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 Don't know how it had come out Ouch 
 Chapter 24
 

                                                            Sumitra, seeing that the maid was going to give a very torn old lehanga of meera for the girl, stopped the maid 'I will give her food , u go n sleep' 'ji mailkin' said the maid …………..sumitra smiled weakly ………….malkin! ………she went to her room n took out her old , but a nice, beautiful sari from the cupboard…………..she wondered why she was giving her sari to a total stranger , her hands caressing the silk ……she hadn't even seen her face……… she crossed the hall, slowly, carefully , as she was seldom out of the corridor …………….. she knocked on Pratigya's door…………'go away! I am not hungry' called out Pratigya, angry……………… 'don't be so stubborn beti, eat something…………….u will feel better…………….' Said sumitra, her tone caring………………. Pratigya looked up, the voice soothing her n she got up n opened the door…………

                               

                                                 Sumitra got in, her eyes on Pratigya, smiling affectionately…………… Pratigya gazed into the sunken eyes n felt relaxed ……………. Sumitra looked at pratigya, thinking that she is beautiful………. She placed the thali on a small table near the cot n came near Pratigya, taking her arm n leading her to the cot, as she said 'oh, u r beautiful……………but these dirty clothes needs to go………….. have a bath, freshen up ……..n wear this sari…………' Pratigya looked at Sumitra……………. She didn't look like a common maid, her face was way too graceful ………………'I…. I don't know how to…….' 'Wear a sari?' smiled sumitra………….'don't worry, I will help…………. Go , have a quick bath n come back…. I will wait here……………..' she said indicating the attached bathroom…………… Pratigya was reminded of her mother n her eyes filled with tears again……………… sumitra, correctly deciphering her state of mind, ran her fragile fingers through pratigya's hair, said 'don't waste time………its already midnight…. Have a good night's sleep……….. tmw u will meet ur mother n she won't like to see u all tired ………..' Pratigya smiled wholeheartedly …...

                           

                                                   After she finished her bath, n put on sumitra's sari n blouse , which was a bit loose , sumitra admired pratigya……………….. she looked nothing less than gorgeous n outright ravishing…………..not to mention beautiful………………. Sumitra wished , as she slowly caressed Pratigya's hair if she ever could get an opportunity to get her son's bride ready for him……………… she sighed, tears in her eyes…………………….. Pratigya gazed at sumitra , feeling odd………………. She was feeling as though she shared a deep bond with the woman in front of her……………….she will surely miss this woman, once she is out of this house…………………. And his eyes!... no! what is she thinking!!!

                                               'don't u want to take a look at urself………?…' sumitra asked pleasantly , steering her to a nearby mirror………Pratigya looked at her reflection n had to admit that she looked different , may be beautiful……. She was never bothered about it... but as she looked at herself in the mirror she found herself wishing to see herself reflected in his eyes………she could almost feel his eyes on her , looking at her with desire………..…she shuddered, jolting... what's happening to her? She had vowed not to let any man touch her n felt revulsion when most men looked at her  , but here she was fantasising about a man's eyes on her!...she looked away from her reflection , disgusted at herself….   ..'now , eat….. n then sleep soundly……………' sumitra whispered lovingly indicating pratigya to sit, not noticing her face…………….

                                               Pratigya started eating, smiling at sumitra in gratitude………………. Who is this woman? She thought….……… looks like she has been here for some time…………. May be she knows about the malkin of this house…………… curiosity got better of her n Pratigya asked, after finishing her dinner 'ermmm….do u know ….. I mean about his mother?...er…don't mistake me, but he seemed disturbed  when……………' she trailed off………………… Sumitra who had got up with the plates n glass , kept turning , her back to Pratigya,her voice sad 'yeah, his……his mother killed her MIL n tried to kill his father , killing his father's best friend in the process , when he was just 4 yrs old………………' n went out of the room, trying not to cry………………….. Pratigya sat, shocked n cursed herself why she had to ask………………no wonder he was livid at the mention of his mother……she felt bad for mentioning his mother……… she slowly leaned back on the bed, looking up at the ceiling…………. Wishing for sleep to come………. But a certain angry pair of eyes, which slowly turned into lustful n back to angry gaze n then filling with pain , n a pair of hands never let her sleep the whole night………………….

 
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                              Krishna , fidgeting, changing sides, cursed , agitated , as a stream of thick , long black hair kept intruding his sleep………….. not to mention , soft pink lips n red cheeks n neck tantalizingly beckoning him, to just devour them……………………… he shut his eyes tight to clear his mind of those bits n pieces of her n suddenly her full face, tear strained n angry loomed infront of him………………… he opened his eyes, feeling disturbed…………….. now he is having nightmares of her! He thought gritting his teeth………………. Inspite of himself , he tried to recall her face………………….. she was glaring at him……accusing him….. n he found that he wasn't liking it………………….. she was now looking at him anger…………… n he found that he was liking it……………….. she looked more beautiful when she was angry…………… he found himself reaching out n touch her cheek, so soft under his finger tips……………….. he found himself closing the distance between his n her's face, his eyes locked on to hers…………….. he had a mad urge to devour her lips, which were parted in fear n yet anticipation…….n desire…………….. he wrenched himself from her face, sitting up in his bed………. Him, Krishna singh Thakur , kiss a ……a thing………….. a girl………….. ! what's happening to him……….. he thought back of all the instances where he had felt that mad urge to touch n caress her , to kiss her…… he shook his head in anger n flopped down on the bed………….. waiting for sleep to come………………

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                                                       By morning , if it was possible, Krishna was even more angry………………. He hadn't slept a sec last night n he had changed his mind about punishing her n making her stay for one more day………… she needs to go……………… asap…………… or else he wasn't sure he could keep his part of bargain that he will return the hostage sans any damage………………. For he was sure that he wanted her…………. Wanted that particular girl…………………n if she is to stay there for one more moment , he might just devour her…………n that thought was making him even more angry……… why is she having such an effect on him!…, he had thought of humiliating her thoroughly before he let her go…… to take out his anger on her for having all kinds of ill effects on him……..………

                                he climbed down the stairs , telling himself to ignore her, in his loose shirt , top buttons undone ,  n pants, which he didn't bother to discard for the night  ………… it was 6 in the morning n the morning prayer had already started, Pratap performing pooja infront of the large Shiva idol next to the hall, sajjan next to him………………. Chandu , was on phone, n he came near krishna smiling 'Sharma's daughter is back………………. We could send her back now itself…….. let me call…' 'no!... I will call her……………..' Krishna said , suddenly the prospect of sending her away making him feel uneasy n angry…………….. he walked towards her room………………. Chandu sighed ……………

                Krishna took a deep breath before knocking on the door……………but the door wasn't closed n his strong knuckles opened the door in the first thrust ………….. he blinked……………. Pratigya was lying sprawled on the bed, her hair framing her face…………… her cheeks were a bit flushed , her bosom heaving slowly as she breathed (she was thinking, unconsciously, of his naughty hands at her back, where he had caressed her at the estate) , her one hand loose by her side n other over her head………….. the sari loose around her feminine form enhanced her beauty several folds……………….  Krishna , his hands automatically closing the door, stepped forward as if in a dream……………………… Every step brought him closer to his unwanted temptation but he was not able to stop himself………….

                                             her sari was drawn a bit above her ankle, giving him a full view of her beautiful, soft n clean left ankle……… desire flared in him like never before, his throat becoming suddenly dry, n he moistened his lips, his eyes lustfully scrutinizing her leg …………she should cover that delectable ankle with a payal, he mused , his fingers itching to caress  the soft skin of her foot n ankle n move further up , undoubtedly, his mouth pining to follow the path……… what!  Since when he started thinking about a girl's ornaments! N that too payal! …….. Payal!... n he actually thought of touching her leg! Not to mention kiss her there!  What's happening to him!…… Krishna closed his eyes, waiting for sense to prevail…….. he opened his eyes to find  that his fingers were already  inches from her leg, n his one knee was on the bed…………he wrenched his eyes from her leg, to move up, mentally kicking himself, his piercing eyes sweeping her feminine form, lingering on her curves……….   He watched her beautiful face , small strands of hair flying across her face………so beautiful…..so innocent…………so ravishing…….

 

                                                       Before he knew it, the fingers of his right hand had made contact with her ankle, relishing the feeling …………….. pratigya stirred, squirming sensuously , which was a sweet mistake…………… his eyes turned darker as he watched her body undulating on the bed n his fingers turned rough over her ankle, involuntarily …………….. Pratigya snapped open her eyes, gasping as she felt shivers pass up her body …………. Their eyes met, n for a moment neither of them moved, even an inch……………… she inhaled wildly at the emotion in his eyes n turned red as he moved his fingers up her ankle , sending jolts up her spine, his piercing gaze never leaving her eyes…………. Pratigya chocked out 'no!...don't…..!' , wrenching her leg from under his roving hand n scampered down the bed , through the opposite side of the bed, her eyes wide , startled, her hair fanning out behind her……………..

                                              Krishna's fierce gaze never left her, his now hooded eyes following her ,as he removed his knee from the bed n approached her , his gait predatory, to say the least…………….. what r u doing?! stop……..! .stop this instant ...she is a hostage...………, screamed his mind, but he just couldn't stop………….. Pratigya trembled , the lingering feel of his fingers down her ankle making her legs shake, as she stumbled backwards , her eyes locked on to his , so powerfully spellbinding that she just couldn't look away even as he was looking at her in the most blatantly sensual manner ……………. He pursued her to the wall , him taking a step forward n her taking a step backward , their eyes still locked ………run! Her mind screamed at her , but her body seemed to have a completely different mind of its own... she was actually liking the shiver which passed down her spine right then……

                                            Nearing her slowly, he got as close to her as possible without actually touching her, until his breath was toying with her, his face inches from hers... she started, feeling her back hit the wall , her breathing suddenly erratic... she could feel alarm n felt feverish n a curious flutter in her stomach, which she thought was bec of his eyes... she tried to back up against the wall as much as she could, her body rigid n tense, her one hand clutching the pallu of her sari n the other clutching at the wall for support...he was leaning over her now, so close , she could feel the heat radiating off his body...n she started sweating ...

                                  his form was now almost pressed to her , not actually touching her n she was enveloped  in the alluring fragrance of his incredible masculine scent , which , she realized with a jolt , was drugging her slowly... her breath sped up , as she inhaled wildly , her eyes unlocking from his, to move down his magnificent n prominent nose n down to his lips... his lips were red n wet , his mouth watering... a deep blush spread along her cheeks n her eyes wandered along his stubbly cheeks n prominent jaw ...what r u doing, Pratigya! U r staring at a man!...at him!... her eyes travelled further down , along his neck , his adam's apple pulsing in tune with his heartbeat , no... their heart beats!... for now she could hear their heartbeats loud n clear n fast...

                                                    krishna's eyes took in the red tinge along her cheeks, her soft lips ,  his mouth watering at the thought of tasting them... breathing heavily ,he placed his left hand on the wall , caging her along her right side... her eyes trembled n flickered to meet his, just after gazing down his half bare chest, adorned by chest hair n muscular collar visible through his unbuttoned shirt ... when she looked up at his eyes again , she shuddered , pulling her head back a bit as their noses brushed against each other, letting out a soft gasp, the blush in her cheeks receding down her neck n further down, shamelessly... their breaths mingled, each fanning against the other's lips ...

                                    Krishna lifted his free hand to touch her left hand, which was mashing n bunching up her pallu , his fingers coaxing her palm open, his eyes piercing into hers...what r u waiting for Pratigya? Push him off u n just run!... Pratigya gasped again, as Krishna entwined his fingers in hers, his mind a swirl... what r u doing Krishna? U r caressing a girl! ...  if u want her, just use her n throw her away! Why r u wasting time on trying to caress her fingers! ... why ?!... Krishna gazed at himself reflected in her eyes n felt a curious feeling... a kind of happiness he had never felt... Pratigya was feeling breathless...what r u doing pratigya? Just shove him off...he is touching u ...! what r u waiting for? For him to kiss u?!...just shove him off !....but as she saw herself reflected in his eyes, she felt beautiful , for the first time in her life...n she gazed at her eyes reflected in his, mesmerised ...His fingers moved ever so slightly over her arm, making tantalizing patterns over her now heated skin... her breathe hitched in her throat , still unable to unlock her eyes from his, their faces inches from each other...

                                               'What's ur name?' Krishna whispered, slowly tilting his head sideways, his nose drawing across her left jawline, towards her ear ...Why the hell is he asking her name?! Why do u even want to know her name? ...she tried to breathe normally , but it was impossible... if his hands felt fire n ice combined over her skin, it was nothing to how his warm breath felt against her red neck n his nose against her jaw...what was her name?...'eh?' she choked out , her brain dead, a buzz in her ears...'hmmm...ur name?' Krishna asked, his voice husky as he  inhaled her, sniffing across the area where her ear met her neck, his hand over her arm gripping her arm above her elbow , finally making full contact...'Pratigya!' she gasped out into his ear, twitching at the contact, her belly doing a somersault...

                                         Krishna was  aroused , to put it mildly ...her scent drugging him, Krishna withdrew his face from the right crook of her neck, his eyes meeting hers, his breathing erratic ...Pratigya shivered violently as she encountered his eyes...it was not lust! It was lust n much more...much deep... she felt , as she watched his eyes , n turned scarlet, fearful , that she was going to experience what the word 'devour' meant ... Why r u blushing?! Instead of pushing him away?... he is going to ...her every thought ended as she saw his eyes glint n her eyes widened in an unknown fear... ...he didn't ask permission...n he didn't stop... he drew her closer , his one hand gripping her waist like iron shackles , n his other hand glided around her waist n snaked around her petite form, pressing her now heated body to his ...chest to chest...hip to hip...no! stop Krishna! U were here to humiliate her! Instead what r u doing? ...

                                     he wasn't listening... his head had dived under her jaw , his mouth latching on to the junction where her right ear met her neck, his tongue darting out to lick the underside of her earlobe, his nose buried in her hair...she moaned, whether from shock or pleasure , she couldn't decipher, tingles shooting down her body, even as she felt herself tilting her head to grant him more access, her legs shaking, her heart pounding in her mouth...oh, what's happening? U have let him kiss u...oh what r u doing pratigya?...she felt a strange numbness, her body refusing to go her mind's way...his mouth n hands on her felt so right!...his strong male body against her felt so natural! ...

                                      her eyes fluttered close, her lips parting in a sensuous inaudible  sigh , as his hot mouth feasted on her neck, the way his tongue laving at her now heated skin , burning her more, making her dizzy...she felt his long unkempt but soft hair in her fingers, vaguely wondering when n how her hands got there ... If Krishna wanted anything to hammer one last nail in his screaming mind, it was her sensuous moan n the feeling of her fingers in his hair...it felt too good... too...right...!... it felt incredibly good not to think...as good as the feel of the soft , petite female body in his arms... he was liking what he was doing, suddenly it didn't matter that he was kissing a girl , all that mattered was he was liking her taste, her soft hot skin under his mouth n the way she was responding to his touch...n he wondered how she would taste in certain other delicious parts of her body...

                                      he was suddenly hard all over, all heated flesh n strong muscles... he practically burrowed into her neck, with a groan of desire, crushing her to the wall , his mouth running havoc along the right side of her neck, laving her neck  with sucking n nibbling kisses, his body pressing painfully into hers...his arousal pressing down her belly...n pratigya , gasping out ,startled  at first at his roughness, felt horrified n shocked , realizing what's happening,  kicked out instinctively, her hands pushing him away from her with all her might , her head clearing itself from the haze it went to, shouting  ' No!...get off me!'...

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Amazing update Dhanya,   ClapStar

Loved how they both were dreaming of each other and it was causing them to have a restless night.LOL

Your descriptive writing of their  interaction was sizzling and beautifully done,Day Dreaming
liked how P is also starting to notice K's physical attributes and K wanted to know her name.

I liked the interaction between Sumitra and P they both like each other, and I think P will help to mend the relationship between mother and son later on.

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Not able to really come out of the heat radiated Blushing when i read this chapter... Its too good, they r so very perfect... 
Thank u Dhans... great desp... loving each word..Hug

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Loved the way their inner feeling is showing

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Wow amazing diii!!!!!!!!!!Clap No words to express my feeling.
plz update soon waiting for it...Embarrassed

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Originally posted by rekrn

Amazing update Dhanya,   ClapStar

Loved how they both were dreaming of each other and it was causing them to have a restless night.LOL

Your descriptive writing of their  interaction was sizzling and beautifully done,Day Dreaming
liked how P is also starting to notice K's physical attributes and K wanted to know her name.

I liked the interaction between Sumitra and P they both like each other, and I think P will help to mend the relationship between mother and son later on.
 
   Thanks Rekha Big smile 

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Originally posted by babithaj

Not able to really come out of the heat radiated Blushing when i read this chapter... Its too good, they r so very perfect... 
Thank u Dhans... great desp... loving each word..Hug
 
 
 Thanks babitha Big smile 

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