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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 93)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Your stories i hve noted always have a thrill and suspense in them...great! tale was terrace was a great read!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Awww it was too cute

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Wom Sem...This was wonderful..Loved it..Khushi-Arnav talk about ice hockey..ROFL...Gosh...Such a bold Khushi while kissing :-D hehe..Happy that they got to kiss eachother..Lol...
Love
Aami

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:11am | IP Logged
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Speechless thats I am.. I don't know what to say but I am so happy that I got to read this.Thanks to Juhi for her pm.
Not even single word nor sentence is there that I didn't like it. Something related somewhere we can relate...
From where its start about Khushi how lucky and fortunate and she is so happy in her life. Only one thing disturbed that is her crush. 
Why now? why him? what was she to do now?  I thought him from where it came?? 
Arnav ofcourse with silver spoon but not exactly happy as everyone thinks because somewhere he was tied in his reputation.
Actually he was also noticed her and he wants to talk to her also... happiness that was made him notice her.
Ice skating thats new game for Arnav. Agree with Chaitu (Eccentrica) on this..
the way he made her comfort and teach her skating .
Famous Arnav by look and his wealth
Hardworking /khushi Clap
If I started to point my favorite I have to copy paste whole chapter.Its something above all ...
I love it.

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
beautifully written...
i wanted that kiss 2 get completed n here u gave that...
superb writing...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Semanti, you are one of those rare writers who makes even a description interesting to read. 
This is one of the finest pieces I ever read. 
You have described so well the case of unrequited love one suffers from at this age. The way she looks at him from a distance, how dhe goes to watch his games without knowing a thing about Ice Hockey. Though happily in Khushi's case it was not unrequited. 
Loved your take on the payal scene. Beautiful. 
Also loved how you described the way Khushi slips as soon as she puts a foot on the ice. Happens to all novices, which is why I never want to try it. Don't want to make a fool of myself, specially as I don't have Arnav to help me. 
And then came the kissing scene. Beautifully written. I had goosebumps reading it. 
Khushi got her Christmas gift. 

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Manisha. Goldie
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:24am | IP Logged

firstly juhi thank u so much for introducing semanti...

semanti I take a bow...every word described so much...so for me this was much more than 5000 words...
 
I just loved the fact that 3/4 of the story was covered without any dialogues...it was a beautiful description of their background, preferences, priorities, emotions and inhibitions...and off course their silent monologues...the witty monolgues when they were skating were so expressive and I could relate it with myself coz most of my conversations with myself are funny and stupid...
 
needless to say your adaptation of the Diwali sequence was outstanding..thank u for completing the kiss...it reminds me of the fact that yeh sirf FF ki duniya me hota hai...so as khushi says FF ki duniya me rehna hi acha hai semati ji kyunki IPK ke duniya me sirf sapne toot tey hai...
 
juhi ji ab aap ki baari...its just getting better..loving it...
 
and all the comments on pg 1 are also so wonderful...
 
 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Wonderfully written! 

Keep it up! :D

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