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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 96)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Sweet beautiful and awesome tale...good job*claps* thnx fr providing us information about ice-hockey...didn't knew abt it...andd diwali scene transformed into skate scene with a complete kiss...humm... Waitng fr d nxt fabulous tale..

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:02am | IP Logged

Semanti, I don't think anything i write here would do justice to the incredible magic/ chemistry that i just read in your update.  

Don't think i have laughed so much and had dhak dhak in my heart at the same time reading any update. 
Well you have hilariously funny stories or you have the acidity in the heart wale tales but this one was a perfect mix of both these things.

While i was laughing my head off reading khushi's monologues and then immediately BANG the sexual tension/ chemistry portrayed by you gave me dhak dhak off the worst kinds...Smile

I love this parallel/alternate universe that you have created for these 2 magical people called arnav and khushi. 
I really don't think i have read a better tribute to the iconic scene of Diwali 2011...Almost all the ones that i have read (which are also good if i may say so) but most of them have the pool, payal and khushi in but obviously a red saree.

So it was refreshing to read that diwali made way for christmas,  pool made way for a skating rink, payal gave way to skates, arnav holding khushi's hand to cross the circle of diya gave way arnav holding khushi's hand and teaching her to skate, red saree giving way to a red jumper and the best part almost kiss making  WAY for just the perfect kiss which was like a cherry on top of a yummy looking cake. 

Loved this lucky khushi and this not so brooding arnav. 
Both juhi and you are doing a fab job of keeping us entertained. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this with us. 
Till the next tale of roads and raindrops...Day Dreaming Rabba veing 

Liza

P.S: so this is not one of your favourite scenes???? Really curious now to find out what is your most favourite scene in IPK?

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:08am | IP Logged
dhak dhak dhak dhak
awesome update
ice hockey was never this glamorousWink

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
*Turned into jelly*

Will update as soon as she returns to her former self. =P

Semanti you are doing a fabulous jobbb! :D

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Hey its a really really nice try.
 
plzzz write the second part if u can!!Hug

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
You left me with no words dear...
It was beautiful and magical..
I Loved it:)
Can we have a second part please

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:39am | IP Logged
My goodness..this was a one shot..iska to pura ff ban sakta hai..so many posibilities in the scenario..superbly written..no need to say u r an amazing writer..All the best..

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged
so nyc

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