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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 97)

ShikhaKhushi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:54am | IP Logged
I think you just killed me with that! Pretty lethal huh! Kaash... har crush aisa hi hota... Wonderful, Semanti!!!!!!!

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jyothirockz IF-Rockerz

Joined: 19 September 2012
Posts: 8749

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Loved it...
Loved it...
Loved it...
Every part of the story n style of writing...all were amazing...
Tanks a lot for the PM

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Aanchal15 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 January 2011
Posts: 4107

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Thank you for penning down such a pulcritude!!
I could actually envision the whole scenario...and, I concur with is surely blissful,.
Khushi's positivity is something I is a rarity now-a-days...wish more people found joy, in the haves, rather than, the have nots...
The dichotomy of A&K's thoughts  was so realistic...the proximity of the other, affects their being...
You incorporated those scenes and, showcased it with novel revelations...and,Khushi's inner monologue are just like her...adorable and hilarious..and, what can I say about the suave Arnav...he had me floored..he metamorphosed from being a tutelary.. her knight on gleaming skates to the wonderful loverboy...and, Khushi's transmogrifying was no less...
This update left me with a sense of tranquility at the end...thank you once again, and looking forward to the next from Juhi..
P.S : Thanks Juhi, for dropping the PM...appreciate it..mammothly..and, looking forward to the next...
You guys are doing an amazing job, concocting stories with novel flavors...cannot thank you enuff!!!

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dreamymaya Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
wow..I had been thinking of this kiss scene today and tada! you wrote beautifully about it...great..lovely update..I fell in love with the tale! it was different setting and there was something very cute about it...really enjoyed reading it...

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deepti1906 Goldie

Joined: 11 June 2012
Posts: 1375

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:33am | IP Logged
awww it was so so so beautiful and lovely...HeartHeart
loved every single bit of it...Heart
and yaah i could relate to it to many extend except the fact that he was no Arnav Singh Raizafa...ofcourse... Day Dreaming

for me it's one of the most wonderful tales i've ever read...Smile

you guys are amazing...Big smile

will be waiting for the next... update soon...SmileSmile

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diyadivya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:36am | IP Logged
delightfull updt

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LondonChick IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 March 2012
Posts: 3026

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Wow this was more than amazing!
I saw a PM for this in the morning and I was extatic cos it meant I would have something awesome to read on my way home from uni.

That was amazing I could literally picture it perfectly.
Reminded me of my not so productive ice skating lesson huh if only mine had ended like this did...

That was amazing loved it
Thanks for the PM
God bless

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aquagal IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 July 2012
Posts: 8590

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:39am | IP Logged

I am hyperventilating right now... So please forgive me if I make no sense...
When Expel told the title I thought it was photo-shoot scene..Embarrassed
An awesome tribute to the first almost kiss... And you completed it and that too with such magic and the not so shy Khushi... Woohhhooo!!! I totally loved it...
Sportsman Arnav Singh Raizada - Ok I confess that I develop certain liking for guys who are involved in sports and this man who doesn't pay attention to any handkerchiefs thrown his way is super attractive, what I won't give to have him as my man!!! *sigh*
And here this man is complimented by the always happy and hard working Khushi who just has time for him even on the busiest days of her college.

PS: I am surprised how come I have not come across your work before. I will catch with your other works soon. Pinky promise :)

PPS: And the next story "A tale of rains and raindrops" Is it related to this scene Expel? TongueWink

Edited by aquagal - 17 April 2013 at 4:48am

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