for Pinky. Guessing he too has issues in his married life. I agree with his POV as Adi needs to stand up for his love & declare it out in the open.
 
Liked how so many Love stories are being brought together along with all running on same plane prallely. Big smile
 
Next is my fav... second leads... Dev-Tara... Embarrassed
 
Waiting for more... Smile


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