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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 99)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Beutifully written , loved it a lot.
No words to explain what I felt with that kiss scene it was awesome.

Loved this Arnav and Khushi, you really have done justice to the scene.

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Before I came to NA, I had no clue what ice hockey was.  Bt since, it is my second favorite sport right after soccer.  So an ice hockey playing Arnav is an ultimate for me.  Just imagine him all sweaty, in his hockey gear after a game . . .ok now that I am done drooling, I must tell you that I loooved this update.  I think you captured the essence of Kushi as the highly optimistic girl who could not care less  about what she does not have and ever so grateful for what she has.  Arnav was a dream the way you described him.  The peaceful XMas eve setting was eerily beautiful, I could just imagine the festive decorations and the calmness of the night.  Perfect setting for something magical.  You captured all the goodness of Diwali and made it even better with a better turn of event than on the show.  Though I thoroughly enjoyed the hot, desire filled Jadoo Hai Nasha Hain, I absolutely hated the aftermath.  Not in yours, I love how they readily accept what was happening.  I almost regret that there will not be another part in this story.

I do think the Mracle on Ice was Awesome but I simply cannot resist to point that nothing beats my Canadian hockey teams, men or women . . . 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:30am | IP Logged
That was beautiful. No other words for it. Thanks for the PM and update soon..

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Awsum update

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Awesome os...

Thanks 4 d pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Loved it! 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Read both the stories by the two amazing writers. Both were brilliant. Loved them to the core. Thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged
that's was really really beautiful story

loved it

it's really cute and funny

and loved the part when arnav ask her about hockey that's was really funny

and loved the kiss scene

and khushi is definitely not a shy girl

that's was the first work of urs that i read it

and i really loved it

and i will surely read urs other work

thnxxx 4 this amazing story

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