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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 90)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
so sweet

they noticed each other but thought that the other was not interested

ah they found out differently

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Beautiful setting - university campus - ice rink -  Arnav and Khushi both at par studying at a very prestigious university - more than anything I absolutely adore this spunky Khushi!!
 
I am currently discovering your previous writings and to say I am hooked would be an understatement. This tale in red only goes to confirm or should I say affirm that you are a writer hors-pair who has a play with words especially in describing and displaying emotions which is truly amazing.
 
Perhaps the only regret for me  is that I think the story at the end deserved a short paragraph taking a leap into their lives a few years later .
 
Otherwise a big big Thumbs Up from me. Keep up the good work and looking forward to your next tale and yes so glad that RED  was the theme of the story and the Diwali scene the inspiration!!
 
Ps - thanks for adding on your e-mail list - I did receive the notification for this update


Edited by Amanram - 16 April 2013 at 11:58pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:53pm | IP Logged

Beautiful Day Dreaming

Loved it.Heart

There is always something new in your stories.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
THE AUTUMN SCENE. 

just btw, again.  

Expel & I phangirled over it. 

Then she said - "It is so you!" 

And finally it clicked after reading those OS's yesterday..I realise this is what I like about your writing the most. These effortlessly simple scenes. 

ps. this really required a special post, no spam. 

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Tere hath mujaheddin de de thakur. I can't understand if the magic is in your hands or brain. I was smiling throughout the update. It was so real, so adorable and so want-to-have-this-experience-at least-once in a lifetime- kind of feeling. And yes, I have never liked the almost kiss and the aftermath. What a beautiful collation between Payal and skates?

Expel, who have been spared by the perils of unrequited crush? Do you both even have an idea what immense joy you both bestow on us, readers, with such wonderful Arshi stories?

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:02am | IP Logged
anything that am gonna say will be an understatement... was simply that brilliant...

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:06am | IP Logged
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u just created arshi magic on ice Wink
 
u thought i din't like it, ryt??LOLLOLLOL sorry for scaring u for a momentEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
well i just loved it
 
its brilliant
 
the red-almost kiss just became red- kiss n that too very beautifully
 
u r a genius yaar
 
loved every bit of it
 
can u plzzz plzzz plzzz take the pain of pm-ing me ur wrk index
 
would love to read them
 
coz i found a magic in the way u write

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:09am | IP Logged
omg omg in my wildest of dreams i have nevr imagined ASR as an hockey player Wink *blushing* Blushing
the sensuality just stormed my screenClap n it was an awesome interpretation of diwali scene Thumbs Up Thumbs Up
all d best n yeah i loved it Heart
love shruti Smile


Edited by kanzshona15 - 17 April 2013 at 12:10am

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