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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 92)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:39am | IP Logged


A somersault take on famous/infamous red tinged Diwali kiss. Very nicely written.
 
Subtle connections to the scene like her RED sweatshirt and him tying her skates properly, made this piece endearing.

And speaking of endearing, both Arnav and Khushi were cute to the hilt in this story. Very normal and very human. Their reactions, the reasons that attracted them to each other (specially Arnav's) and the way they handled the kiss was quite realistic. Not to forget beautiful too :)


Are you a sport enthusiast? You had quite some details penned down there about different college teams and the game itself!

Loved it! Shall wait for more from you :)



 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:39am | IP Logged
This is definitely one of the most fulfilling and adorable OSs I've ever had the good fortune to read till date... And it covered all aspects very nicely.
The Diwali scene on the show was really charged, but the outcome, as you said, was heart-wrenching...
Glad that this Arnav didn't go down that path of being a jerk (Well, he had no reason to either) and rather was really a charmer.
And this storyline, of one's crushes crushing her (/his) heart - is so common, that it makes it easy to relate... But glad that Khushi's feelings were returned.
They make one hell of a sweet couple!

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
It  was Super Awesome

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Wow what a wonderful romantic piece ...firrst crush or may be love

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged
A tale in red is an excellent story..
It's quite the arhi tale told in a different setting... Told from Khushis point of view delightful reading... ClapClap

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Beautiful :)

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