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Posted: 11 years ago

That was wonderful. I loved that you reversed their lives essentially.

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ruby-red

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IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

omg, i loved that, absolutely brilliant.

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LooneyLuna

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IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Un-res'd on 122 - 81019678

They got married in the Shantivan vinery! Tumhe aise khayal aate kaise hai...?! Ajeeb ho tum! Par I farq you dammit!

S its your turn..now. A tale of unlikely allies! Mr. & Mrs. Smith flashbacks. AHHH. I am not sure if its evident, cant wait for monday. well my case tuesday.

Aajke 2000 words khatam. See you ladies on the next thread ;)

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neverbefore

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Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Brilliant story. Loved the twists you put in. I thought the first chapter was very clear...you set up the fact that all was not what it seemed and in the second chapter you revealed what it actually was...and it was genius!!

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ArSh23

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing story as usual! I loved it from beginning to end!! I love how there was a role reversal here with Khushi being a workaholic and a diabetic. That was really interesting. I loved their whole Nanital trip in the show, but I love your version even better! The story flowed so beautifully! It almost seemed like I could see it unfold in front of me. You and Semanti are so talented and I'm so glad you guys decided to do this. Can't wait to read the next story!

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774427

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved this story!!

The complete reversal of roles. Their characters.

How he has a sweet tooth and she is diabetic.

She is a workaholic and he is enjoying life.

How they both love their sisters'.

Loved Aman-Anjali.

I loved the rain hug. The road trip to Nainital was one of the funniest parts of the show..

Can't wait for Semanti's story...

Thanks for the PM..

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rhearuhi

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Goldie

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

very well written worth the wait...brilliant!!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

And I'm super late 😒

Kya start tha!👏

The effect was so good that when Khushi shivered...I too shivered with her😆

Divorce...you beautifully handled that issue as well; the opposite reactions of the two siblings to it.

Hot chocolate...sirf chocolate suna tha...par hot chocolate? Who doesn't love it?😳

And then spring flowers...the lie just so that he could be with her.. And I'll have to visit Napa valley soon😊

Ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si..kya gaana choose kiya!😃

Khushi diabetic?😲...now that was a curveball!

I'm short on time...will read and comment on part two later😊

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759281

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Posted: 11 years ago

Really Loved It...
You wrote It very Beautifully...

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cupcake1234

@cupcake1234

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Just read 'a terrace tale' part 1!

Phew,shyam was just Kushi's brother!That was quite a surprise!

Is Arnav an undercover cop?

You kick ass in the surprise element of the stories you write !

I kinda understood the opening hindi dialogue in the chapter as it was a major dialogue in IPK, but what does "dhadkanein" in the banner mean?

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