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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 94)

farha5556 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:26am | IP Logged
loved it,continue soon.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Awesome..:) loved it ..:) thnk u..:)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Hey semanti, mind blowing!! Beautifully written. Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Okay I feel like anytging I ssy will be injustice to what you wrote. Infact I'm mad that it ended. Omg the sexiest piece I ever read, simply!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
What a beautiful story !! Sort of cleared the gloom of the Diwali night poolside scene.
 
Thanks.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Semanti,

What a lovely portrayal of the the same scene in a completely different set up...absolutely loved it...and must say you have managed to create the same atmosphere ...After reading the story I literally had to go back and watch the diwali scene...

There was such a freshness to the story and I could almost see it happening in real..simply AWESOME...keep up with the great work...

Looking forward to Juhi's next now...


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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:14am | IP Logged
"A tale in red"...What a beautiful tale indeed...Clap
Semanti, Love u for this one...this is the first story of yours which I have read (I don't know why),
but u have hit it off...
I liked how u showed Khushi being realistic in restricting herself to Arnav's charms because of ?apparent differences...
I liked Arnav restricting himself from talking to Khushi because of ?apparent indifference from her part...but not for long... 
destiny herself couldn't restrict herself from making them one eventually...Smile
Loved it...
Take care and...
Keep going...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
A perfect finish to d most beautiful scene of arshi..
D way u showed khushi strong,bold,independent
aah it was such a delight to read..:)
d way u totaly changed d whole diwali scene it was fab..
When i first read d title i thot it 2 b sumthng related 2 d red saree photoshoot nd was wondering how u would change..
I was totaly wrong..
Thanq for dis beauty nd d complete kiss :)

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