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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 98)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
amazing...awesome...zabardast updte...
Continue soon..waiting for next tale...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Beautiful, amazing, awesome, super and sorry I dont know any other word right now! It was simply beautiful! I loved all your work but I think this your best for me anyway! Khushi feeling about Arnav was simple and sweet like a any girl will have when they are in love for first time but I did feel sorry for her that Arnav did see her at all but got know that he did see her, all the time but he had his reason to stay away ffom her!
And that kiss and what Khushi did in the end was Embarrassed. Keep up the good work and cant wait to read your second one!
I could see Arnav and khushi in front my eyes on that ice.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
superb.. simply amazing yaar
its so beautifully written that I can imagine every scene
eagerly waiting for the next tale...Big smile

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:45am | IP Logged
it was an awesome OS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:48am | IP Logged
That was wonderful. Absolutely loved it.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
well written..good...Smile

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:04am | IP Logged
I have never read any of your work before so I cant say if this is your best ever BUT let me tell you this...this story is one of the most refreshing tales of Arhi I have read recently!!! Loved it to bits!!! Awesome.

what I loved:

1. Khushi - a real "khushi" who is not just feigning happiness while lamenting inside but a girl who has always considered herself lucky...inspite of her life being a little more stifled than others of her age...cant help but adore her for that one trait! happy and content with the brighter side of things...honestly her optimism is this story is highly contagious and I am going to be positive all day ...at least todayLOL

2. Arnav - he is this perfect Harvard hottie!!!! the way you described him would make any woman of any age develop a tiny (??) crush on him...oh how i wish I was a 20 year old studying at Harvard now and had this hottie around to...to...to just ogle alright!!!

3. Harvard - The name spells charisma for me and I find myself attracted with devout enthusiasm to any story set in this backdrop!!

4. Ice Hockey - damn...never did I think I will develop a sudden interest to this game...but here I am now wanting to know everything about the game...

5. Tale in Red - whatte super take on the most watched video of Arhi!!!! you know what, i knew you wouldnt do it but still I was literally holding my breath till they actually kissed because for some weird reason I was scared you may leave it as "almost"...thank heavens you didnt do that...



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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Semanti, I loved it. Theek nahi, bahut aala hai. While reading it , I swera I was reminded of Eric Segal's Love Story. You know, intelligent middle class girl, rich intelligent ice-hockey jock plagued by family heritage. And you recreated the scene so beautifully. Although I loved the Diwali scene , what followed left a really bad taste in my mouth. I can deal with the disappointment of the almost kiss, but when he said you mean nothing to me, I have never hated Arnav more. At that point I hated him nearly as much as Shyam. But I'm so glad you re-wrote the whole thing. The cherry on top was her boldness. Here he was thinking she was painfully shy. Hahaa.
Juhi- we're waiting!

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