Okay, I finally had time to read it properly!:)And two words about your os, Absolutely Beautiful! 😳
I loved everything about it, it was just so realistic! I could just picture all of this happening in my head. Honestly, I'm not the biggest viya fan but after reading this, I really want a scene like this where kiya just takes it all out. First it was ranveer who she just used to take out all her baggage with, but this time even he has his emotional baggage that he has to deal with so talking to avi about it was the perfect outlet! Such a great idea!
I also loved how you captured kiya's emotions! Such perfection in portraying her emotions. You really do understand her character so well, and it showed in your os. I loved everything she said about the situation, it was all so true and her helplessness showed. I especially liked that particular part where she said how ranveer being her good friend, took her out to enjoy herself away from her sister and her mother but instead what she just gave him was pain, even though it was indirect, she still blamed herself. I absolutely loved that part, I really didn't think of that connection before when she was blaming herself but It completely makes sense when you think about it! Brilliant job in making that connection.
I know I am writing so much, but that just means I loved your os just that much more. And honestly, I'm just loving avi with everyone, with panchi, with kiya and I absolutely love his sibling bond with avantika. He just has that calm and patient demeanor and it's just so attractive. It's like he has layers to be unfolded. It's like he's emotionally trapped and needs to be released..lol..maybe, I'm just reading too much into his character because I like him so much..
But Amazing, amazing os! 😃
Edited by coolpixie - 11 years ago
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