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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* (Page 87)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
There were so many great parts of the Diwali episode and I think you did such a great job at recapturing the good moments and omitting the bad.

Also, I liked the setting of your story and your descriptions of the campus during certain seasons and also how much details you gave, especially about the hockey team. As a follower of  NCAA sports, I appreciate how thorough you were with this update!

Can't wait to read more tales from you two!!

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
i told u im expecting fireworks and im not disappointed. i love khushi here. once she got over her shyness, she became so cute :)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
semanti..ohmygodohmygod...GOD..!!! that was awesome...Big smile i had this exciting energy all in me while reading this update till end..Tongue i swear to learn ice-hockey provided i get such a hot teacher to teach me...LOL
 
well done girl..and the length was a treat to read...Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Oh my god
That story had me on the edge of my seat the entire time
Such a long story
Just loved it

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Nice one.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
 Nothing short of brilliant...! I loved your payal  replacement...as delicate as the payals were in the original...rewriting it with skates...heavy,sturdy and sleek...very sexy..! In between the heat and lavender and musky vapors rising up...the smooth hard ice providing the cool factor...How awsome...!

And the fact that they kissed and Kushi did not shy away for nay reason but gave as much as she took..and totally rocked the kisss makes this even more awsome...! Am I rambling...well my brain is scrambled I think with kiss...going to get some ice to cool off.

I wonder if you have seen an ice hockey movie...called Breakaway I think...with Canadian Indians who have a passion for the game. They form a team with Sikh boys...a nice movie..so I could totally visualize everything...!

wonderful scene...hats off to you..Semanti...!








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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Edited comment on Page 85 Smile

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Res :)
Tere aur Semanti ke liye mujhe wapas aana hi Padaa;)

Unres;)
This story had Semanti written all over it.. I love your unique sense of humor girl, and honestly, urs and Expels updates are a sight for sore eyes... I'm off IF nowadays, but, but I'm compelled to come back just for this and of course, my lovely Juhi... ;) U'll two are, a force to be reckoned with... 
Yeh Khushi to maha tez nikli.. Arnav ko chance hi nahi diya, khud hi sab kuch kargayee!!!! But, I loved her outright flirtatious ways... 
Loved it, Semanti, but then, what's new??? I love everything u dish out for us to read;)


Edited by Denaid - 17 April 2013 at 7:54am

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